Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 3, 2026 |
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-->PONE-D-25-65128-->-->Multiplex Profiling of 16 Immune Checkpoints Identifies Novel Serum Biomarker Panels for Breast Cancer Detection and TNBC Stratification: A Case-Control Study-->-->PLOS One Dear Authors, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ================================== Thank you for submitting your manuscript entitled “Multiplex Profiling of 16 Immune Checkpoints Identifies Novel Serum Biomarker Panels for Breast Cancer Detection and TNBC Stratification: A Case-Control Study” to PLOS ONE. After careful evaluation of the manuscript and the reviewers’ comments, I believe that the study addresses an interesting and potentially important topic. However, several concerns were raised regarding the methodology, data analysis, and interpretation of the results. Therefore, substantial revisions are required before the manuscript can be considered further for publication. I invite you to revise your manuscript by carefully addressing all reviewer comments and providing a detailed, point-by-point response explaining how each concern has been addressed in the revised version. Please ensure that any changes made in the manuscript are clearly indicated. Once the revised manuscript is submitted, it will be evaluated again to determine whether the concerns have been satisfactorily resolved. Thank you for your interest in publishing with PLOS ONE, and I look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. ================================= Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 30 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If your ethics statement is written in any section besides the Methods, please delete it from any other section. 5. Please upload a copy of Figure 4, to which you refer in your text on page 9. If the figure is no longer to be included as part of the submission please remove all reference to it within the text. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: Wassim Y. Almawi and al took advantage of a multiplex imunoassay with 16 checkpoint imuno proteins of the serum to define a BC disgnostic signature as well as a TNBC classification signature. The paper is clear and well presented. The results points seven checkpoint proteins as a signature of BC and 8 checkpoint proteins where capable of distinguishing TNBC from non TNBC. Authors points in the discussion section that although these results are strong and important as biomarkers easy to detect they have not been validated in a larger and heterogeneous cohort. However there is a very important point that should be highlighted. These biomarkers have been identified in patients with a BC diagnostic and the important is to find biomarkers for early diagnosis in the population. Moreover biomarkers for early diagnosis must be easy to measure in routine blood tests and must have a very low coast. I recommend that authors add these comments in their discussion section. Reviewer #2: Summary The authors present a case control study evaluating 16 soluble immune checkpoint proteins in serum samples of 88 treatment naïve breast cancer (BC) patients and 49 healthy controls. Using a 16 plex MILLIPLEX panel, they examine differential expression, develop a diagnostic seven protein panel (AUC=0.89), identify an eight protein TNBC signature, and explore associations with chemotherapy response and short term PFS. The study claims novelty in being the first comprehensive serum based multiplex profiling of 16 checkpoint molecules for BC detection and TNBC stratification. Key scientific and conceptual strengths • Novelty and Scope: First study to evaluate a 16 checkpoint multiplex serum assay, expanding beyond the commonly studied PD 1/PD L1 and CTLA 4. This is indeed an underexplored area. • Minimally Invasive Diagnostic Potential: Serum biomarkers offer clear translational relevance, especially for early detection and TNBC stratification. • Rigorous Assay Validation: The authors provide extensive details on assay precision, linearity, CV thresholds, and quality control — unusually thorough for biomarker studies. • Statistical Breadth: Multiple analyses performed: ROC, logistic regression, PCA, Cox regression, correlation networks — giving a multidimensional view. • Clear identification of clinically relevant signatures • Seven-protein diagnostic panel • Eight-protein TNBC classifier • Associations with response and short term PFS Critical Issues which need to be addressed: Manuscript has a novelty component, however there are some areas where it needs improvement. Study Design Limitations 1. Cross-sectional design: Claims around prediction, treatment monitoring, and clinical utility are overstated given that all measurements are baseline. 2. Single-center, modest sample size: Although adequately powered for discovery, it is insufficient for firm conclusions regarding predictive biomarkers, especially for TNBC (n=23) and progression (14 events). 3. Short PFS follow-up (6 months): BC outcomes require longer follow-up; current survival conclusions are preliminary. Methodological and Analytical Issues 1. Controls are only “healthy”. It would be great to include other controls to justify Real-world diagnostic comparisons: • benign breast lesions • inflammatory conditions • autoimmune diseases These can alter soluble immune checkpoints, risking inflated specificity. 2. Potential pre-analytical variability not fully addressed: Despite QC efforts, the massive difference in LAG 3 concentrations between controls and patients raises questions. 3. Logistic regression and model generalizability • No external validation • No internal cross-validation (e.g., bootstrap, k fold) • Risk of model overfitting, especially with small TNBC numbers 4. ROC analyses lack reporting of confidence intervals for cut-offs and performance metrics. Interpretation Concerns 1. Causal language is used without justification E.g., authors imply clinical utility for monitoring, immune profiling, and treatment decisions. 2. Discussion overinterprets findings Some conclusions exceed evidence (e.g., recommending panels for early detection and TNBC management without validation). 3. Limited mechanistic insight The discussion heavily cites literature but does not integrate the biological meaning of the patterns observed (downregulated vs. upregulated ICs). The study is promising, innovative, and technically rigorous. However, several substantial issues must be addressed before it is suitable for publication. With robust revision, the manuscript could become acceptable for PLOS ONE. Major Comments: 1. Please temper claims about diagnostic/predictive clinical utility and emphasize the need for prospective validation. 2. Provide internal validation for logistic regression models to reduce risk of overfitting. 3. Re-examine LAG 3 and other extreme values to rule out technical artifacts. 4. Add FDR adjustments and report corrected p-values clearly. 5. Improve alignment among Figures/Tables—IDO and CD86 appear inconsistently. 6. Move mechanistic interpretations into Discussion. 7. Expand limitations (single center, modest sample, short follow up). Minor Comments: 1. Several typographical errors and grammar issues need polishing. 2. Simplify overly long sentences for clarity. 3. Add 95% CIs to AUCs, sensitivity, and specificity. 4. Clarify whether chemotherapy regimens were standardized across patients. 5. Consider supplementing with a flowchart showing sample selection and exclusions. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Dear Dr. Almawi, I hope you are doing well. I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript entitled “Multiplex Profiling of 16 Immune Checkpoints Identifies Novel Serum Biomarker Panels for Breast Cancer Detection and TNBC Stratification: A Case-Control Study” (Manuscript Number: PONE-D-25-65128R1) has been accepted for publication in PLOS ONE. Thank you for your submission. The manuscript will now proceed to the production stage, and you will be contacted regarding the next steps. Best regards, Dr. Rishi Kumar Jaiswal Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-25-65128R1 PLOS One Dear Dr. Almawi, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS One. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. You will receive an invoice from PLOS for your publication fee after your manuscript has reached the completed accept phase. If you receive an email requesting payment before acceptance or for any other service, this may be a phishing scheme. Learn how to identify phishing emails and protect your accounts at https://explore.plos.org/phishing. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Rishi Jaiswal Academic Editor PLOS One |
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