Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 24, 2025 |
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-->PONE-D-25-13144-->-->Realist process evaluation of a co-designed intervention to address the unmet information needs of people with dementia and their family carers-->-->PLOS ONE Dear Dr. De Poli, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 12 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information.--> Additional Editor Comments: This is a thoughtfully conducted and well-articulated realist process evaluation of a co-designed leaflet intervention to improve dementia care information delivery. The theoretical underpinnings, methodological rigor, and stakeholder engagement are major strengths. The manuscript contributes significantly to understanding information provision practices in real-world clinical settings. However, some aspects warrant further attention and clarification. Major Points 1) The manuscript is substantially long, especially in the Results and Discussion sections. While the data richness is appreciated, several points are repeated across sections (e.g., distinctions between blanket vs. targeted leaflet distribution). A more concise presentation would improve accessibility. Suggestion: Condense sub-sections by synthesising similar patterns and using summary tables where applicable. 2) The study is highly contextualised in the North-East England setting. The Discussion lacks reflection on how transferable the findings or intervention are to other contexts or systems. Suggestion: Include a subsection discussing what aspects of the intervention could be adapted to other settings and what contextual factors are essential for replication. 3) While the manuscript positions itself clearly as a process evaluation, some outcome data (even preliminary or proxy indicators) would enhance interpretability. For instance, were there any observed increases in service uptake via the leaflet? Suggestion: Consider briefly mentioning if any complementary outcome measures were collected or are planned. 4) The point about the leaflet lacking inclusivity for LGBTQ+ individuals and people on service borders is important but underexplored. Suggestion: Expand briefly on how future iterations of the leaflet might better address equity and intersectionality. 5) While the co-design approach is well described, its challenges, limitations, and power dynamics are under-discussed. Suggestion: Provide more critical reflection on the co-design process (e.g., representation, decision-making authority, tensions if any). Minor Points - Terminology Consistency: At times, terms like “leaflet,” “intervention,” and “tool” are used interchangeably. Consistent terminology would reduce reader confusion. - Figure/Table Callouts: Ensure that all figures/tables (especially Figure 1 and 2) are actually embedded and visually referenced in the manuscript. - Supplementary Material: Clarify in the main text what the supplementary material contains (e.g., StaRI checklist). - Typographical: A few typos and inconsistencies (e.g., missing prepositions, punctuation) throughout—suggest proofreading for polish. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review this valuable work. I would like to congratulate the author for conducting research on process evaluation of a co-designed intervention to address the unmet information needs of people with dementia and their family carers. The objective of this study is to perform realist process evaluation of an intervention co-designed to meet the information needs of people with dementia and their carers, implemented via Community Mental Health Services for Older People (CMHSOP) in the UK. The author has done a commendable job in writing the manuscript. The research is founded on a good theoretical framework using realist methodology, qualitative data with thematic analysis to provide valuable insights into how information provision works in practice. The strengths of this study are the author has used a Co-designed approach by developing interventions with stakeholders, including professionals and carers, and the use of multiple qualitative data sources (interviews, focus groups) across different time points adds depth and credibility. Moreover, the manuscript adherence to follows the StaRI checklist, which clearly explains the methods, codes, and findings. However, I would like to suggest that the author perform the following improvements to articulate the findings more effectively. It would strengthen the manuscript to include the final version of the information leaflet used in the intervention as a supplementary file. Providing this material would enhance transparency, allow readers to better understand the nature of the intervention, and support potential replication or adaptation in other settings. The research has qualitative focus, but even minimal quantitative indicators (e.g., how many leaflets were distributed, changes over time, number of clinics involved, patients reached) could enhance understanding of reach and adoption. Though some limitations were discussed in the discussion section, it is better to provide critical reflection on methodological limitations (e.g., potential selection bias, representativeness, sample bias, generalisability, and COVID-related constraints). Reviewer #2: Few feedback Clarify the extent to which people with dementia and carers contributed to the leaflet’s design. If their input was limited, acknowledge this as a limitation. Provide actionable steps for integrating the leaflet into care pathways (e.g., mandatory training for professionals, standardized updates via the Dementia Strategy Implementation Group) Acknowledge the single-site focus (North-East England) and homogeneous participant pool (predominantly NHS staff) as potential limitations. Explicitly state that this is a process evaluation; recommend future work to assess patient/carer outcomes (e.g., satisfaction, service utilization). ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Realist process evaluation of a co-designed intervention to address the unmet information needs of people with dementia and their family carers PONE-D-25-13144R1 Dear Dr. De Poli, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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In addition, the first and second paragraphs in the Introduction section each comprised a single sentence only. Please amend the issues as needed. Thank you. Kuo-Cherh Huang Academic Editor Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: The author has addressed all the concerns raised and provided reasonable rebuttals where appropriate. I have no further comments. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #1: Yes: Rahi Bikram Thapa ********** |
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