Peer Review History
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: The manuscript presents a comprehensive and technically detailed study on a dynamic defense framework for remote medical systems driven by large medical models. The topic is timely and highly relevant given the increasing reliance on telemedicine and the growing security threats faced by interconnected medical infrastructures. Overall, the work demonstrates strong technical depth, clear motivation, and significant practical relevance, and it makes a valuable contribution to the fields of medical network security and intelligent protection systems. The proposed multi-level dynamic defense architecture is well-structured and integrates advanced techniques such as reinforcement learning–based strategy optimization, blockchain consensus mechanisms, adaptive network protection, and hardware acceleration. The system design is coherent, and the closed-loop coordination between threat detection, defense decision-making, and resource scheduling is convincingly presented. The experimental evaluation is extensive, covering both simulated environments and real-world case studies, and the reported performance improvements (e.g., attack blocking rate, latency reduction, resource utilization, and system robustness) are impressive and well supported by quantitative results. The manuscript is generally well organized, and the figures, tables, and case analyses help illustrate the effectiveness and applicability of the proposed approach in realistic medical scenarios, including regional medical alliances and emergency ambulance systems. The discussion and conclusion appropriately summarize the contributions and outline meaningful directions for future work. That said, a few minor revisions would further strengthen the manuscript: 1. Clarity and language: Some sections would benefit from minor English-language polishing to improve readability and fluency. In particular, simplifying long sentences and ensuring consistent terminology (e.g., “medical big model,” “large medical model”) would enhance clarity. 2. Methodological clarification: While the technical framework is rich, brief intuitive explanations (in addition to mathematical formulations) for key components such as the threat scoring model, reinforcement learning strategy updates, and blockchain consensus integration would help readers from a broader audience better understand the design choices. 3. Reproducibility and comparison: The experimental section is thorough, but adding a short discussion on reproducibility (e.g., parameter sensitivity, computational overhead, or deployment constraints) and clarifying how baseline methods were selected would further improve transparency. 4. Limitations: Including a short paragraph explicitly discussing limitations (e.g., scalability to much larger networks, dependency on specialized hardware, or assumptions about network conditions) would provide a more balanced perspective. I did not identify any concerns regarding dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. Overall, this is a strong manuscript that requires only minor revisions before publication, and I recommend it positively after the authors address the points above. Reviewer #2: This manuscript proposes a comprehensive telemedicine security and infrastructure framework combining large-scale medical models, dynamic network defense, blockchain-based auditing, and hardware acceleration. While the topic is relevant and timely, the manuscript in its current form is not suitable for publication because the technical scope, experimental rigor, and evidentiary support do not meet the standards required for a scientific journal. 1. Scope and contribution are not well-defined: The paper attempts to address too many layers simultaneously such as medical AI, network security, reinforcement learning based defense, blockchain consensus, and FPGA acceleration, without clearly identifying a single primary research contribution. As a result, the manuscript reads more like a conceptual system proposal or white paper than a focused research study. For publication, the authors should substantially narrow the scope and clearly articulate one core technical contribution, with other components treated strictly as background or supporting context. 2. Claims substantially exceed the supporting evidence The manuscript reports large performance gains across multiple dimensions (e.g: DDoS blocking rates, zero-day detection latency, vulnerability repair cycle time, encryption throughput) and further links these results to improvements in clinical outcomes such as misdiagnosis rate and patient survival. These are very strong claims. However, the paper does not provide sufficient experimental design details, baselines, or statistical analysis to justify them. 3. Critical details required for replication are missing or underspecified such as datasets and traffic generation methods, attack models and validation, reinforcement learning formulation (state, action, reward, training regime), baseline systems under identical conditions, and evaluation protocols In its current form, the manuscript is not technically or scientifically adequate for publication. A viable revision would require a major restructuring: narrowing the scope to a single defensible contribution, removing unsupported clinical claims, providing a rigorous and reproducible experimental framework with appropriate statistical analysis, and substantially improving the clarity and tone of the writing. Reviewer #3: Major Comments Clarification of “Medical Big Models” Concept The manuscript repeatedly uses the term medical big models, but a precise and formal definition is missing. It is unclear whether this refers to large-scale foundation models, task-specific deep learning models, or federated medical AI systems. A clearer conceptual definition, preferably in the Introduction, would improve readability and avoid ambiguity. Novelty Compared to Existing Dynamic Defense Frameworks While the proposed system integrates reinforcement learning, blockchain, and hardware acceleration, the manuscript does not clearly articulate how this integration differs fundamentally from existing dynamic defense or adaptive security frameworks. A dedicated subsection comparing the proposed approach with closely related works would strengthen the novelty claim. Justification of Parameter Choices in Models and Algorithms Several critical parameters (e.g., weights in the threat scoring model, reinforcement learning hyperparameters, differential privacy budgets) appear to be empirically chosen. The manuscript would benefit from either a sensitivity analysis or a principled justification for these parameter selections. Scalability Analysis of Blockchain Consensus Mechanism The blockchain-based consensus mechanism is evaluated with a limited number of nodes. However, real-world medical ecosystems may involve hundreds or thousands of devices. A discussion or experiment addressing scalability limits, communication overhead, and fault tolerance under larger-scale deployments is needed. Generalizability Beyond the Presented Case Studies The evaluation focuses on two scenarios: a regional medical alliance and emergency ambulances. It remains unclear how well the proposed framework generalizes to other medical contexts such as home healthcare, wearable-only systems, or cross-border telemedicine platforms. This limitation should be discussed explicitly. Security Threat Model Formalization Although many attack types are simulated, the manuscript lacks a formal threat model that clearly defines adversary capabilities, assumptions, and constraints. A structured threat model would help readers better assess the completeness and rigor of the defense strategy. Reproducibility and Experimental Transparency The experimental environment is described in detail, but key implementation aspects—such as software frameworks, training duration, hardware configurations for learning models, and code availability—are missing. Providing these details or a reproducibility statement would significantly enhance scientific rigor. Causal Link Between Security Metrics and Clinical Outcomes Improvements in patient survival rate and misdiagnosis reduction are reported alongside security enhancements. However, the causal relationship between network security improvements and clinical outcomes is not rigorously justified. This link should be discussed more cautiously, with clear acknowledgment of confounding factors. Computational and Energy Overhead of the Full Stack Defense While individual optimizations are reported, the cumulative computational and energy cost of running all defense components simultaneously is not clearly quantified. A holistic overhead analysis would help assess feasibility in resource-constrained medical environments. Minor Comments Language and Grammar Consistency The manuscript contains occasional grammatical inconsistencies and awkward phrasing (e.g., verb tense shifts and article usage). A careful language polishing pass would improve clarity and professionalism. Figure and Table Referencing Some figures and tables are discussed only descriptively without explicit reference in the text, while others are referenced before being introduced. Ensuring consistent numbering and in-text citations would improve readability. Notation Consistency in Mathematical Formulations Several symbols (e.g., threat scores, weights, and timing variables) are reused across equations with slightly different meanings. A unified notation table would help avoid confusion. Abbreviation Definitions Certain abbreviations (e.g., SLA, PBFT, DPA) are used before being fully defined. All abbreviations should be defined at first appearance. Reference Formatting Uniformity Some references show minor inconsistencies in formatting (journal names, capitalization, or missing details). These should be aligned with the journal’s reference style. Data Availability Statement Alignment The data availability statement indicates that data are available upon reasonable request, which may conflict with the journal’s strict open data policies. This should be double-checked and, if necessary, clarified or revised. Reviewer #4: The manuscript offers a detailed and ambitious attempt to rethink network security in remote medical systems by moving away from static, rule-driven defenses toward a flexible, dynamically coordinated architecture. The authors begin by laying out the vulnerabilities that arise when large medical models and interconnected devices scale across institutions, emphasizing how traditional countermeasures struggle with fast-moving threats. They then introduce a multi-layer defense framework that combines distributed parameter storage, adversarial-robust model design, adaptive network protection, and hardware-accelerated cryptography. Of particular note is their effort to integrate these components into a single, coordinated system rather than treating them as isolated safeguards. The experimental section is extensive and grounded in realistic deployment scenarios, showing measurable gains in attack interception rates, latency stability, and resource efficiency. The manuscript’s contribution lies less in any single technique than in demonstrating how these elements can be aligned to support reliable, high-stakes clinical operations at scale. The authors suggested addressing the following comments and suggestions when preparing the revised version: = Abstract: The section needs to be redrafted to be self-contained, which means it has to clearly show the hypothesis, methodology, techniques and tools used, and the results obtained. = Keywords: Authors suggested updating the keywords by selecting more relevant terms. Keywords play an important role in the appearance of the manuscript in scholars' searches, which will give it more hits and more citations. = Introduction: The authors advised adding one more paragraph at the end of the section to show the organization of the rest of the paper. = Given the manuscript’s reliance on automated, self-adjusting defense mechanisms, is it realistic to assume that a medical network—where disruptions can directly affect patient care—can tolerate the level of experimentation and continual recalibration that such systems require? = Does the addition of blockchain consensus layers, distributed model storage, and hardware acceleration fundamentally strengthen the security posture, or does it create a more intricate system in which new potential points of failure emerge? = Are the simulated attack conditions representative enough to reflect the ingenuity and persistence of real-world attackers who target medical institutions? = Is the reinforcement-learning strategy presented here sufficiently transparent to allow reproducibility and meaningful comparison with other approaches? = What assumptions did the authors make during the simulation phase of this research work? If there is any. = The authors suggested going through the following references, and they MAY make use of them in updating the introduction and the related work sections: - Utku Kose, Omer Deperlioglu, Jafar Alzubi, Bogdan Patrut; “Deep Learning for Medical Decision Support Systems,” Springer; 2020 Edition; ISBN: 978-981-15-6324-9. - Utku Kose, Jafar Alzubi; “Deep Learning for Cancer Diagnosis”; Springer; 2021 Edition; ISBN: 978-981-15-6320-1. = How effectively does the manuscript distinguish improvements attributable to the dynamic defense framework from those arising simply from upgraded hardware or optimized network configurations? = Do the real-world case studies provide enough granularity to understand when the system struggles or requires manual correction? = Include a direct, side-by-side evaluation with established defensive systems—such as commercial intrusion detection tools or widely used federated learning–based security frameworks—to provide a clearer comparative foundation. = Incorporate a sensitivity or stress-testing analysis that examines how the system behaves under varying conditions—such as degraded network quality, fluctuating device loads, or more aggressive attack frequencies. = Conclusion: The conclusion should be abstracted, so authors need to consider redrafting it. = Authors need to confirm that all acronyms are defined before being used for the first time. = Authors need to confirm that all mathematical notations are defined when being used for the first time. = The authors suggested proofreading the manuscript after addressing all comments to avoid any typos, grammatical and lingual mistakes, and errors. = Authors are advised to make sure that the format of all references matches and complies with journal requirements and format. Reviewer #5: The topic is timely and relevant to secure remote medical systems, and the manuscript presents an ambitious integrated framework combining dynamic defense, intelligent decision-making, and system-level optimization. However, the current version needs revision to strengthen clarity, rigor, and reproducibility. 1. Clearly distinguish what is new compared with existing dynamic defense/zero-trust/security orchestration frameworks, and summarize contributions explicitly. 2. Define all baselines (“original system” and literature comparisons) with equivalent tuning and matched conditions to avoid unfair comparisons. 3. Provide complete experimental details (datasets/traffic generation, attack implementation, parameters, hardware/software specs, and evaluation protocol). 4. Formalize attacker capabilities, assumptions, and in-scope/out-of-scope attacks to align security claims with evidence. 5. Specify state/action/reward design, training procedure, convergence behavior, and include sensitivity analysis and ablations isolating RL’s effect. 6. Quantify the individual contribution of each module (threat scoring, RL scheduling, blockchain logging/consensus, hardware acceleration). 7. Explain why blockchain is necessary, report consensus/security assumptions, and quantify end-to-end overhead (latency, bandwidth, storage). 8. Use normalized metrics (throughput-per-watt, latency) and report true end-to-end system gains including offload overhead. 9. Clarify whether results are simulated or real deployment; avoid causal clinical outcome statements without a controlled study design. 10. Ensure the data availability statement is consistent and actionable; improve writing clarity, terminology consistency, and report variability (mean±std/CI) for key results. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Remote Medical System Driven by Medical Big Models: Dynamic Defense Model for Network Security Threats PONE-D-25-50491R2 Dear Dr. Hu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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The authors have demonstrated a thorough and thoughtful response to the feedback, significantly enhancing the quality, clarity, and rigor of the work. The revised version successfully addresses the concerns raised during the review process, including improvements in methodology, analysis, and presentation. The manuscript now meets the journal’s standards for originality, scholarly contribution, and technical soundness. I particularly appreciate the authors’ efforts in refining the structure and incorporating relevant literature, which has strengthened the overall impact and relevance of the study. I commend the authors for their dedication to enhancing their work and making valuable contributions to the academic community. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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