Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 9, 2025 |
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-->PONE-D-25-54592-->-->L-shaped relationship between hemoglobin glycation index and short-term mortality in patients with intracerebral hemorrhage: a retrospective cohort study-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. xu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 22 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: This study utilizes the Medical Information Mart for Intensive Care (MIMIC-IV) database to investigate the association between the Hemoglobin Glycation Index (HGI) and short-term mortality (30-day and 90-day) in 1,318 adult patients with intracerebral hemorrhage (ICH). The authors identified a non-linear L-shaped relationship between HGI and mortality. Specifically, the mortality risk increases significantly when HGI falls below certain thresholds (inflection points of 0.692 for 30-day mortality and 0.472 for 90-day mortality), while the risk plateaus once HGI exceeds these values. The study also reports that this predictive value is more pronounced in patients with diabetes. Focusing on HGI as a novel prognostic marker in ICH and identifying these non-linear thresholds provides a fresh perspective for clinical risk stratification. However, several concerns must be addressed to enhance the robustness of the study: Introduction 1. Updating References: References [3] and [4] are more than a decade old. I recommend citing the latest epidemiological data and clinical guidelines to emphasize the contemporary significance of this research. 2. Terminology (Lines 84-86): If the authors wish to emphasize that the utility of HGI in ICH has not yet been "investigated" or "explored," I suggest replacing "elucidated" with one of these more conventional terms. If prior research exists in this specific area, please ensure it is appropriately cited to clarify the unique contribution of this work. Methods 3. Selection Bias (Lines 112-114): The fact that 1,809 patients were excluded due to missing HbA1c measurements—a number higher than the final analysis cohort of 1,318—should be emphasized as a significant risk for selection bias. There is a high probability that the final cohort is skewed toward a population with higher interest in chronic disease management or those suspected of having glucose metabolism disorders. I strongly recommend providing comparative data on the baseline characteristics (e.g., age, severity) of the excluded versus included patients. Discussion 4. Impact of Stress Hyperglycemia (Lines 233-237): Acute stress in conditions like ICH triggers the release of catecholamines and cortisol, leading to transient hyperglycemia (stress-induced hyperglycemia). Since HGI is calculated as the difference between measured HbA1c and predicted HbA1c based on admission glucose, an acute rise in glucose can inflate the predicted value, thereby artifactually lowering the HGI. It remains unclear whether the higher mortality in the low-HGI group is due to HGI itself or if low HGI is simply a proxy for clinical severity (where more severe cases exhibit stronger stress responses). This needs to be addressed through further statistical adjustment or a more in-depth discussion. 5. Unadjusted Major Prognostic Factors (Lines 350-353): As acknowledged by the authors, the MIMIC-IV database lacks key ICH-specific prognostic factors such as hematoma volume, location, and expansion. If these factors correlate with HGI, the ability to evaluate HGI's independent predictive power is limited. Please consider whether it is possible to supplement this information for a subset of the sample to perform a sensitivity analysis. Reviewer #2: This retrospective cohort study investigates the prognostic value of the Hemoglobin Glycation Index (HGI) in 1,318 patients with acute intracerebral hemorrhage (ICH) using the MIMIC-IV database. The study identifies a non-linear, L-shaped relationship where lower HGI values correlate with increased 30-day and 90-day all-cause mortality. Strengths: Novelty: The application of HGI—a metric quantifying the discrepancy between measured HbA1c and levels expected from fasting plasma glucose—to ICH mortality is a novel and clinically relevant approach for early risk stratification. Methodological Rigor: The use of restricted cubic spline (RCS) analysis and hierarchical multivariate Cox regression models provides a robust statistical framework to account for multiple confounders. Clinical Utility: Identifying specific inflection points (0.692 for 30-day mortality and 0.472 for 90-day mortality) offers actionable data for clinical risk stratification. Depth of Analysis: The finding that HGI's predictive value is more pronounced in patients with diabetes adds significant depth to the study's conclusions. Minor Points for Revision Discussion of Confounding Factors: While the authors acknowledge that hematoma volume, location, and expansion were not available in the MIMIC database , the Discussion would benefit from a more detailed explanation of how the absence of these established ICH prognostic markers might impact the independent strength of the HGI association. Clarification of HGI Definition: In certain sections, the authors should ensure consistent clarity that HGI is the difference between observed and predicted HbA1c. Explicitly emphasizing that "lower HGI" reflects less non-enzymatic glycation than predicted by ambient glycemia would help the reader interpret the biological implications discussed, such as stress-induced hyperglycemia or anemia. Typographical Note: On page 8, line 57, there appears to be a minor grammatical omission: "risk. holds potential" should likely be revised to "risk and holds potential". ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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