Peer Review History
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-->PONE-D-25-25301-->-->When Matilda shows up: The double-edged impact of female researchers’ media visibility on the non-academic audience-->-->PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Agogué, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 22 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: This paper aims to assess whether increasing the presence of women in the media affects self-efficacy and perceived expertise among academic and non-academic audiences, as well as assessing the impact on graduate student career interests. Overall, this paper is technically sound. However, many of the conclusions are overreaching and the language should be tempered throughout. It is important to note that this was done in one specific context (management science) and the results should not be generalized to science or STEM more broadly. Similarly, one type of media representation (a newsletter) was examined. As such, this also should not be generalized to “media” more broadly. Finally, the authors use terms for sex (female) and gender (woman) interchangeably. I would recommend focusing the language on the paper on women- the social construct of gender is more relevant here than the biological sex of being female. My specific comments are below. Abstract • The first sentence uses ‘women,’ which indicates gender and ‘female’ which indicates sex. Please investigate how these terms are different and consider which is more appropriate for this study. I think that using terms that reflect gender is most important. People who appear as women have an impact on others who also identify as women. • It is unclear whether the gains (increased perceived expertise and decrease the gender gap for self-efficacy beliefs) is specific to the public, grads, or both. • Please include null results in the abstract as well. • Temper language to ensure that “management science” is not being generalized to “science” and that a “newsletter” is not be generalized to all “media. Section 1 • In section 2 it seems odd that the impact on an academic audience (graduate students) is not mentioned here given the sample focused on that population. • End of section 1: It seems a bit unusual to summarize the findings here. Section 2.2 • The word “refusing” seems strong here and perhaps an overstatement. “Decline” may be more appropriate. Section 2.3 • Section 2.3.1 The sentence that says that lower media visibility weakens careers, salaries, self-esteem and wellbeing is a bit too strong. I suggest rephrasing by adding “can” weaken. • 2.3.3: It is unclear what is meant by counter-stereotypical women in research. This implies that the woman herself is counterstreotypic. • Paragraph after H1 (pg 10) sentence in the middle of a paragraph abruptly cuts off. Section 3.1 • What is management science? Is this considered STEM? As a reviewer in the US, I was unfamiliar with this field and think many readers would appreciate a brief explanation and also what distinguishes it as a STEM field. • Typo near citation 121 • How were graduate students recruited specifically? What language was used in the recruitment for the study? How were participants incentivized? • In what ways were the participants told to interact with this newsletter? Presumably no lay person is going to randomly interact with a newsletter about management science. As such, how do you view this as an exercise that reflects lay people’s interaction with the media more broadly? • The paper should acknowledge the presence of gender nonbinary and gender queer individuals. The paper can acknowledge their existence in science while still focusing on gender binary categories. Relatedly, were participants given the option to identify as gender non-binary? Section 4 • The introduction should be framed with this experiment in mind. Currently, these experiments are largely absent from the intro. • I strongly disagree that “To what extent do you feel confident in your ability to express your opinion on a management issue” is reflective of perceived attractiveness of an academic career. Is this a previously validated scale to measure attractiveness of an academic career? I think this is a typo after looking at Table 1- this is a self-efficacy question. • Are business school graduates studying “management science”? • The claim that low media visibility of women makes academic carers less attractive to them than for men is incorrect because the experiment would suggest the attractiveness of a career for women is not dependent on representation (but it is for men). • I’m not sure it’s correct to say that other-gender role models can be counterproductive for men. Perhaps men have inflated self-efficacy and this helps calibrate it? Section 5.1 • A newsletter should not be extrapolated to represent “media.” As such many claims in the discussion are too strong such as, “confirming that media’s representation of the world has negative performance effects not just on academia but on society in general.” • Please temper all language in the discussion and do not generalize “management science” to science or STEM. Similarly, specify “newsletters” as opposed to “media.” Section 5.3 • The first paragraph of the conclusion should be labeled limitations. Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review this work, I found it very interesting and worthwhile. This manuscript addresses a timely and socially significant issue: the impact of female researchers’ media visibility on public perceptions and academic career aspirations. The authors employ two well-structured experimental studies to explore how gender representation in media influences perceived expertise, self-efficacy beliefs, and the attractiveness of academic careers. The paper is clearly written, well-organized, and grounded in relevant theoretical frameworks, including social role theory. The introduction is particularly comprehensive, offering a detailed review of the literature that effectively situates the study within broader academic and societal debates. However, there is an over-reliance on direct citations, which detracts from the authors’ own voice. Rephrasing some of these references in the authors’ own words would help clarify how each cited work supports the study’s rationale and hypotheses, and would better integrate the literature into the narrative. Additionally, the manuscript currently uses a mix of numerical and in-text citation styles, which should be standardized for consistency and clarity. While the experimental design is methodologically sound and I appreciated the rationale behind the choice of design and stimuli, the manuscript would benefit from more cautious use of causal language. Phrases suggesting that media visibility “increases” self-efficacy or “erodes” perceptions may overstate the findings, particularly given the complexity of the social and psychological processes involved. A more measured phrasing—such as “is associated with” or “may influence”—would better reflect the limitations of experimental inference in this context. Similarly, the formulation of Hypothesis 1 could be improved for clarity. The term “increase” is somewhat vague and would benefit from a more precise definition. It is not immediately clear whether the authors are referring to more positive perceptions, higher ratings on specific scales, or another outcome. As such, I recommend explicitly linking the hypothesis to the operationalized measures. In a similar vein, the conclusions drawn in the discussion section should be more carefully quantified. While the study provides valuable insights into perceptions and self-reported beliefs, it does not measure actual career advancement or long-term outcomes, which the text sometimes alludes to. As such, claims about the broader impact on academic career trajectories should be moderated to reflect the scope of the data. Acknowledging this limitation more explicitly would strengthen the credibility of the conclusions. Minor issues: There are also some minor issues with redundancy and structure. For instance, the phrase “between-subjects laboratory experiments” is repeated unnecessarily on page 12 and could be streamlined. Furthermore, while the results of Study 1 are clearly presented, the manuscript would benefit from a brief discussion section following this study. Summarizing the key findings and their implications before transitioning to Study 2 would help maintain narrative coherence and reinforce the significance of the results. In terms of statistical reporting, the manuscript currently reports p-values in threshold form (e.g., p < .05). Providing full p-values would enhance transparency and allow readers to better assess the strength of the evidence. Given the nuanced nature of the findings and the fact that one of the effects was not replicated across the 2 studies, I also encourage the authors to add effect sizes to their results. In summary, this manuscript makes a valuable contribution to the literature on gender, media, and science communication. With revisions to improve clarity, consistency, and interpretive caution, it has strong potential for publication. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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-->PONE-D-25-25301R1-->-->When Matilda shows up: The double-edged impact of women researchers’ media visibility-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Agogué, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 13 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Kind regards, Robin Haunschild Academic Editor PLOS One Journal Requirements: If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: I thank the authors for their revised work. I have two major concern that needs to be more thoroughly addressed before this manuscript should be considered for publication. (1) Management is not a natural science and yet much of the introduction draws from literature specific to the underrepresentation of women in science, STEM, and science communication (which often exclusively is specific to the natural sciences). Management is treated by the European Research Council within Social Sciences & Humanities. Similarly, the OECD/UNESCO FOS system classifies business and management as a social science. As such, the paper needs to be fully revised to reflect this important classification. For example, the title should specify “women researchers’ media visibility in the field of management.” Second, the term “scientific dissemination media” should be revised throughout to specify social science dissemination. Further, the introduction should be revised to focus only the representation of women in the social sciences or preferably business/management research and exclude STEM and the natural sciences. Many of the references the authors make, including many of the papers cited in Table 1, are specific to STEM or the natural sciences, which is extremely misleading for the reader. (2) The authors continue to conflate the non-academic audience and graduate student audience. The paper needs to be fully revised to reflect that this set of experiments examines the impact on social science researcher media visibility on two different audiences, one of which is non-academic and the other which is actively working within an academic system. Until these revisions are made, I cannot fully evaluate the appropriateness of the manuscript for publication- however I note some small suggestions below. Methods Please specify what the online panel of European market research institute is. Please provide descriptive demographics (e.g., gender, race/ethnicity, college generation status) of the participants for study I and study II. For Study 2 methods, please reiterate that HEC is a business school. Please be more specific in your language (e.g., page 18- suggesting weaker gender-science stereotypes among people who are more familiar with the academic world.). First, the reader does not know what gender stereotypes exist in management research specifically. And, I think the more important difference between the non-academic audience and the graduate student audience may be that the grad audience is familiar with the “academic world of management” and not the “academic world” broadly. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** -->7. 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