Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 29, 2025 |
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: 1. The article mentions that "multisensory integration" is the basis of physical perception, but does not clarify its specific mechanism. Could you provide a brief explanation, such as which brain regions or neural processes are involved? 2. The article points out that the role of the vestibular system in body characterization has clinical value, but does not mention the limitations of current related research. Are there any specific unresolved issues or disputes that need to be addressed in this study? 3. The rubber hand illusion (RHI) was used as a model for multi-sensory integration, but its connection with vestibular function was not developed. Should it be more clearly stated how RHI helps understand the impact of vestibular input on physical representations? 4. The article mentions that vestibular dysfunction is commonly seen in otolaryngology, but it does not specifically explain how the results of this study will directly guide diagnosis or rehabilitation. Could it supplement potential application scenarios (such as specific diseases or therapies)? 5. The text mentions that participants guessed the type of stimulus afterwards as a blinded test, but does not report the accuracy rate of the guess or the results of statistical analysis (such as chi-square test). It is suggested to supplement the validity data of the blinding method to verify whether the blinding method has been successfully implemented. 6. The equipment operator is aware of the stimulus allocation. Although they do not participate in the scoring, they may influence the participants' behavior through non-verbal cues. It is necessary to explain whether measures (such as standardizing operating procedures) have been taken to minimize this bias. 7. Safety monitoring uses a "structured list" to record adverse events, but does not provide specific items on the list or definition criteria for "moderate/severe" events. It is suggested that the content of the appendix list be included or that verified tools be cited. 8. The text mentions that "multiple variables deviate from normality" but does not list which variables or provide the P-values of the Shapiro-Wilk test. The normality test results of key variables need to be supplemented to support the selection of non-parametric tests. 9. Holm-Bonferroni correction was used, but the significance level after correction was not specified or how it was applied to specific comparisons. It is recommended to clearly define the correction steps and the final P-value threshold. 10. Spearman correlation analysis of change scores (such as ΔRHI and ΔSLS), but did not explain the theoretical basis or preassumptions for choosing these variables. It is necessary to briefly explain the rationality of the correlation analysis and its role in the research framework. Reviewer #2: It's an unique study and the role of GVS in vestibular stabilization is very clearly mentioned in this manuscript. I also think this opens the door for a multicenter study for the role of GVS in varied population of different geographical and racial populations to validate its applicability Reviewer #3: Comments:the time frame of the work many years before on 2019 .What is the cause of this delay? Rubber hand illusion test RHIT it is only written as abbreviation in the abstract, not the full name so you must put the full name in the abstract . Where is the inclusion criteria? Metronome and modius, please add more details about these two point. The correlation test better to be represented by figures as it will be more convenient. Reviewer #4: This study investigates how galvanic vestibular stimulation (GVS)—a mild electrical stimulation of the vestibular system—affects both: 1. Bodily ownership (the feeling that your body or a body part belongs to you), and 2. Postural control (balance),over time, in the same group of healthy participants. The key novelty is that previous studies usually examined either body ownership or balance separately—this paper tests both together and tracks time-dependent effects.This paper shows that vestibular stimulation temporarily disrupts static balance, but with longer exposure improves dynamic balance and strengthens the sense of body ownership through time-dependent multisensory reweightin This study provides solid experimental evidence that vestibular stimulation induces time-dependent plastic changes in both postural control and bodily self-consciousness, consistent with vestibulo-cerebellar and temporoparietal sensory reweighting mechanisms. While methodologically sound, its translational value remains limited by the use of healthy participants and low-resolution balance and embodiment metrics. 1. Add Objective Ownership Measures Consider incorporating objective indices of the Rubber Hand Illusion (e.g., proprioceptive drift, reach localization error, or physiological markers) to strengthen claims about multisensory body ownership beyond self-report. 2. Use Instrumented Posturography in Future Studies Single-Leg Stance and Fukuda tests are clinically useful but lack sensitivity for sensory reweighting. Future work should include force-platform–based center-of-pressure metrics (ML/AP sway, velocity, sway area). 3. Quantitatively Report Blinding Success Include the proportion of participants who correctly guessed sham vs active stimulation and their confidence ratings in the Results. 4. Temper Neuroanatomical Claims Statements referring to cerebellar vermis, flocculonodular lobe, TPJ, and velocity storage should be explicitly framed as theoretical inferences rather than direct findings. 5. Clarify the Role of Sham and Expectancy Effects Since sham significantly increased RHI and improved Fukuda performance, expectancy and learning effects should be more explicitly discussed, particularly for the 30-minute condition. 6. Avoid Overstating Rehabilitation Implications Emphasize that therapeutic potential remains speculative until validated in vestibular hypofunction, PPPD, stroke, or cerebellar populations. 7. Increase SLS Trial Numbers Use at least three trials per leg to improve reliability and reduce within-subject variability. 8. Include Repeated Baseline Measurements A second baseline session would help control for spontaneous variability and practice effects. 9. Clarify That Correlation Analyses Are Exploratory The ΔRHI–ΔFST correlations appear underpowered and should be clearly labeled as hypothesis-generating. 10. Standardize and Report GVS Parameters Across Studies Encourage consistent reporting of current density, waveform, electrode size, and montage to improve reproducibility across the field. Regarding the References it is surprising that the didn´t cite previous paper with same proposal (Ann N Y Acad Sci. 2011 Sep;1233:E1-7. doi: 10.1111/j.1749-6632.2011.06269.x. PMID: 22360772.) ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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-->PONE-D-25-54398R1-->-->Effects of Galvanic Vestibular Stimulation on Bodily Ownership and Postural Control: An Experimental Examination with Counterbalanced Randomization of Stimulus Conditions-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Ersin, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 08 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #4: Reference 25 (doi:10.1111/j.1749-6632.2011.06269.x) lists the authors incorrectly. The authors have conducted a thorough revision of their manuscript, addressing the reviewers’ comments and concerns in a satisfactory manner. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Effects of Galvanic Vestibular Stimulation on Bodily Ownership and Postural Control: An Experimental Examination with Counterbalanced Randomization of Stimulus Conditions PONE-D-25-54398R2 Dear Dr. Ersin, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Partly ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: This manuscript examines the time-dependent effects of galvanic vestibular stimulation (GVS) on bodily ownership and postural control using a within-subject, counterbalanced design. By combining measures of the Rubber Hand Illusion with both static and dynamic balance assessments, the study addresses an underexplored question regarding the concurrent modulation of perceptual and motor domains by vestibular input. The study is methodologically sound. The within-participant design, inclusion of a sham condition, counterbalancing of stimulation sessions, and assessor blinding are appropriate and strengthen internal validity. The statistical approach is adequate, with appropriate use of nonparametric tests and correction for multiple comparisons. The sample size is justified באמצעות a priori power analysis, and the results are clearly presented. The findings are coherent and contribute to the literature by suggesting time-dependent and task-specific effects of GVS, with a dissociation between static and dynamic balance and a delayed enhancement of bodily ownership. These results are consistent with current models of multisensory integration and sensory reweighting. Recommendations:1. Clarify interpretation of sham effects The increase in RHI scores in the sham condition warrants slightly more emphasis in the Discussion. It would be helpful to more explicitly frame early changes in bodily ownership as potentially influenced by expectancy or task-related factors, and to highlight that the difference at 60 minutes provides stronger evidence for a stimulation-specific effect. 2. Temper mechanistic language Some interpretations related to “sensory reweighting” and underlying neural mechanisms could be phrased more cautiously (e.g., “consistent with” rather than implying direct demonstration). 3. Limitations – ownership measures The authors may wish to briefly reinforce the limitation of relying solely on subjective RHI measures and note the absence of objective indices such as proprioceptive drift. 4. Minor clarity edits A small number of typographical inconsistencies (e.g., spacing, punctuation) should be corrected during final proofreading. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #3: Yes: Salwa Mahmoud Reviewer #4: Yes: Sergio Carmona ********** |
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