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| Original SubmissionJuly 13, 2025 |
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: This is a well-executed population-scale metabolomics study that demonstrates widespread associations between kidney function and the circulating metabolome in the general population. The use of multiple cohorts with a discovery validation framework is a major strength, and the findings reinforce an important analytical point: kidney function must be carefully considered when interpreting metabolomics data, even outside overt chronic kidney disease. While many of the observed associations are expected from an analytical chemistry perspective, the scale and consistency of the results give the work value. However, several methodological and interpretational issues, particularly related to the use of creatinine-based eGFR and derived variables, need to be addressed to ensure the conclusions are technically sound and appropriately framed. Major revision: 1) From an analytical standpoint, the central variable in this study (eGFR) is derived from creatinine, which is itself a metabolite strongly influenced by muscle mass, diet, and metabolic state. In the discovery cohort, creatinine is not directly measured clinically but instead estimated from metabolomics data using a calibration derived from other cohorts. This creates a dependency structure that can amplify associations and complicates interpretation, particularly for metabolites correlated with creatinine or related metabolic pathways. The manuscript would benefit from a more explicit discussion of this issue and from quantitative validation of the creatinine calibration (e.g., accuracy, bias, and uncertainty). Sensitivity analyses restricted to cohorts with clinically measured creatinine would strengthen confidence in the conclusions. 2) Many of the reported associations likely reflect a combination of biological effects and analytical consequences of reduced renal clearance rather than distinct metabolic regulation. While this does not diminish the relevance of the findings, the manuscript should be careful not to imply causal or mechanistic interpretations where the data support association only. Framing the results in terms of metabolite accumulation, clearance, and confounding structure would better align with an analytical chemistry perspective. 3) Adjustment for fat mass and major cardiovascular risk factors is appropriate and strengthens the analysis. However, creatinine-based metrics remain sensitive to lean mass and protein intake, neither of which are fully captured by the covariates used. Residual confounding related to diet, medication use (notably steroids), and sampling conditions is likely and should be acknowledged more clearly, especially given the strong associations observed for steroid-related metabolites. 4) The pathway enrichment results are plausible but appear exploratory, as they rely on nominal significance thresholds without clear correction at the pathway level. This is acceptable if explicitly stated, but the manuscript should avoid over-interpreting these findings as definitive biological pathway alterations rather than descriptive clustering of correlated metabolites. Minor revisions: 1) A brief schematic of the analytical workflow (cohorts, models, discovery/validation steps) would improve accessibility for non-specialists Reviewer #2: 1. The study design is correct by the parameters analysed look outdated. Why was creatinine used for conservative eGDF calculation? Why not kynurenine or serotonin or cystatin C? 2. The implementation of creatine as a basis for eGFR if further posing a possible inflatory effect. As I understand the cohort setting EpiHealth creatinine is derrived from the metabolomics signal via a regression calibrated in POEM/PIVUS80. 3. The outcome of the manuscript is largely confirmatory and not novel. 4. There is no mechanistic analysis, no causal analyses like Mendelian Radomisation to deconvolute the role(s) of other metabolites changed significantly in relation to eGFR. Reviewer #3: The current manuscript provides a timely and comprehensive metabolomic investigation into the associations between estimated glomerular filtration rate (eGFR) and a wide array of endogenous metabolites in a large, general population cohort. The research directly addresses an important pathophysiological hypothesis—that retained metabolites may mediate the well-established link between chronic kidney disease and cardiovascular risk. However, there are following questions that should be answered/clarified by the author and updated in the manuscript that will help in overall quality of the manuscript. 1. Line 108 > please mention degree Celsius or degree Fahrenheit. 2. Line 109 > The authors have mentioned the addition of internal standards in plasma samples before extraction. However, the author’s should mention what are the internal standards, their name, their concentration added and how they were useful in the analysis. These details are lacking in the entire manuscript. Also please add them in the results section. 3. In subjects and methods, the authors have just mentioned the use of reverse phase UPLC-MS/MS and HILIC analytical method for metabolomic study. However, they haven’t mentioned any details, The authors are advised to add details such as column used, mobile phase used, its elution profile, the mass spectrometry parameters, what instrument was the samples analyzed upon. These details are very crucial in determining the overall process of metabolomic analysis, be it targeted or untargeted. 4. The authors are advised to provide step by step procedure for conducting experimental metabolomic analysis. 5. The authors are also advised to present steps of identification of metabolites from untargeted to targeted, their selection and annotation criteria, and software used in this process. 6. The authors have mentioned the samples from all three cohorts were analyzed in same fashion and calibrated for being comparable. Please clarify how they were calibrated. 7. Multivariate analysis is mentioned in the abstract. However, what multivariate analysis, like PCA, or PLSDA or any other analysis was used and their results are missing in the manuscript. Please clarify how the multivariate analysis was used. 8. Please explain in detail what the validation models are and clarify their interpretation. 9. Pathway analysis > Why were only model 3 metabolites used for pathway analysis? It is advised to provide data including p-value and the impact score of the pathways identified using the Metaboanalyst. This will give reader a clear picture of how the pathways are significant. 10. Section: Results > Para: Correlations between metabolites and kidney function & Section: Discussion > line 239 and 240:- The authors have mentioned the word “correlation” multiple times. However, in some places, the reader is confused whether it should be correlation or regulation? Also, its is advisable to author to explain how are the “correlating” the metabolites with eGFR are identified. 11. Line 203 > Define CV. 12. Line 234 – 236 > The authors have mentioned the use of two stage design having stringent multiplicity testing and class-based analyses. However it is not well described regarding what are the class in class-based analyses and multiplicity testing. 13. In some table foot notes, authors have mentioned independent variables, it is advisable to mention dependent also for clarity. 14. Table 5 > Probable the authors missed writing “Negatively correlated metabolites”. 15. Table 3 & 5 > Please replace “,” with “.” (coma with decimals) in the values to keep it consistent. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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