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Please specify the criteria used to define these, and what about the need for vent support, RRT, etc. 2. In some patients, sepsis might be mild without MODS, others severe sepsis with MODS. Was there any subgroup analysis performed and why if not? 3. You have mentioned that sST2 levels were significantly higher in severe MPP cases and those with co-infections. If co-infections were detected, what is the specificity for its association with MPP? Sst2 could have been elevated due to other infections as well. How do you explain the uncertainty? 4. You have mentioned that sST2 levels correlated positively with neutrophil count, neutrophil to lymphocyte ratio, PCT, CRP and IL-6- comparative analysis. Was sST2 more specific, more sensitive, cost effective, etc. What is the distinct advantage of doing Sst2, compared to performing NLR, ANC, PCT, CRP? 5. Lines 49-50: Studies reported mixing findings on accuracy of this method to predict patients’ outcome and inter-physician variations [4,5]- Grammar error needs to be corrected. 6. What is authenticity of definition of severe MPP? Your aim was to evaluate a biomarker whether it predicts severity. If only 4 parameters are assessed, there is a large gap of knowledge about those patients who were oxygen dependent, MODS but did not require organ support, those left with complications, destroyed lungs, etc. 7. Lines 83-84: The diagnosis of SMPP is made in MPP patients with either of the following criteria [2]- Grammar error needs to be corrected. 8. Line 140: media hospital stay was 7 days- grammar error 9. Line 142: ECOM- spelling error needs to be corrected. 10. The study design is ambiguous- criteria for severe MPP is delineated, however, the parameter Sst2 was evaluated only for 12 patients who had fit into 4 separate set of “adverse events”. These adverse events are overlapping over the defined criteria. It is unclear about sst2 levels among the actual population of severe MPP patients who qualified based on set criteria [2]. The study is actually assessing predictive capacity of sst2 to identify severe adverse events among MPP rather than severity of MPP. 11. Line 229: Consequently, MP infection undergone a prolonged non-seasonal epidemic, which emerged in April 2023- grammar error needs correction. 12. Title: Soluble ST2 is a potential biomarker for risk stratification of pediatric patients with mycoplasma pneumoniae pneumonia- better stated as sst2 as a biomarker for predicting severe adverse events among pediatric patients with MPP. Thank you, with regards, Dr SHIVKUMAR GOPALAKRISHNAN, MD., [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. 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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The study explores the association of sST2 with in-hospital adverse events and clinical characteristics in pediatric MPP patients, and assesses its potential as a prognostic biomarker in comparison with conventional inflammatory markers. The work is sound but requires major revisions before publication. Methods A brief description of the study setting will be appropriate. Clarify if it's routine to have sST2 as a baseline investigation for MPP in the hospital. Sampling: Throw more light on sampling. How many confirmed MPP in the study period, and how many were excluded. Include a flow diagram (as per PLOS ONE guidelines) showing total confirmed cases of MPP recorded in the study period, how many folders were reviewed, how many excluded, and the final sample analyzed. Clearly define and specify (primary versus secondary outcome variables, factor variables) all variables. Consider listing all variables, measurement methods, and units for clarity. Clarify how missing data were handled. Analysis and Results The whole table 1 lacks clarity. Some entries do not correspond with the labelling of the columns or rows. Authors should clarify why Table 1 contains ‘severe adverse event’ in both rows and columns. Also, the decimals with excess zeroes are not necessary for frequencies in the table. Clearly specify which values represent mean (sd), median (iqr), or frequency (%), in the table. Define what constitutes ‘other infections’ in the table? Format and standardize the table and ensure statistical reporting follows PLOS ONE’s reporting standards. The question remains, what is/are your primary outcome measure (s) (end-point (s))? Severe MPP? Severe adverse events? Complications? Consider fitting logistic regression for Severe MPP if it is considered a primary outcome. Recommendation: Your introduction section should include a conceptual framework to clarify the multiple relationships under study. For instance, how presenting disease severity may be associated with high levels of sST2, how sST2 may in turn be related to in-hospital adverse events, and/or complications. Discussion The discussion requires focus and direction. Provide clearer comparisons with existing evidence, focusing more on the association between sST2 and the primary outcome(s). Minor Minor typographical and grammatical errors include wrong spellings and tenses (E.g. Line 62: Studies have shown and not ‘have showed’), missing letters; the whole manuscript requires proofreading before resubmission. Reviewer #2: This study evaluates soluble ST2 (sST2) as a prognostic biomarker in pediatric Mycoplasma pneumoniae pneumonia and addresses a clinically important and timely question. The authors show that sST2 is strongly associated with disease severity, complications, and in-hospital adverse events, with superior predictive performance compared to several conventional inflammatory markers. The study is well conducted and biologically plausible; however, its retrospective single-center design, small number of severe adverse events, and lack of clinical severity indices limit generalizability and warrant cautious interpretation. Overall, the findings are promising and support the need for larger, prospective, multicenter studies to validate sST2 for clinical risk stratification. Reviewer #3: Introduction The Introduction is relevant but needs improvement Makes Sentences more clear and simple , Avoid using terms like “clinical gestalt” and better to be replaced with standard language, Prefer to use more neutral tone and avoid assertive, strong statements The research gap is clearly defined; but could be strengthened by briefly stating what is unknown about sST2 in pediatric MPP. Correction of minor language and formatting issues also needed Materials and Methods The Materials and Methods section is looks clear, clarification of the study timeline should be done. explain the reasons for exclusion criteria, specify the source of diagnostic guidelines details on the laboratory methods used should be provided especially information about sST2 measurement make the ethics statement more concise and properly formatted. The Clinical Data Collection provide basic descriptions but lack essential methodological details. provide more details about The data collection and extraction, how complications and adverse events were defined and classified. Some outcomes like sepsis needs to be referenced to established criteria, More clear categorization of the complications is needed. cardiac complications—such as myocarditis, pericarditis, arrhythmias, and heart failure—should be clearly highlighted, given some evidence linking soluble ST2 to cardiac injury in recent studies. Laboratory Tests Provide information on sample timing, assay characteristics, units, and data handling. Both subsections require clearer definitions, standardized terminology Correct grammatical and formatting issues Results The Results section contains valuable data but Sentence needs to be more clear with correction of the language errors Write the result with more direct and objective way More clear and correct terminology should be used Tables and figures need better organization, and more detailed sand clear tatistical reporting is needed Discussion Although the discussion is well-organized, but should be written in more clear, direct objective way aligning with the nature of this single-center, retrospective study. Present any potential therapeutic or predictive outcomes as theoretical possibilities or areas for future investigation, not as current treatment protocols or guaranteed outcomes. Conclusions avoid statement that indicate accuracy and superiority. limitations should be extended to properly reflect design and analytical difficulties. ********** what does this mean?). 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However, there are a few uncertainties which demand clarification. 1. Severe adverse events were defined as in-hospital death, ICU admission, diagnosis of sepsis or use of extracorporeal membrane oxygenation. Please specify the criteria used to define these, and what about the need for vent support, RRT, etc. 2. In some patients, sepsis might be mild without MODS, others severe sepsis with MODS. Was there any subgroup analysis performed and why if not? 3. You have mentioned that sST2 levels were significantly higher in severe MPP cases and those with co-infections. If co-infections were detected, what is the specificity for its association with MPP? Sst2 could have been elevated due to other infections as well. How do you explain the uncertainty? 4. You have mentioned that sST2 levels correlated positively with neutrophil count, neutrophil to lymphocyte ratio, PCT, CRP and IL-6- comparative analysis. Was sST2 more specific, more sensitive, cost effective, etc. What is the distinct advantage of doing Sst2, compared to performing NLR, ANC, PCT, CRP? 5. Lines 49-50: Studies reported mixing findings on accuracy of this method to predict patients’ outcome and inter-physician variations [4,5]- Grammar error needs to be corrected. 6. What is authenticity of definition of severe MPP? Your aim was to evaluate a biomarker whether it predicts severity. If only 4 parameters are assessed, there is a large gap of knowledge about those patients who were oxygen dependent, MODS but did not require organ support, those left with complications, destroyed lungs, etc. 7. Lines 83-84: The diagnosis of SMPP is made in MPP patients with either of the following criteria [2]- Grammar error needs to be corrected. 8. Line 140: media hospital stay was 7 days- grammar error 9. Line 142: ECOM- spelling error needs to be corrected. 10. The study design is ambiguous- criteria for severe MPP is delineated, however, the parameter Sst2 was evaluated only for 12 patients who had fit into 4 separate set of “adverse events”. These adverse events are overlapping over the defined criteria. It is unclear about sst2 levels among the actual population of severe MPP patients who qualified based on set criteria [2]. The study is actually assessing predictive capacity of sst2 to identify severe adverse events among MPP rather than severity of MPP. 11. Line 229: Consequently, MP infection undergone a prolonged non-seasonal epidemic, which emerged in April 2023- grammar error needs correction. 12. Title: Soluble ST2 is a potential biomarker for risk stratification of pediatric patients with mycoplasma pneumoniae pneumonia- better stated as sst2 as a biomarker for predicting severe adverse events among paediatric patients with MPP. Thank you, with regards, Dr SHIVKUMAR GOPALAKRISHNAN, MD., [Note: HTML markup is below. 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