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Additional Editor Comments: The manuscript has been evaluated by two reviewers and their comments are available below. The reviewers have raised a number of concerns that need attention. They request clarification of the text in a number of areas to improve readability and further discussion of study limitations and findings. Could you please revise the manuscript to carefully address the concerns raised? [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. 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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thank you to the authors for this manuscript. As the study highlights, head and neck cancer survivorship is complex given all the challenges that patients experience. The strengths of this study include the thorough search and range of studies the authors note. Specifically, they compare differences in evaluation tools, discuss the most common unmet supportive care needs, and propose areas of intervention including consolidating the strengths of screening tools and creation of multidisciplinary teams to address survivorship comprehensively. The authors also place the findings in context, noting that the studies are from all high-income countries. Some suggestions below - A major part of the study includes evaluation of existing tools to screen unmet needs. This could be clarified in the abstract. - Given the variety of studies (quantitative, qualitative, and mixed methodologies), could the authors comment and include whether any of the qualitative or mixed studies found any domains of supportive needs that were not identified in the evaluation tools? - I found Table 3 is thorough though a bit hard to digest as a reader. Would consider consolidating the prose or reformatting to consolidate the table. - In the limitations, would also consider including that cultural aspects are not included in these studies extracted. All studies are from high-income North American and European countries. Cultural elements from other high-income countries include from other LMICs are not included and may influence unmet social needs. Reviewer #2: I commend the authors for undertaking this important and timely work. Head and neck cancer survivors often experience significant disability following long and excruciating treatments, and improving their quality of care is of utmost importance. I generally found the article well written and informative; however, I recommend that substantial revisions be made before it is suitable for publication. Below is a point-by-point review of the manuscript. Introduction 1. In the first sentence of the article, the authors mention that head and neck cancers are the 6th most common type of malignancy. However, this epidemiologic definition usually only includes cancers of the mucosal lining including sinus, nasopharynx, oro and hypopharynx, larynx, oral cavity and sometimes salivary glands. Cutaneous malignancies and thyroid cancers are excluded from this definition. 2. From line 27-37,the authors describe what type of complications patients may experience and I have several issues with how this is phrased: - The sentence “While life-saving, treatments frequently incur substantial adverse effects that generate persistent multidimensional burdens for HNC survivors throughout post-treatment survivorship” is extremely vague and lacks direction. I would suggest a broad description of how patients are affected “head and neck cancer treatment will have a significant impact on patients’ appearances as well as breathing & eating function […]. - Some specific side effects of treatment are mentioned with the exclusion of surgical treatment. I would advise that the authors mention all modalities of treatment with their main side effects without being too granular. The focus should be on radiation therapy and surgery as these are the modalities with the most impact. Review questions 3. I would like the first question to be “what are the unmet needs” and the second question to be “what tools are used.” This order makes it more like “what do we know so far” and “how is it usually measured/are we missing anything” Inclusion and exclusion criteria 4. I believe inclusion and exclusion criteria should be written as sentences and not point form “we included…” “we excluded …” 5. For the scoping review to be coherent in terms of patient population, I would include only aerodigestive tract cancers (as mentioned in my first comment). Cutaneous and thyroid malignancies should be excluded from the review as they have completely different prognoses and treatment profiles. Data synthesis 6. This paragraph was a bit unclear to me. Studies presented their own tool, but your reclassified according to the SCNS-SF34? This section needs to be clarified. Results: 7. The types of cancers in each study should be mentioned in table 1. 8. Again, as for the review questions, I would order the actual unmet needs results before what tools were used. 9. Line 123-124: Health system/information, psychological, patient care/support needs were the top 3 unmet needs. **These were the results you find in your review, it does not mean it is the truth 10. I think table 4 should be removed and kept as the paragraph describing what are the main factors that were found to influence unmet supportive care needs. The table is a bit confusing as is. 11. At line 220, there is a mention of thyroid cancer patients. I strongly believe this cancer population should not be included in the study. Discussion 12. Lines 242-246: these lines should be removed, no need to justify the study at the start of the discussion. A discussion should start with what the study was and what the main finding was. “In our scoping review, we found that the 3 most frequently unmet supportive care needs were […]” 13. Again, start by describing unmet needs and then go on with what tools were used. 14. Line 262: authors report a high willingness to pay and refer to a qualitative study that inherently has very few patients/patients willing to participate in research studies. This is likely a biased sample and I would refrain from mentioning this in the discussion. A significant portion of HNC patients come from a lower sociodemographics background and it would be hard for any head & neck oncologist to believe their patients have the funds/willingness to pay out of pocket for psychology services. 15. Lines 274-279: I agree with the authors that multidisciplinarity helps with the care of patients and survivors. I would go further and mention the impact of nurse navigators and other allied health professionals (SLP, dietician, physiotherapists, etc) as part of the patients’ care teams. 16. Overall comment on the discussion is to be careful not to repeat all the results – focus on few significant results and put them in perspective. Conclusion 17. Lines 325-328: this sentence is too long and too vague. Focus on the key message of this scoping review. What do you want people to know? What is the main thing we should focus on/study after reading your scoping review? ********** what does this mean?). 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Reviewer #3: This manuscript presents a scoping review examining unmet supportive care needs among head and neck cancer (HNC) survivors. The topic is clinically important and highly relevant given the complex functional, psychological, and informational challenges faced by this population. The manuscript is generally well organized, clearly structured, and aligned with PRISMA-ScR guidance. The categorization of unmet needs into seven domains provides a useful framework, and the summary of assessment tools contributes practical value to the field. Overall, the study meets PLOS ONE’s criteria for technical soundness. However, several revisions would strengthen methodological transparency and improve conceptual precision. 1. Study Selection Transparency While a PRISMA flow diagram is referenced, the manuscript would benefit from clearer reporting of the study selection process. Specifically: The number of duplicates removed should be explicitly stated. Reasons for full-text exclusions should be categorized and quantified. A brief textual summary of the most common exclusion reasons in the Results section would enhance clarity and reproducibility. 2. Clarification of “Top Three” Unmet Needs The manuscript identifies health system/information, patient care/support, and psychological needs as the “top three” unmet needs. However, it is unclear how this ranking was determined. Please clarify whether this classification is based on: Frequency of reporting across included studies, Number of unmet items, Proportion of participants reporting these needs, Or another defined metric. Without an explicit operational definition, the phrasing may overstate the strength of the evidence. 3. Framing of Conclusions As this is a scoping review, the primary aim is evidence mapping rather than causal inference or prescriptive recommendation. Some parts of the Discussion (e.g., recommendations regarding multidisciplinary team expansion and telehealth integration) should be more clearly framed as implications or future directions rather than conclusions directly derived from the data. Additionally, the statement that this study provides the “first categorization and integration” of unmet needs among HNC survivors should be qualified unless clearly supported by the literature. 4. Assessment Tool Discussion The comparison of supportive care needs assessment instruments is a valuable contribution. However, critiques regarding tool “incompleteness” are presented without formal psychometric evaluation. If assessment of validity, reliability, or measurement quality was beyond the scope of this review, this should be clearly acknowledged in the Methods and/or Limitations section. 5. Influencing Factors The section discussing demographic, clinical, and psychological correlates is informative but could be better organized. Consider grouping findings by unmet need domain and clarifying whether reported associations were adjusted or unadjusted in the original studies. Causal language should be avoided unless supported by longitudinal evidence. One statement regarding education level and psychological needs appears inconsistent and should be clarified. 6. Language and Presentation The manuscript is generally written in clear academic English. Minor revisions are needed to: Replace informal phrasing (e.g., “lots of unmet needs”). Standardize terminology across need domains. Correct spacing issues (e.g., “HNC-specific” formatting). Improve conciseness in parts of the Introduction and Discussion. No concerns regarding dual publication or research ethics are apparent. In summary, this is a well-structured and clinically meaningful scoping review that would be suitable for publication after minor to moderate revision addressing the points above. ********** what does this mean?). 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