Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 9, 2025 |
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-->PONE-D-25-63413-->-->The Asanté™ HIV-1 Rapid Recency® Assay is reliable, feasible, and acceptable for use at the point-of-care in Lusaka, Zambia.-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Pry, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR:The manuscript has strong potential and addresses an important HIV surveillance issue in sub-Saharan Africa. However, key clarifications, improved methodological transparency, and a more cautious, consistent interpretation of findings are needed before acceptance is possible.The manuscript has strong potential and addresses an important HIV surveillance issue in sub-Saharan Africa. However, key clarifications, improved methodological transparency, and a more cautious, consistent interpretation of findings are needed before acceptance is possible. Essential Revisions
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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: This is a valuable and timely study that addresses an important gap in HIV recency testing at point-of-care in a resource-limited setting. The manuscript presents a robust mixed-methods evaluation of the Asant HIV-1 Rapid Recency Assay (RTRI) at point-of-care (POC) in Lusaka, Zambia, demonstrating strong concordance with Central Laboratory testing and feasibility among healthcare workers. Minor revisions are needed to enhance clarity, generalizability, and methodological precision, thereby improving readiness for publication. Comments: General: The author(s) declare in the financial disclosure section that no specific funding was received for this work. However, in lines 130, 495, and 521, the author (s) acknowledge the financial support from PEPFAR through the CDC. Abstract: In the methods section, the phrase “returned to both sites and clients” (line 43) is ambiguous and could be misinterpreted as a standard practice or a primary outcome of the study. Based on the manuscript context, it seems results were made available to clients at follow-up visits as part of the study protocol. Consider revising the sentence to reflect the availability of results to clients at scheduled study follow-up visits as part of a supervised counselling process. The phrase “health staff” in the sentence “four focus group discussions (FGDs) with health staff explored perceptions of POC-RTRI implementation” (lines 45-46) is broad and could include anyone from administrators to laboratory technicians. Please consider specifying the cadres who participated in the FDGs. For consistency and transparency, please ensure to explicitly state the cadres in the Methods section under “Qualitative Data Collection and Analysis”. Discrepancy in the details in the abstract and results sections: In the abstract (lines 49-50, it states: “The POC-RTRI identified fewer recent infections than laboratory RTRO (85% vs 100.0%). However, in the main results (lines 264-275), the concordance table shows 27 recent at POC vs 35 recent at the Central laboratory, which is 77.1%, not 85%. Please clarify this discrepancy and ensure consistency between the abstract and the results sections. Additionally, the abstract reports 96.0 agreement between POC and laboratory RTRI, while Table 1 shows an agreement of 96.5. These likely reflect rounding/precision differences but require harmonization. Please consider providing an accurate agreement. The Kappa value in the abstract (0.821) matches the main text Kappa for N=317 (0.812 on page 15 is likely a typo; should it be 0.821 as in the abstract?). Please clarify. Methods: Sample size: The methods section in the abstract and main text do not state the study’s sample size, which is a standard and necessary element for readers to assess the scale of the work. The sample size is first explicitly mentioned in the results section, on line 243 of the manuscript. Please consider adding the total number of enrolled participants for completeness. Laboratory and test procedures: While the manuscript notes that telemonitoring was used to clarify faint band lines (line 190), the specific decision rule or visual threshold for interpreting faint Long Term lines is not described. To ensure methodological reproducibility and clarify the source of interpretation errors, please explicitly state the criteria used to determine whether a faint LT was recorded as present (long-term) or absent (recent). For example, was any visible line considered positive, or was a minimum threshold applied? Data availability statement: Please consider depositing your data in a repository to obtain a citable DOI for the dataset linked to your manuscript. You can indicate the DOI in the statement, “De-identified and aggregated study data will be made publicly available through Data Dryad (doi: [pending]). Results: Please consider expanding Table 3 to include the positive and negative predictive values that would help answer the question, “If this test result shows that the person was infected recently, how likely is that to be true? Discussion: Consider linking the high false recent rate to the sensitivity analysis, which shows near-perfect specificity when excluding VL. Reviewer #2: - Introduction: i. Acknowledge the work of other researchers on the topic and identify the gaps in knowledge your study will fill -Objectives: i. Clearly describe General and specific objectives of your study - Methods section needs improvement i. For quantitative component 321 participants were recruited, how this sample size was calculated and what was sampling method. Non random sampling might have introduced bias in the study ii. Potential participants were approached by study staff for participation. What was refusal rate ? iii. Written informed consent was obtained from the participants. 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The Asanté™ HIV-1 Rapid Recency® Assay is reliable, feasible, and acceptable for use at the point-of-care in Lusaka, Zambia. PONE-D-25-63413R1 Dear Dr. Pry, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support.. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Hamufare Dumisani Mugauri, Ph.D. Epidemiology and Public Health Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-25-63413R1 PLOS One Dear Dr. Pry, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS One. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. You will receive an invoice from PLOS for your publication fee after your manuscript has reached the completed accept phase. If you receive an email requesting payment before acceptance or for any other service, this may be a phishing scheme. Learn how to identify phishing emails and protect your accounts at https://explore.plos.org/phishing. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr Hamufare Dumisani Mugauri Academic Editor PLOS One |
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