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| Original SubmissionOctober 20, 2025 |
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: 1. When measuring human traits on a continuum, I think it’s relatively unlikely that there will be important differences by language or culture. You can note where you performed your study, but you can likely deemphasize the specific context. It’s a little distracting. 2. Twenty-four items is long. I understand that this may improve performance in research context. But for everyday use with patients a shorter version would be useful and almost certainly adequate. I suggest an unplanned analysis where you use the best performing 4 to 6 items in a shorter version and compare it to the longer version. 3. Line 160. You don’t have sufficient precision for 4 significant digits. Two significant digits is more appropriate. You can round the age to whole numbers. At line 253 and other areas there are numbers to adjust to likely 2, but certainly not more than 3 significant digits. 4. Study 2. Is it possible that the measures you are placing in a multivariable model are sufficiently related to cause distortion in the model. Have you considered alternative statistical techniques to account for anticipated collinearity? For instance, cluster or profile analyses? Reviewer #2: Strengths: Relevance and significance: The topic is clinically meaningful and addresses a recognized gap in current knowledge. Clear study design: The research objectives are well defined, and the chosen methodology is appropriate for addressing them. Logical structure: The manuscript follows a clear and coherent structure, making it easy to follow. Interpretation of findings: Results are thoughtfully discussed and placed in appropriate context within the existing literature. Ethical considerations: Ethical approval and consent procedures are clearly described and appropriate. Major Comments: 1. Methodological Clarity Additional detail regarding participant selection, data collection procedures, and/or analytic framework would strengthen transparency and reproducibility. 2. Context and Generalizability The Discussion would benefit from a clearer explanation of how the findings may (or may not) be transferable to other clinical or geographic settings. 3. Integration With Existing Literature While the literature review is adequate, deeper comparison with key prior studies would further strengthen the manuscript’s contribution. Minor Comments: 1. Clarity and Style Minor grammatical and stylistic edits would improve readability, particularly in the Discussion section. 2. Terminology Ensure consistent use of key terms throughout the manuscript. 3. Tables/Figures Consider adding or refining summary tables/figures to enhance clarity of results, if applicable. Reviewer #3: This manuscript reports the development/validation of a brief Probability Bias Measure (12 positive + 12 negative future events) in Turkish-speaking university students, across two studies/samples. The authors report (a) mostly one-factor structures for positive and negative item sets via principal axis factoring on polychoric matrices, (b) good internal consistency, (c) good test–retest reliability (Study 2; ~4-week interval), and (d) convergent/discriminant validity via correlations with depressive/anxious symptoms, mood, hopelessness, optimism, and partial correlations showing probability bias explains variance in depression/positive mood beyond hopelessness and optimism. Overall, the project is useful and generally well-motivated. I have the following recommendations: 1. Scale structure - The authors only used exploratory factor analysis. - They did not test the structure using confirmatory methods. - This makes it hard to say the scale truly has one clear factor. Suggested change - Add a confirmatory factor analysis if possible. - If not, use more cautious language about the scale structure. 2. Item content - Most negative items focus on social judgment or embarrassment. - This may measure social anxiety rather than general probability bias. Suggested change - Acknowledge this limitation clearly. - Consider adding items about other negative events (health, accidents, loss). - If items stay the same, describe the scale as socially focused. 3. Test–retest timing - Data were collected over a long time period. - Mood and stress may have changed during this time. - Dropout between time points is not fully described. Suggested change - Report how many people dropped out. - Compare people who completed both surveys with those who did not. 4. Additional limitations to be mentioned/addressed - The main score is a difference score, which can be hard to interpret. - Only university students were studied; results may not apply to clinical groups. - Excluding people who failed attention checks may bias the sample. - Translation and cultural adaptation steps are not fully explained. - All data are self-report, which can inflate correlations. 5. Additional suggestions: - Clearly state how missing data were handled. - Clarify whether questionnaire responses were treated as ordinal or continuous. - Use cautious terms like “preliminary validation” instead of “validated.” 6. 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Reviewer #4: Line 416- Error variance may influence results Line 448- While the measure was tested in Turkish, its performance in English translation has not been thoroughly validated Line 441- Applicability in specific types of anxiety or depression Line 460- Results may not apply to individuals with severe psychopathology or to non-student populations ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Psychometric properties of the Probability Bias Measure PONE-D-25-54306R1 Dear Dr. Booth, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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Kind regards, Kamalakar Surineni, MD, MPH Guest Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The manuscript presents a well-conducted preliminary psychometric evaluation of the Probability Bias Measure in Turkish-speaking student samples. The statistical analyses are generally appropriate and clearly reported, including the use of polychoric correlations for ordinal data, internal consistency estimates, test–retest reliability, and convergent and discriminant validity analyses. The findings support the authors’ conclusions within the limits of a non-clinical student population. The manuscript is clearly written, logically structured, and presented in standard academic English. The authors have been appropriately cautious in framing their conclusions as preliminary and population-specific. The acknowledgment of limitations—particularly the reliance on student samples, the socially focused content of many negative items, the absence of confirmatory factor analysis, and the need for validation in clinical and cross-cultural contexts—is appreciated. The data availability statement is transparent, and the provision of anonymized datasets enhances reproducibility. Ethical approval and consent procedures are adequately described. Suggestions for strengthening the manuscript include: (1) clarifying the rationale for relying solely on exploratory factor analysis and outlining plans for future confirmatory work; (2) further discussing how socially weighted negative items may influence associations with social anxiety versus broader depressive constructs; and (3) expanding on potential clinical applications and thresholds for interpretation in applied settings. No concerns regarding dual publication or research ethics are evident. Overall, this is a thoughtful and methodologically sound contribution that advances research on expectancy-related cognitive biases. Reviewer #4: Line 416 - Error variance may influence results: The authors removed the statement about error variance Performance in English translation: Authors acknowledged that the English version of the measure has not been thoroughly validated Applicability in specific types of anxiety or depression: The authors expanded the discussion on this point Results may not apply to individuals with severe psychopathology or non-student populations: authors acknowledged this limitation and expanded discussion. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy..--> Reviewer #1: Yes: David Ring MDDavid Ring MDDavid Ring MDDavid Ring MD Reviewer #2: Yes: VENKATA VIJAYA K DALAIVENKATA VIJAYA K DALAIVENKATA VIJAYA K DALAIVENKATA VIJAYA K DALAI Reviewer #4: Yes: Anoop NarahariAnoop NarahariAnoop NarahariAnoop Narahari ********** |
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