Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 15, 2026 |
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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. 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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: 1.The following sentence and meaning is repeated. It is already mentioned in the previous sentences of Figure 1 shows……, avoid this repetition. 2.“Conceptualization of the MedDefender-MHAN that illustrates how data streams of the healthcare IoT are incorporated, multi-head attention-based threat detection, and explainability generation to support clinical decision making. 3. In Figure 1, the human beings are shown. Are they doctors or clinical experts? If yes mention the same. Moreover, there are spelling mistakes like “Eleovated heart rate”. The figure needs to be redrawn. 4. Check for typo errors like Mod ule, which is having unnecessary space between in Section 3.1. Also, 3Gradient-Weighted Attention Mapping check the typo in 3.6.2 5. In Figure 2, threat detection module is mentioned which is not required as it is not a threat. 6. In Algorithm1, add step 1,2,….n. Also keep input and output. 7. References are required in table 8 and 9 for comparison. 8. Authors should test with latest data sets of 2025 or 2026 9. In testing, authors can add Man-in-the-Middle (MitM) Attacks, Data Exfiltration Attacks and Advanced Persistent Threat (APT) Stages. 10. Check for consistency of models and methods in comparison in Results section. 11. Provide real time IOT kit system description or figure which was implemented as mentioned in the paper. 12. Provide the limitations of existing works and contributions of the work point wise in Introduction. 13.Add the qualitative comparison table with respect to existing works. Reviewer #2: The manuscript addresses an important research problem in the domain of healthcare cybersecurity. With the increasing deployment of IoMT devices in healthcare environments, the need for accurate and interpretable intrusion detection mechanisms has become critical. While the study demonstrates promising results, several aspects of the manuscript could be improved to enhance clarity, methodological transparency, and overall research impact. The manuscript introduces a multi-head attention-based framework with dual-stream processing; however, the architecture description could be expanded. The authors should provide a detailed architectural diagram explaining the interaction between convolutional feature extraction modules, attention heads, and the interpretability component. The paper should include a clearer explanation of how network traffic features were selected and preprocessed before being fed into the model. The manuscript highlights the explainability of the proposed framework, but the evaluation methodology for interpretability should be described in more detail. Improve the clarity of the abstract by correcting grammatical errors and simplifying some lengthy sentences. Provide a table summarizing key hyperparameters used during model training. Include visualization examples of attention-based explanations to improve interpretability discussion. Ensure consistent formatting of dataset names and technical terms throughout the manuscript. Update the literature review with recent studies (2023–2025) on explainable AI for IoT or IoMT security like: Multi-attention DeepCRNN: an efficient and explainable intrusion detection framework for Internet of Medical Things environments, Multi-layered security architecture for IoMT systems: integrating dynamic key management, decentralized storage, and dependable intrusion detection framework, Transforming security in internet of medical things with advanced deep learning-based intrusion detection frameworks. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). 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An Explainable Multi-Head Attention Network for Healthcare IoT Threat Detection Based on the MedDefender-MHAN Framework PONE-D-26-02626R1 Dear Dr. Alqazzaz, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thank you for your efforts in revising the manuscript. I have carefully reviewed the updated version and appreciate the thoroughness with which you have addressed the comments from the previous round of review. The revisions have significantly improved the clarity, structure, and overall quality of the manuscript. Reviewer #2: The author addressed all comments. No further revision is required. Hence, the paper is accepted now. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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