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| Original SubmissionJune 4, 2025 |
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Multi-task Adaptive Deep Sparse Canonical Correlation Analysis for Multi-omics Cancer Survival Prediction PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Yan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 19 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The manuscript proposes a Deep Sparse Canonical Correlation Analysis framework that integrates DNA-methylation and gene-expression data to identify joint biomarkers. While multi-omics integration is an important topic, the study requires substantial revisions before it can be considered for publication. The prose requires a comprehensive language edit; numerous sentences are fragmented, verb tenses drift, and punctuation is often missing (e.g., periods following displayed equations). The Introduction does not explicitly delineate the research gap in existing sparse CCA literature nor enumerate the manuscript’s specific contributions; both should be stated clearly and concisely. A rationale is needed for restricting the analysis to two omics layers; alternatively, demonstrate scalability by adding a third modality such as copy-number variation or proteomics (if possible). The mathematical connection between classical SCCA and the proposed multi-task deep architecture (Equations 3–5) remains opaque; provide a step-by-step derivation or schematic showing how each loss term maps to network modules and how gradient magnitudes are balanced. Cohort selection criteria are insufficiently described; specify inclusion thresholds, final sample sizes per cancer type, and any class-imbalance handling. In Table 1, rows containing no data should be removed or marked “N/A,” and the caption should note which variables were unavailable. All figures appear as low-resolution bitmaps; supply vector formats (PDF or SVG) with legible fonts and colour-blind-safe palettes. The Results section largely restates numeric performance without biological interpretation; identify key genes/CpGs driving the first canonical variates and discuss pathway enrichment (e.g., KEGG cell-cycle, DNA-repair). Benchmarking is limited to vanilla SCCA; incorporate additional baselines (e.g., DeepCCA, MOFA+, regularised GCCA) and report statistical significance using paired t-tests or Wilcoxon tests, together with effect sizes. Provide evidence of model robustness by employing nested cross-validation or an external validation cohort and by reporting train- versus validation-set canonical correlation values (if possible). State whether code, pretrained weights, and data-processing scripts will be released to ensure reproducibility. Minor issues include typographical errors, inconsistent equation punctuation, and undefined abbreviations in figure captions; please correct systematically. A few relevant and important helpful studies include https://doi.org/10.48550/arXiv.2507.09028 https://doi.org/10.1016/j.eswa.2024.123893 Reviewer #2: Summary:- The paper aims to improve cancer survival modeling by better integrating multi-omics data (mRNA and DNA data). It proposes MT-ADSCCA, which starts from sparse canonical correlation analysis and adaptively weights its loss terms to select a compact set of omics features; these selected features are then used in a biLSTM-based Cox model to predict risk. The authors test the approach with 10-fold cross-validation on three TCGA cohorts (BRCA, GBMLGG, KIPAN), comparing their feature selection against DA, WGCNA, lmQCM, CCA, OSCCA, and DeepCorrSurv, and comparing their survival head against LASSO-Cox, RSF, MTLSA, and DeepSurv, using C-index as the primary metric. They report higher C-indices than these baselines across datasets. Major comments:- -Please give one sentence with the main aim: who/what data (populations and omics), which part is the main methodological contribution (adaptive sparse CCA vs the survival head), what you compare against, and the single primary outcome; also say whether the main goal is better survival prediction or an interpretable biomarker set (and which is secondary). -Please add a Discussion section that interprets the results and openly notes key limitations, explains clinical relevance, and outlines next steps (external cohorts etc). -The paper states “we applied gene feature selection methods to the training set and test set separately during cross-validation.” I’m concerned about leakage, feature selection should be fit only on the training fold and applied to the hold-out (ideally with nested CV for thresholds). -Since a biLSTM assumes an ordered input, please state exactly how you ordered genes and why that order makes biological sense, and include a quick shuffle test (randomly reordering features) showing the change in C-index/HR. If there’s no meaningful order, please add a strong non-LSTM baseline such as CoxBoost on the same features/folds. Without a real order, an LSTM can learn from arbitrary sequencing and overfit; these checks clarify whether any gains truly come from the LSTM head rather than from differences in splits or tuning. -This method is called “Deep Sparse CCA/MT-ADSCCA.” What exactly is “deep” here? does the CCA stage contain non-linear components, or is only the survival head (biLSTM) deep? If the latter, please avoid labeling the feature-selection stage as “deep”; if the former, briefly specify the network architectures. -For method comparisons, please add paired tests (e.g., Wilcoxon on per-fold C-index) using the same folds and report adjusted p-values after multiple-comparison correction (e.g., Bonferroni). -Please report events vs censored per cohort, confirm event-stratified folds, and note any weighting/sampling; if none, a small sensitivity check would reassure. -DeepSurv is a nonlinear MLP with a Cox loss (not a linear model). Please correct this and provide the setup you used (layers/widths, activations, regularization etc) so the baseline is fair and reproducible. Minor comments:- -Decide on MT-ADSCCA (used later) vs DSCCA (used in Abstract). Use one throughout. -Add number-at-risk tables under KM plots. -Table 1 needs to be checked: Values missing, duplicate “Patient no.” etc. Rebuild table with consistent values; add median(IQR) age, events(%), censoring(%), follow-up median(IQR). -Add absolute change in C-index, along with given % improvements, and confidence intervals if possible -Provide CV folds, per-fold gene lists (with coefficients), and full hyperparameter grids as supplementary data. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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