Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 15, 2025 |
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If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Overall this is a nice short follow up paper to the main mouse model paper detailing their mutant Dynein lines. This one focuses on interneurons and whether there are any differences between the 4 mouse lines in terms of number or placement of these. There is no real difference and the only real change is an angle change for interneurons though it is hard to understand the significance of this. The major issue with this paper is that it is underpowered but given the lack of any major differences, i am not sure adding more animals in is ethical. There is not much to this paper and it is based on one set of images with different analyses but it overall adds to the field anyway. Minor comments: Please include a section detailing the mouse phenotypes. Although you give some details in the penultimate paragraph of the introduction, these are very generic and it is not clear at what age the symptoms start or the difference becomes significant from NTg littermates and so it is unclear why 52 weeks was selected as the time point for the tissue collection. Please add this all in so that someone can read this paper without having to read the other one as well Regarding the animals, there is no information on the sex of the animals that were used for this study and this feels important when considering things like angles in spinal cord. If only one sex was used, please make it clear why and justify it. Page 14, lines 331-334. please put in figure references for this section. Reviewer #2: The manuscript is clearly motivated by the hypothesis that hypomorphic dynein function in cholinergic (ChAT+) neurons disrupts the development, survival, or spatial positioning of inhibitory interneuron populations in the lumbar spinal cord. The work ultimately presents a largely negative anatomical outcome: despite robust ALS-like phenotypes previously reported in these dynein-impaired models, the lumbar spinal cord at 52 weeks shows no evidence of inhibitory interneuron loss or overt, large-scale defects in interneuron positioning/migration. Mechanistically, it is important to note that the genetic manipulation selectively reduces dynein function in ChAT+ neurons (motor neurons and cholinergic interneurons), whereas the primary outcome measures quantify broader inhibitory and marker-defined populations (GAD-67+, parvalbumin+, calbindin+, and their overlaps). Because these inhibitory subsets are not necessarily within the ChAT lineage, the experiments primarily test indirect (non–cell-autonomous) consequences of cholinergic dynein dysfunction on inhibitory interneuron survival and spatial organization, rather than strictly cell-autonomous effects within the manipulated population. This distinction should be made explicit in the framing and interpretation. A major limitation is the absence of a power analysis together with the very small biological sample size (N = 3 mice/genotype). With this N, the study is likely powered only to detect large effects, and “no significant difference” cannot be taken as evidence that no biologically meaningful effect exists—particularly for smaller interneuron subpopulations and double-positive subsets, where counts may be low and variance comparatively high. Given that the central conclusion is essentially null, increasing biological replication would substantially strengthen the manuscript. While the current dataset can reasonably support the conservative statement that no gross interneuron loss or large-scale mispositioning was observed, it is underpowered to exclude more modest but potentially meaningful differences. If feasible, expanding to approximately 5–6 mice per genotype would improve confidence intervals and stabilize variance estimates, and would likely reduce reviewer concern about interpreting negative results. To support stronger claims that there is no biologically meaningful interneuron loss or mispositioning, a target of ≥6 mice/genotype (or more if variability is high, or if double-positive subsets are rare) is recommended. Methodological reporting should also be strengthened. Cell counts derived from confocal images are appropriate for the question, but the Methods need to provide sufficient detail to convince readers that sampling and quantification were unbiased and comparable across genotypes. In particular, it should be stated explicitly whether counts were performed bilaterally, how counting boundaries/regions of interest were defined, and whether the sampling scheme was systematic and evenly spaced across L3–L6. Finally, key biological and classification details should be included—most notably the sex of the mice and whether groups were balanced, given known sex effects in ALS-like phenotypes and spinal cord measures. Overall, I recommend major revision. The question is worthwhile and the dataset may be publishable, but the current sample size/power and statistical framing do not yet support the strength of the null conclusions, and additional methodological clarity (and ideally increased N) would substantially improve the rigor and interpretability of the work. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Impaired dynein function preserves spinal interneuron survival and positioning in an ALS-like mouse model PONE-D-25-54374R1 Dear Dr. Hafezparast, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support.... If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Xiaona Wang, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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