Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 6, 2026 |
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--> PONE-D-26-09038 Healthier dietary habits are associated with lower depression and anxiety among medical students at a private university in Lima, Peru: A cross-sectional study PLOS One Dear Dr. Soriano-Moreno, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Before addressing the specific revisions listed below, the authors should carefully review and respond to all comments provided by the reviewers. In summary, the main issues identified during peer review include:
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Additional Editor Comments: After careful evaluation of the manuscript and consideration of the reviewers’ comments, I believe your study addresses an important topic and provides potentially valuable evidence regarding dietary habits and mental health among medical students in Peru. However, both reviewers identified methodological and interpretive issues that must be addressed before the manuscript can be considered for publication. On this basis, I invite you to submit a revised version of your manuscript. The revision should address all required points listed below. I distinguish clearly between required and recommended changes, and I provide editorial guidance where reviewer comments diverge. 1. Required Revisions 1.1. Clarify and justify the analytical approach Both reviewers noted insufficient transparency regarding the selection of variables for bivariate and multivariable analyses. The manuscript should: Provide a clear description of the variable selection strategy for regression models (e.g., theoretical criteria, epidemiological relevance, or statistical thresholds). Explain how multicollinearity was assessed and handled. The manuscript mentions categorizing age into tertiles due to multicollinearity, but the diagnostics (e.g., VIF values or correlation matrices) are not described. Report goodness‑of‑fit measures appropriate for Poisson regression with robust variance. These additions are essential for evaluating the robustness of your findings. 1.2. Address concerns regarding the dietary assessment instrument Reviewer 2 raised a substantive concern: only 1.1% of participants were classified as having “healthy” dietary habits. This extremely low proportion suggests potential misclassification or lack of calibration of the Spanish‑adapted Healthy Eating Index (HEI) for this population. Please: Provide a stronger justification for using the Spanish-adapted HEI in Peruvian medical students. Discuss explicitly the possibility of exposure misclassification, including how cultural and dietary differences may affect scoring. Consider conducting a sensitivity analysis (e.g., tertiles or quartiles of HEI score) to evaluate whether the association remains consistent under alternative categorizations. 1.3. Revise interpretation to avoid causal implications The manuscript currently suggests a “dose–response effect” and discusses biological mechanisms in a way that implies causality. Given the cross-sectional design: Remove or rephrase any language implying temporal ordering or causal inference. Expand the discussion of reverse causation, acknowledging that mental health symptoms may influence dietary behavior. Ensure that biological mechanisms are presented as hypothetical and not as explanations supported by the present study. 1.4. Discuss unmeasured confounding The adjusted models do not include several important confounders (e.g., sleep quality, physical activity, academic stress, socioeconomic status, BMI). While these variables may not have been collected: Provide a clear justification for their absence. Expand the discussion of residual confounding and how it may influence the observed associations. 1.5. Emphasize effect sizes and confidence intervals Reviewer 1 recommends reducing reliance on p‑values. Please: Highlight prevalence ratios and confidence intervals as the primary indicators of association. Avoid interpreting results solely based on statistical significance. 2. Recommended Revisions (Not Required but Strongly Encouraged) Improve the clarity and flow of the writing, particularly in the Introduction and Discussion, to enhance readability. Expand the discussion of generalizability, considering the single‑center, convenience sample and the unique characteristics of a Seventh‑day Adventist institution. Provide additional descriptive insights into dietary patterns if the dataset allows (e.g., distribution of HEI components). Consider adding a conceptual diagram illustrating potential pathways and confounders. 3. Editorial Notes After reviewing the manuscript in detail, I also recommend: Clarifying the data collection period in relation to the academic calendar, as mental health symptoms may vary across semesters. Ensuring consistency in reporting (e.g., whether HEI is treated as continuous, categorical, or both). [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: The paper and its findings are interesting, and it is commendable that all data have been made available so that interested readers can verify the results and even conduct additional analyses if desired. The analytical methods are primarily exploratory in nature, which is appropriate given that a convenience sample was used. In addition to simple bivariate associations, Poisson regression and adjusted regression models have been applied. However, there are several areas that would benefit from further clarification and improvement. The original dataset contains more than 30 variables, yet it is unclear how variables were selected for inclusion in the bivariate analyses and subsequent regression models. A systematic description of this variable selection process is needed. Furthermore, the manuscript does not address how correlations among independent variables were handled in the regression analyses. If multicollinearity is present, the authors should describe the steps taken to assess and mitigate its impact (e.g., variable selection procedures, variance inflation factors, or other diagnostics). For all regression models, appropriate goodness-of-fit measures should be reported to help readers evaluate model adequacy. Additionally, reliance on p-values is not ideal in the context of exploratory analysis. Instead, the authors are encouraged to emphasize effect sizes along with 95% or 99% confidence intervals, which provide more informative measures of uncertainty. Overall, this is an interesting and potentially valuable paper, but greater methodological transparency would strengthen its rigor and reproducibility. Reviewer #2: This manuscript examines the association between dietary habits and symptoms of anxiety and depression in medical students; however, in its current form, it presents substantial methodological and interpretive limitations that weaken the validity of its conclusions. While the use of validated screening tools (PHQ-9, GAD-7) and prevalence ratios is appropriate, the reliance on a single-centre, convenience sample from a private Adventist university severely limits external validity and introduces potential selection bias. More importantly, the measurement of the exposure is problematic. Only 1.1% of participants were classified as having “healthy” dietary habits, which suggests a lack of calibration of the instrument for this population. The use of a Spanish-adapted Healthy Eating Index, based on dietary recommendations from the Spanish context, may not be adequately justified for Peruvian medical students and may not reflect local dietary patterns. This raises concern that the instrument is misclassifying participants, thereby undermining the validity and interpretability of the exposure itself. The manuscript also overreaches in its interpretation. The authors invoke a “dose-response effect” under the Limitations and Strengths section and suggest that the observed gradient supports a potential causal relationship, which is not justified given the cross-sectional design. Temporal ambiguity and reverse causation remain unresolved, particularly because mental health status may influence dietary behaviour. In addition, the adjusted models omit several key confounders, including sleep, physical activity, academic stress, socioeconomic status, and BMI, increasing the likelihood of residual confounding. The discussion further extends beyond the evidence by invoking biological mechanisms and policy implications that are not supported by the study design. Taken together, these issues indicate that the manuscript, in its current form, does not meet the standard of analytical rigour expected for publication. I recommend major revision, with substantial revision of the interpretation, explicit justification or reconsideration of the dietary measurement approach, and a more rigorous treatment of the study’s limitations. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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-->PONE-D-26-09038R1-->-->Healthier dietary habits are associated with lower depression and anxiety among medical students at a private university in Lima, Peru: A cross-sectional study-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Soriano-Moreno, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. While your revised manuscript addresses most of the concerns raised previously, two key issues remain. First, you are asked to provide a stronger justification for the choice of dietary assessment tool and to perform a sensitivity analysis with an alternative exposure specification. Second, the limitations section should more explicitly address potential residual confounding related to academic stress and socioeconomic status, especially during the examination period. Please refer to the reviewer’s detailed comments below. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 27 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Thank you for your careful and thorough response to the issues raised in the first round of review. Reviewer 2 acknowledges significant improvements to the manuscript, particularly regarding external validity, causal interpretation, reverse causation, and the discussion of biological mechanisms and practical implications. The clarification of the institutional context and the use of the HEI score as a continuous variable are also noted as strengths. However, two main points require further attention: Justification and Sensitivity of the Dietary Instrument: While the usage of the Spanish-adapted HEI is now more clearly explained, Reviewer 2 notes that linguistic adaptation does not necessarily equate to cultural or dietary suitability for the Peruvian context. Please clarify whether other Latin American adaptations of the HEI (such as the Brazilian version) were considered, and provide a rationale for selecting the Spanish-adapted version. In addition, please conduct a sensitivity analysis with an alternative specification of the dietary exposure variable—such as a flexible approach (e.g., restricted cubic splines) or a categorization based on the sample distribution—to examine whether the association is robust beyond the assumed linear relationship. Residual Confounding: While the revised manuscript acknowledges residual confounding and reverse causality, we recommend making the limitation more explicit, particularly with respect to academic stress and socioeconomic status during the end-of-semester examination period. These factors could plausibly influence both diet quality and anxiety/depressive symptoms and were not measured. Please add a statement clarifying that the observed association may in part reflect broader academic and socioeconomic conditions. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #2: The authors have responded seriously to the concerns raised in the first round, and several of the revisions improve the manuscript. I consider the concerns regarding external validity, causal overinterpretation, reverse causation, and the discussion of biological mechanisms and practical implications to be largely addressed. In particular, the manuscript now better acknowledges the single-centre Adventist institutional context, removes the previous "dose-response" wording, explicitly discusses reverse causation, and frames biological mechanisms and practical implications more cautiously. The authors have adequately addressed my concern regarding external validity. The revised text appropriately frames the Adventist affiliation as part of the institutional context, without assuming students’ individual religious affiliation or adherence to Adventist practices. I do not request further revisions on this point. My main remaining concern relates to the dietary exposure measure. The authors have improved the manuscript by clarifying that the HEI categories were used only descriptively and that the regression models used the total HEI score as a continuous variable. They also appropriately acknowledge that the categorical cut-offs have not been validated in Peruvian populations and that this may help explain the very low proportion of participants classified as having "healthy" dietary habits. However, the concern is not limited to the cut-offs, but also to the contextual validity of the dietary score itself. The justification for using the Spanish-adapted HEI remains somewhat limited, since linguistic availability does not necessarily imply dietary or cultural suitability for Peru. I recommend that the authors clarify whether other Latin American adaptations of the HEI, including Brazilian adaptations, were considered, and explain why the Spanish-adapted instrument was preferred. In addition, although I understand the authors’ concern that tertiles or quartiles may introduce arbitrary categorisation, an additional sensitivity analysis using an alternative exposure specification would strengthen the manuscript. This need not be limited to tertiles or quartiles. A flexible modelling approach, such as restricted cubic splines, or a sample-distribution-based categorisation, could help assess whether the association depends on assuming a linear relationship across the HEI score range. I appreciate that the authors now acknowledge residual confounding and reverse causality. However, given that the data collection period included the end-of-semester examination phase, a period in which academic stress, sleep disruption, reduced physical activity, reduced time for meal preparation, and poorer mental health symptoms may co-occur, I recommend making the residual confounding limitation slightly more explicit with regard to academic stress and socioeconomic status. These factors may plausibly affect both diet quality and anxiety/depressive symptoms. The manuscript should therefore make clear that the observed association may partly reflect broader academic and socioeconomic conditions that were not measured. Overall, the manuscript has improved, and several of my initial concerns have been adequately addressed. I recommend further revision focusing on two remaining issues: first, a stronger justification and sensitivity assessment of the dietary exposure measure; second, a more explicit treatment of residual confounding, especially in relation to the examination period and socioeconomic status. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Healthier dietary habits are associated with lower depression and anxiety among medical students at a private university in Lima, Peru: A cross-sectional study PONE-D-26-09038R2 Dear Dr. Soriano-Moreno, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #2: The authors have adequately addressed my remaining concerns. The revised manuscript now provides a stronger justification for the use of the Spanish-adapted HEI, acknowledges its lack of cultural validation in Peru, contextualises the low prevalence of "healthy" dietary habits using previous Latin American evidence, and more clearly discusses possible residual confounding related to the examination period, academic stress, socioeconomic status and other unmeasured factors. The authors also assessed the linearity assumption before modelling the HEI score as a continuous exposure. I have no further substantive concerns. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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