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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Overall This is a relevant article based on thorough analyses of data. Introduction Introduction doesn't always flow well. It can use some improvement. The sentence starting in line 57 does flow well, specifically the part "including the role of the partner [7],". The sentence starting in line 62 needs the addition of "from the partner/husband" after the following. "By the partner" at the end of the sentence can then be removed. The word "Moreover" at the beginning of the sentence starting at line 64 can be removed. In the paragraph starting at line 76, the inadequacy of cross-sectional study designs is discussed. This remark sounds odd, given that the current study is also using cross-sectional data. You are grading down your study, before it has even started. Later on it becomes clear that the data analysis technique corrects for this, but perhaps other studies with a cross-sectional have done the same. Then it is suggested that the cross-sectional design is not the restriction in this study. Method In line 95 it is mentioned that there are 1,172 teenage pregnancies per annum. To judge for themselves if this a high prevalence, the reader needs to know among how many pregnancies in total this is. In line 99, add participants after 409. How were the participants approached? What kind of relationship was there between the data collectors and the participants? Line 149 says 19 to 14, I assume this the 19 must be 10. Line 152: the cut-off for parity is 3 children. What is the rational for this? The reader will be interested in knowing what it is like, with a first child compare to more children. Line 153 indicates time to reach a health facility for ANC. It is more logical to use <1 hour, 1-2 hours, 3-4 hours and > 4 hours. Results Line 194 says "A higher proportion of Catholic adolescents had supportive partners (76.6%) compared to their Muslim (6.8%) and Pentecostal/Adventist (8.3%) counterparts." This is logical as Catholics are by far the largest group. What is of more interest to the reader is that among the Catholics 76.2% had a supportive partner, among Muslims 66.6.% and among Pentecostal 50%. (Of course even then these are unadjusted findings.) Line 199 mentions "Furthermore, 66.8% of adolescents with partner support demonstrated adequate ANC utilization." How is this for adolescents without partner support? Table 2: the numbers for yes and no in partner support are switched around. Line 237: the term "causal analysis" is used here for the first time. The term is not, but should be, explained in the method section. Discussion Line 267. The word "explain" is not adequate here. It needs to be replaced by "... may have contributed to men giving partner support." This is what you are exploring here. Line 274: I miss reference to articles that already explored this and suggestions for further research how this can be done. Line 282: "hold" should be replaced by "... most likely will hold...". Line 292: the end of the sentence needs adding something like "...and possibly influence the results." That is why you can only say most likely will hold... ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Dear Dr. Saidi Appeli Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 27 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols.... We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Nigus Kassie Worku, Lecturer Academic Editor PLOS One Journal Requirements: If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: The manuscript explores an important and timely topic—partner support and antenatal care utilization among married adolescents in rural Uganda. The study is well-conceived, and the use of quasi-experimental design with propensity score weighting strengthens the analytical rigor. The findings are relevant for maternal health policy and highlight practical implications for engaging male partners in ANC programs. Overall, the manuscript is clearly structured, and the results are presented logically. However, improvements in language clarity, grammar, and conciseness would enhance readability. The Methods section could provide clearer justification for variable selection and categorization, and some statistical interpretations (e.g., borderline significance) should be stated cautiously. Strengthening the discussion of limitations, contextual factors, and the implications of residual confounding would further improve the manuscript. In summary, the study is valuable, methodologically sound, and contributes to the literature on adolescent maternal health. With minor revisions to language, clarity, and statistical presentation [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Effect of partner support on antenatal care visits among married adolescents in rural north-western Uganda: a quasi-experimental study Abstract 1. Why are the authors reporting RR and OR? 2. Just the at least 4 ANC visits may not really determine the women received the quality services. I suggest that the authors read these two papers to relook and/or refocus their analysis: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/article?id=10.1371/journal.pone.0263650 and https://mjz.co.zm/index.php/mjz/article/view/775 Introduction 3. Line 84: A lack of partner support may result in non-utilization… consider changing this from non-utilisation to under-utilisation to imply general lower uptake than expected. Methods 4. Start with study design then describe the data sources and variables then analysis then the ethical considerations 5. For the outcome variables, consider reviewing them in line with the two papers provided above so that issues of quality and reduction of over-estimation of ANC utilisation is curbed. Results 6. Diagnosis for propensity score and Poisson regression model is more of the methods and should be reported under methods. 7. Table 4 should include the other variables as well. The variables that you did the adjustment for the effect that you are presenting. 8. All data are presented in tables, consider using graphs like forest plot to show the uptake of timely ANC visits by the socio-demographic characteristics? 9. May be another forest plot for the adjusted OR for the final model. Discussion 10. Discussion has not been reviewed since the definition of the 4 ANC visits should be timely and not just at least 4 visits based on the two papers that have found over-estimation if the visits are lumped. Reviewer #3: Statistical methods use are sound, however, authors need to provide clarity on the choice of these methods. More comments are in attached file Reviewer #4: I am concerned about the selection of adolescents that were married. Is it not likely that adolescents that were married are likely to be the ones accepted by their spouses than those that were not married, Therefore, the married ones were also more likely to receive spousal support. This should be discussed and highlighted as a limitation. Therefore, the final conclusions should be made in light of this limitation. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). 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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Overall, the comments have been well addressed and the article has been well adjusted. It reads well. Reviewer #3: Accept for publication. Authors have addressed all the comments. Congratulations to the authors on this achievement. Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). 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