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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** Reviewer #1: Thank you for inviting me to be the reviewer of this manuscript “Outcomes of Hyperglycaemia in Pregnancy in Africa: Systematic Review and Meta- analysis” Ezekiel Musa et al. has submitted a Systematic review and Meta analysis of literature on outcomes of Hyperglycaemia in Pregnancy in African countries. Given the increasing burden of Diabetes and diabetes related complications, the chosen topic gains significance. I am giving my observations and comments for the author to consider: Introduction: The references on IDF data, GDM prevalence in Africa are outdated. Suggest to replace with up to date data and references – e.g IDF Diabetes Atlas 2021, 2024 regional fact sheet for Africa Methodology: This systematic review is observed to have followed rigorous methodology, have applied relevant search strategies and analysis methods. The authors have provided an approved protocol (PROSPERO) along with the methods employed for article inclusion. However, PROSPERO CRD 42020184573 shows review end date as August 2020. Pl add amendment. The manuscript incorporates detailed descriptions of the search methodology, study selection, and data extraction procedures. PRISMA checklist, ROB for quality of included studies, Heterogeneity tests has been performed and shared. Methods: The types of studies included in this systematic review are thoroughly described. The PRISMA flow diagram is easy to follow and complete. ROB for the quality of studies was performed and the details are shared. Discussion: The strength and limitations of the study are well thought and documented. I recommend to accept the manuscript with minor revision as suggested Reviewer #2: I. Grammar and Orthographical Errors The manuscript is clearly written overall, but several grammatical, syntactic and formatting issues need revision to meet the editorial standards of PLOS ONE: • Subject–verb agreement and awkward phrasing: The Introduction repeatedly uses singular/plural mismatches (e.g., “the incidence of diabetes‑complicated pregnancies have increased”). Sentences such as “HIP is regarded as the most common metabolic complication encountered during pregnancy. This is in part driven by the rising prevalence of type 2 diabetes and its risk factors and changing diagnostic criteria for GDM” would read more smoothly if rephrased: the final clause should begin “and by changes in diagnostic criteria…”. Long sentences with multiple subordinate clauses occur frequently; breaking them into shorter statements would improve clarity. • Inconsistent spelling and hyphenation: British spellings (“foetal,” “caesarean,” “preeclampsia”) are used alongside American variants (“fetal,” “cesarean,” “preeclampsia”). The journal prefers consistency (UK or US). Hyphenation is also inconsistent: “pre‑existing,” “pregestational” and “pre gestational” appear interchangeably. Terms like “hyperglycaemia first detected in pregnancy” are abbreviated as “HFDP,” yet elsewhere the same condition is referred to without the acronym. • Use of conjunctions: Several sentences use “and or” rather than the proper “and/or” (e.g., “long‑term outcomes in the mother and or offspring”). Also, “so too has the incidence” is a colloquialism that could be simplified. • Punctuation and parentheses: The results tables contain typographical errors. In Table 4 the neonatal respiratory distress syndrome (RDS) row reads “7.3 (5.0‑10.0” without a closing parenthesis. In Table 6 the pre‑eclampsia row lists “10.7 (0.0‑31.7”; the closing parenthesis is missing. Such errors impede comprehension and should be corrected. • Numerical inconsistencies: In Table 4 the range of raw prevalence for pregnancy‑induced hypertension (PIH) is 19–23.8%, yet the pooled prevalence is reported as 11.3%. The pooled estimate should logically fall within the range of observed values; this discrepancy suggests either a transcription error or miscalculation. Similar inconsistencies appear in other rows (e.g., neonatal jaundice is reported with a prevalence of 12.4% and 0–36.7% confidence interval, but the number of studies and participants is not provided). All numerical entries should be double‑checked and aligned with the underlying meta‑analysis calculations. • Spacing and formatting: There are occasional double spaces and misaligned text (e.g., extra space between words in the abstract and financial disclosure section). References within sentences are sometimes placed without appropriate punctuation (e.g., “GDM is characterised by hyperinsulinemia‑induced foetal overgrowth and gluco‑ and lipotoxic milieu”). Ensure all acronyms are defined at first use and that abbreviations such as “CS,” “PIH,” and “NICU” are consistently formatted. II. Errors in Figures and Statistical Analyses The authors used an inverse variance heterogeneity model for meta‑analysis, assessed heterogeneity via the I² statistic and evaluated publication bias using Doi plots. These methods are appropriate for prevalence data, but several issues merit attention: 1. Inconsistent ranges versus pooled estimates: As noted, several pooled prevalence estimates fall outside the reported range of raw prevalence (e.g., PIH in Table 4). Recalculate these figures to ensure consistency; if a transformation (e.g., Freeman‑Tukey) was applied, explain this clearly in the methods and reflect it in table footnotes. 2. High heterogeneity: Many pooled estimates have extremely high I² values (>90%). For example, macrosomia (I² = 92.2%), neonatal hypoglycaemia (I² = 95.0%) and preterm delivery (I² = 96.7%). Such heterogeneity suggests that pooling may not be meaningful. The authors should explore sources of heterogeneity (differences in diagnostic criteria, study design, country, or year) via subgroup analyses or meta‑regression and interpret pooled estimates with caution. 3. Incomplete rows: Several entries are missing data. In Table 4 the “Neonatal jaundice” and “NICU admission” rows are incomplete (the number of studies, participants or I² values are missing). Likewise, in Table 5 the “NICU admission” row is left blank. All outcomes included in the analysis should provide complete information or be removed. 4. Possible typographical errors: The confidence interval for neonatal jaundice under GDM is given as 0–36.7%, suggesting an impossible negative lower bound (0.0) and extremely wide interval for a prevalence estimate of 12.4%. Similarly, the range for neonatal hypoglycaemia in the T2DM group spans 7.5–22.6%, but the pooled estimate is reported as 11.9% with a confidence interval of 0.7–30.6%. These wide intervals raise questions about the robustness of the meta‑analysis and may indicate data extraction errors. 5. Graphical representation: Because the main figure (flow diagram) and forest plots are provided as separate TIFF files not embedded in the PDF, they were not reviewable. Ensure that all figures are embedded in the manuscript or provided in an easily accessible format. Based on the text description, the flow diagram should clearly show the number of records identified, screened, excluded (with reasons) and included. The currently reported numbers (e.g., 45 studies after screening leading to 30 included) should be reconciled with the numbers provided in the figure caption and tables. 6. Statistical interpretation: The manuscript states that “T2DM was the most common long‑term adverse outcome of women who had GDM or hyperglycaemia first detected in pregnancy, with prevalence ranging from 6.8% to 48%”. However, Table 7 lists one study with 6.8%, two with ~21–48% prevalence, and a sample size of only 220 participants for the highest estimate. Such variability suggests that the pooled long‑term risk cannot be accurately estimated. A pooled estimate (with a confidence interval) should be presented if meta‑analysis is feasible; if not, the results should be described qualitatively. III. Questions and Remarks on Scientific Content The review covers a critical topic in obstetrics and public health, and the focus on African populations is timely. Nevertheless, several points warrant clarification or further discussion: 1. Variation in diagnostic criteria: The studies included used various diagnostic criteria for gestational diabetes (WHO 1998/1999, WHO 2010/2013, IADPSG, ADA, NICE). These thresholds differ substantially and could influence prevalence estimates. Did the authors perform subgroup analyses or sensitivity analyses based on diagnostic criteria? How might the adoption of IADPSG criteria, which generally lower the glucose threshold, affect the reported prevalence? 2. Adjustment for confounding factors: Many included studies are retrospective cohorts or case–control designs. The pooled estimates of adverse outcomes (e.g., caesarean section, preterm delivery, neonatal hypoglycaemia) could be confounded by maternal obesity, hypertension, age or parity. Were any adjustments made for these variables either in the original studies or via meta‑regression? Without adjustment, some of the associations may be overestimated. 3. Heterogeneity across countries and healthcare systems: Most included studies originate from South Africa, Ethiopia and Nigeria. Health‑system capacity, screening practices and treatment protocols differ widely across African countries. The authors should discuss whether the pooled estimates are dominated by data from South Africa and to what extent results can be generalised to lower‑resource settings. 4. Classification of hyperglycaemia subtypes: The manuscript groups diabetes first diagnosed in pregnancy as “HFDP,” yet some included studies may refer to overt diabetes or previously undiagnosed pre‑gestational diabetes. Clarify whether HFDP refers exclusively to hyperglycaemia first detected in pregnancy or includes overt diabetes in pregnancy (DIP). This distinction is important because outcomes differ between true gestational hyperglycaemia and pre‑existing (but previously undiagnosed) diabetes. 5. Impact of treatment: Several studies likely included women receiving different management (diet, metformin, insulin). Were treatment modalities considered in the analysis? For instance, did women who achieved glycaemic control have lower rates of macrosomia or NICU admission? Randomised evidence from outside Africa suggests that treatment of mild GDM reduces adverse outcomes; discussing whether included studies stratified by treatment would be informative. 6. Long‑term maternal and offspring follow‑up: Only seven studies reported long‑term outcomes. The review emphasises a high risk of type 2 diabetes and metabolic syndrome, but the studies had small sample sizes and varying follow‑up durations. Given the paucity of African data, the conclusion that “T2DM prevalence in women post‑GDM is up to 50%” may be overstated. Consider qualifying this statement and highlighting the need for prospective cohort studies with systematic postpartum screening. 7. Comparison with global literature: Throughout the discussion, the authors refer to studies from Asia, Europe and North America. It would strengthen the manuscript to explicitly compare the magnitude of adverse outcomes in African settings with those reported elsewhere. For example, macrosomia prevalence of 17.7% is lower than some high‑income settings, possibly reflecting differences in obesity or treatment; conversely, the very high caesarean section rates may reflect limited obstetric resources or early elective CS for diabetes. Discussing these contrasts could aid readers in interpreting the findings. 8. Research gaps and future directions: The authors call for more high‑quality studies, which is appropriate. Specific research questions include: (a) what interventions (e.g., lifestyle, pharmacological, postpartum screening) are effective at reducing the progression to T2DM among African women with GDM? (b) How do social determinants, such as rural residence or limited access to antenatal care, influence HIP outcomes? (c) What is the cost‑effectiveness of universal versus risk‑based GDM screening in resource‑constrained settings? Addressing these questions in the discussion would provide clearer guidance for researchers and policymakers. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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