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| Original SubmissionMarch 25, 2025 |
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thank you to the authors for your thoughtful and well-organized manuscript. Introduction (Lines 48–72) Line 67: Reference specific studies showing increased fall risk due to diabetic neuropathy or proprioceptive impairment. Line 71: Replace “poorer physical function” with “reduced physical function” for clarity and academic tone. Line 72: The objective could be rephrased more precisely: “to examine whether comorbid diabetes mellitus is associated with impaired balance, as measured by single-leg standing time, in patients with chronic liver disease.” Methods (Lines 74–192) Line 84: Provide justification for the opt-out consent model. Mention whether this aligns with national research guidelines for retrospective studies in Japan. Lines 96–98: There is repetition in the list of blood markers (e.g., AST, ALT, ALB) — revise to eliminate redundancy. Line 109: The FIB-4 formula includes a square root of ALT, which is not conventional. Please clarify with a reference or correct if inaccurate. Line 126: Specify whether SLST measurements had inter-rater or intra-rater reliability assessments. Lines 170–173: Confirm whether normality of distribution was assessed before choosing statistical tests like t-tests or Mann-Whitney U. If so, report those results explicitly. Results (Lines 194–295) Line 199: Consider merging etiologies with low sample size (e.g., HBV, ALD, others) or acknowledging the limited power for these subgroups. Line 243: A 0% vs. 20% SLST impairment rate is striking — discuss whether key confounders (e.g., diabetic neuropathy, medication use, or fall history) were considered or controlled. Line 282: The predictive value of ECW/TBW (AUC = 0.733, PPV = 37%) is moderate. Discuss whether combining this marker with other functional metrics (e.g., grip strength) could improve diagnostic accuracy. Discussion (Lines 297–366) Line 304: Reaffirm how this is the first study (to your knowledge) evaluating SLST in CLD populations — cite any comparable work or clarify novelty. Line 330: Address the low variance in ammonia levels (NH₃), which may explain the lack of association with SLST. Suggest this as a sample bias or a limitation of the study cohort. Line 337: Include references to prior research connecting mild overhydration or edema to proprioceptive or postural instability to support the ECW/TBW mechanism. Line 349: Recommend specific design elements for future research, e.g., prospective follow-up with diabetes duration, neuropathy scores, and functional falls data. General Suggestions Consistency: Standardize all uses of “diabetes” to “diabetes mellitus (DM)” after first mention for clarity. Abbreviations: Suggest adding a footnote or separate table listing abbreviations like ECW/TBW, ASM/BMI, KEF, etc. Statistics: Ensure consistent p-value formatting (e.g., p = 0.002). If exact p-values are unavailable, use p < 0.001 rather than zero. Reviewer #2: Introduction: - The hypothesis is stated as a general decline in “physical function” among DM patients with CLD. However, the actual analysis focuses narrowly on balance function as assessed by SLST. I suggest reframing the hypothesis to specifically address postural stability or balance-related impairment, aligning better with the operationalized outcome. Methods: - The FIB-4 formula includes a square root of ALT, which deviates from the canonical form (without transformation). This must be clarified, as it could affect the fibrosis score interpretation across studies. - SLST methodology uses the mean of both legs, but no indication is given about distributional skew or floor effects. Given that 20% of DM patients had SLST <5 seconds and non-DM had 0%, consider whether a dichotomous transformation (e.g., <5s vs ≥5s) might yield more interpretable or clinically meaningful stratification for this population. - It is unclear whether leg dominance was recorded. While cited literature claims no performance difference, individual patient-level variability may still affect balance metrics, particularly in neuromuscular-compromised cohorts. - There is no mention of multicollinearity diagnostics before entering variables into multivariate logistic regression. BMI and ECW/TBW may be collinear. Reporting variance inflation factors (VIFs) or tolerance values is recommended. Results: - The finding of 0% SLST <5s in non-DM patients vs. 20% in DM patients is striking but statistically vulnerable due to zero-cell counts. Consider whether exact logistic regression would be more appropriate than asymptotic methods here. - The AUC for ECW/TBW is 0.733 with relatively low PPV (37%) but high NPV (91.4%). This indicates that ECW/TBW may serve better as a rule-out marker than a rule-in diagnostic. The authors should address this explicitly in interpretation. Discussion (Lines 297–366) - The discussion of ECW/TBW as "subclinical edema" is compelling. However, the threshold of 0.393 is data-derived from this study and requires external validation before being used in clinical settings. This caveat should be emphasized. - There’s an opportunity here to draw connections between interstitial fluid dynamics, insulin resistance, and muscle signaling pathways, all of which are altered in CLD-DM. These links could provide a more mechanistic narrative for the ECW/TBW-SLST association. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Dear Dr. Asaeda, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 06 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Dear authors, The authors improved their by following the comments made by reviewer in the first division. However, there are still margin for improvements. Therefore, another round of revisions will be requested. Please considerer the comments made by reviewers and see the following specific comments for more details: -in abstract, please add effect sizes when it's appropriate; -L60-63 require at least one more citation or please rewrite the sentence; -L87-91, please support your hypothesis with references; -in materials and methods section, the order of evaluations and rest between them should be described; -please add the type of the study; -L140, please describe the time of the day for the assessment and what were the conditions applied before the assessment; -L142, please add information about validity of the device; -L206, effect sizes should be calculated and added for the appropriate analysis; -Table 1, please check table format and size because it is too long (3 pages). In addition, please add units for all variables; -for tables 2 and 3, please add effect sizes and their interpretation Best regards [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #3: Manuscript Title: Association between diabetes mellitus and impaired single-leg stance in patients with chronic liver disease: a cross-sectional study Journal: PLOS One Authors: Makoto Asaeda et al. Decision: Minor Revision Rationale: The manuscript addresses a clinically important question and presents novel findings regarding ECW/TBW. However, some concerns need to be thoroughly addressed before the manuscript can be considered for publication. Key Revisions Requested Abstract 1. Line 45: "Patients with DM had a significantly higher prevalence of impaired SLST than those without DM (20% vs 0%, p = 0.002)." A 0% rate in the non-DM group is striking. While statistically significant, it is worth noting that the non-DM group was small (n = 34), and this result may be sensitive to sample size. Introduction 1. Lines 87-91: The hypothesis and aim are clear. Well-stated. Methods 1. Timing of Assessments (Lines 95-103, 118-121): The protocol where blood tests (admission) and physical function assessments (start of physiotherapy) occurred at different, unspecified times is a significant flaw. Clinical status, especially fluid balance (ECW/TBW), can change rapidly, introducing substantial measurement bias and weakening the core cross-sectional associations. 2. Unmeasured Confounding - Diabetic Neuropathy (Throughout): The most critical limitation is the absence of any assessment or adjustment for diabetic peripheral neuropathy. As a primary mechanism for balance impairment in DM, neuropathy is a profound confounder. The observed association between DM and impaired SLST may be entirely mediated by neuropathy, drastically altering the interpretation of the results. 3. Sample Generalizability (Lines 232-236): The cohort, with a remarkably high DM prevalence (78%) and predominantly compensated liver disease (83% Child-Pugh A), is highly selective. This limits the generalizability of the findings to the broader CLD population and should be explicitly acknowledged as a limitation. Results 1. Lines 272-279: When presenting comparative results (e.g., KEF/weight, grip strength), ensure that the descriptive statistics (mean ± SD vs. median [IQR]) match the tests used (t-test vs. Mann-Whitney U) as reported in the tables. Discussion 1. Lines 368-371: The discussion about the null finding for ammonia is reasonable given the population's characteristics. 2. Lines 392-394, 441-443: The concept of "subclinical edema" is interesting and a useful clinical takeaway. This is well-argued. 3. Lines 395-419: The pathophysiological discussion is comprehensive but somewhat speculative, especially the detailed molecular mechanisms (IR/IGF-IR/FoxO, myostatin), given that the study did not measure any of these parameters. This section could be shortened and framed more as potential explanatory hypotheses for future research rather than established explanations for the current findings. Conclusion 1. The conclusions are generally supported by the data but should be tempered by acknowledging the key limitations, such as the cross-sectional design, lack of data on neuropathy, and the specific characteristics of the study cohort. ********** what does this mean? ). 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Dear Dr. <!--StartFragment-->Makoto Asaeda<!--EndFragment-->, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: The authors improved their work, but there is still an issue that avoid my recommendation of acceptance. Thus, I'll require another round of revisions. Specifically, please consider the following comments: -L146-148, "To ensure data consistency, all measurements were conducted during the daytime and at least 2 hours after the last meal." Can you support this methodological choice with references, since this is not a standard procedure for body composition analysis? Moreover, were some procedures regarding food and water intake before the assessment? -L220-221, for Cohen's D, R and V Cramer's, references to support the values of interpretations are needed. In addition, rather than specific values, authors should be present ranges for each interpretation, for better clarity; -L438-439, in theses sentences there are two "sixth" limitations. The second time should be replaced by "seventh". -96 references are too much for an original manuscript. This number should be reduced and not exceed 60. Best regards ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 25 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Rafael Oliveira Academic Editor PLOS One Journal Requirements: If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Dear authors, The authors improved their work, but there is still an issue that avoid my recommendation of acceptance. Thus, I'll require another round of revisions. Specifically, please consider the following comments: -L146-148, "To ensure data consistency, all measurements were conducted during the daytime and at least 2 hours after the last meal." Can you support this methodological choice with references, since this is not a standard procedure for body composition analysis? Moreover, were some procedures regarding food and water intake before the assessment? -L220-221, for Cohen's D, R and V Cramer's, references to support the values of interpretations are needed. In addition, rather than specific values, authors should be present ranges for each interpretation, for better clarity; -L438-439, in theses sentences there are two "sixth" limitations. The second time should be replaced by "seventh". -96 references are too much for an original manuscript. This number should be reduced and not exceed 60. Best regards [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] To ensure your figures meet our technical requirements, please review our figure guidelines: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures You may also use PLOS’s free figure tool, NAAS, to help you prepare publication quality figures: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures#loc-tools-for-figure-preparation. NAAS will assess whether your figures meet our technical requirements by comparing each figure against our figure specifications. |
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Association between diabetes mellitus and impaired single-leg stance in patients with chronic liver disease: a cross-sectional study PONE-D-25-15349R3 Dear Dr. Makoto Asaeda, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Rafael Oliveira Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Dear authors, Thank you by following all suggestions. The manuscript was improved. There is only one issue related with in text citations because when there is more more than one reference, they should be merged and the current version did not present them in that way. Still, the manuscript can be accepted and the issue be fixed during the proofreading stage. Congratulations! Best regards Reviewers' comments: |
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