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| Original SubmissionNovember 10, 2025 |
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: First, I would like to congratulate the research team on their work, as it represents a serious and methodologically sound proposal that brings an innovative perspective to the field of reading research. These comments should be understood as an external viewpoint offering suggestions to be considered in the context of a solid piece of work, rather than as negative criticism. Required Revisions and Recommended Changes The manuscript addresses a relevant methodological question and is generally well executed; however, several concrete revisions are required to improve clarity, balance, and methodological transparency. First, the Introduction should be refocused. Sections describing biases in self-reported measures and diary methods are repeated across paragraphs. These should be condensed, with redundant explanations removed, so that the introduction more clearly leads to the study’s main contribution. The Introduction is relatively brief compared to the rest of the manuscript. Considerable emphasis is placed on reading time, but the manuscript does not sufficiently substantiate why reading time is so important. What positive outcomes does it influence? Reading competence? Why are the European Recommendations on Key Competences (which explicitly address reading competence), or frameworks such as those from the OEI or PIRLS, not mentioned? Likewise, why is there no reference to other existing applications, such as TECLEED? It would be valuable to state explicitly that reading time has a positive impact on reading competence, which in turn positively affects the overall teaching–learning process. Greater reading practice is associated with fewer reading difficulties (see, for example, https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pone.0295606 and https://doi.org/10.24310/isl.20.2.2025.20620). Second, the rationale for key methodological decisions must be made explicit. The authors should clearly justify (a) the choice of a 14-day data collection period, (b) the exclusion of reading sessions shorter than one minute, and (c) the use of winsorization for extreme values. Each decision should be briefly supported by references, prior literature, or sensitivity considerations to improve reproducibility. Third, statistical reporting should be strengthened. Effect sizes should be systematically reported alongside p-values for all main comparisons and regression models. In addition, the handling of missing data through grade-level mean imputation requires further justification, as this method may reduce variance and affect correlations with reading fluency. A short discussion of its potential impact should be added. Fourth, the Results section should be streamlined. Detailed numerical descriptions that do not directly address the research questions—particularly repeated confirmations of non-significant grade-level differences—should be shortened or moved to supplementary materials to improve readability and focus. Fifth, the Discussion needs to be more balanced. While the advantages of the logged measure are convincingly presented, the limitations of app-based data collection should be stated more explicitly. These include parental compliance, the possibility of unrecorded independent reading, age-related supervision differences, and potential reactivity effects. Addressing these limitations would strengthen the credibility of the conclusions. Sixth, the implications section should be expanded. The authors should clarify how the findings apply to large-scale, longitudinal, or cross-cultural studies, and discuss practical constraints related to implementing app-based logging in broader samples. Finally, minor editorial revisions are required. Several sentences are overly long and should be simplified, repeated definitions (e.g., of the logged measure) should be reduced, and clearer subheadings in the Discussion would improve structure and reader guidance. Overall, the manuscript is strong, but I think these specific revisions are necessary to enhance clarity, methodological rigor, and overall impact. Reviewer #2: The proposal fits within the journal’s thematic scope and offers an innovative perspective; therefore, it could be considered for publication. Below, I provide my perspective with suggestions for improvement. The introduction is clear and logically structured, although somewhat limited in scope. For instance, what does dedicating time to reading imply in relation to the development of reading habits? In other words, the importance of reading time is assumed, but the manuscript does not explain with sufficient clarity why it is a relevant construct in educational, social, economic, or other terms. A revision is recommended to consolidate repeated concepts (e.g., biases) and improve cohesion. Does reading time influence reading competence (see the distinction between reading comprehension and reading competence)? Does it affect critical competence (https://doi.org/10.24310/isl.vi18.15839)? It might also be useful to include a brief comparison with other existing applications or tools. Additionally, does reading time affect reading development (https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pone.0193450)? International reading frameworks are not mentioned, nor are studies showing that family reading promotion is a decisive positive factor, despite existing evidence supporting this claim. Furthermore, there is a documented relationship between reading and the development of self-concept at this educational stage (https://doi.org/10.24310/isl.19.1.2024.17434), which could strengthen the theoretical framework. The description of the participants is clear and complies with appropriate ethical principles. However, the sample size is relatively small (109 boys and girls), which may limit the generalizability of the findings and therefore requires stronger justification. The study describes technically sound scientific research, and the data support the conclusions. However, some questions arise: could it be that parents overestimate reading time because their children merely “appear” to be reading? How was this possibility controlled? Moreover, the key contribution—the use of a logged measure via a stopwatch-based app—appears relatively late in the manuscript. It would be advisable to introduce this contribution earlier in the introduction to better guide the reader. Finally, could this study be applied in school contexts, reading intervention programs, the monitoring of reading habits, or the evaluation of educational policies? I recommend revising the citations and references, as well as shortening some overly long sentences. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Measuring Reading Time: Comparing Logged and Self-Reported Data in Relation to Reading Skills PONE-D-25-58106R1 Dear Dr. Brossette, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support.... If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Elena del Pilar Jiménez-Pérez, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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