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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This paper presents an experiment on young and older adults’ ability to ignore or inhibit irrelevant stimuli while attending to and performing another and different task. The authors designed an experiment in which they presented pairs of images successively; either a scene (forest or street) followed by an emotional face (happy or angry). One scene-emotional face (either happy or angry) occurred frequently, while the other was presented rarely. This procedure thus generated a contextual oddball sequence. The participant’s task was to detect a change in a colored square, thus creating a situation in which the scene-emotional face pairings were presumably unattended or ignored. The authors predicted that, because older adults are thought to have a deficit in inhibitory control, they would not be able to ignore the rare, scene-emotional face pairings and would, therefore, demonstrate a larger visual mismatch negativity than the younger adults. But, as noted below, according to the authors’ explanations, there was no difference between the young and older adults vMMNs. The abstract does not state that there were no age group differences in the visual MMN although, as far as I can tell, these differences were not assessed by ANOVA, as was done for the behavioral data. Furthermore, the abstract does not conclude with an interpretation of what the age differences that did occur (a positivity for young adults and a negativity, interpreted as an N400, for the older adults) imply for aging-related information processing. The design of the experiment seems straightforward, but I have a number of difficulties for the way in which the ERP differences were statistically analyzed and with the interpretation the authors offered for the differences (alluded to above) between the age groups. The authors used an IQ test to determine whether any of their older participants were demented. This seems odd, as there are several reliable assessments of dementia-related illness that the authors could have used instead. Also, how did the authors rule out young and/or older adults who might have been suffering from mental illnesses such as depression and or bipolar disorder among a few other mental disorders? Rather than analyzing the ERP data as had been performed on the behavioral data using ANOVAs in which the effects of age group could have been assessed, the authors analyzed the ERP data using t-tests from zero to assess whether a vMMN was present. Because the authors made a strong prediction that older adults would, due to difficulties in inhibitory control, show larger vMMN than young adults, these data too should have been assessed via ANOVAs using averaged voltages over the time period when a vMMN would have been expected. Instead, the statistical test for the presence of a vMMN in both age groups was the presence of 20 sequentially significant t-tests from zero (at an alpha level of 0.05) in the time range when the vMMN was present. Using this technique creates a problem, in which statistical differences could occur by chance. Hence, some correction for this possibility must be included. Although the Bonferroni correction is a conservative test, it has been used in these situations. Thus, 20 tests at an alpha level of 0.05, would require a significant difference at 0.0025 (0.05/20). Unfortunately, the authors do not mention what the alpha levels at each of the 20 points were. In fact, inspection of the ERP data in the figures, shows that the negativities the authors point to are quite small, again suggesting a strict criterion for significance. The authors might want to point with arrows specifically to the negativities they did analyze. Additionally, as can be seen in the scalp maps, there is very little focal activity over the posterior scalp where the vMMN might have been expected. Similarly, the other areas of the scalp also show very small variations in focal activity. Finally, the Discussion is meager. There is very little discussion of (what I see) as a lack of difference in the vMMNs between age groups. Moreover, the discussion of the age-group differences that did occur is extremely limited and, of necessity, completely post-hoc. For example, I do not see why an N400 would be expected in the oddball situation presented in the paper. Yet the authors do very little by way of telling us why an N400 might have occurred and what type of cognition that might entail for the older relative to the younger adults who produced an early positivity. The authors do little in the way of interpreting these age-related differences. Why would they occur and what do they mean in terms of the differences in cognition (if they exist here) between the young and older adults? On another note, it might have been useful to determine if there was any association, across participants, between the behavioral data and the size of the vMMN, the positivity in young adults and the "N400" in older adults. These associations, were they present and differed between young and older adults, might have aided the authors in coming up with a more definitive explanation for the age-related differences that did occur. Reviewer #2: Thank you for this paper. It is very nicely written with all the details required to repeat the investigation. Thursday introduction and methods section do not need any changes, except possibly a reference on the method to discover significant changes between the two groups (i.e. consecutive t-tests). The results section has two figures showing the ERPs for standard and deviant stimuli. Fig2 shows the contextual MMNs. The older group does not have a plausible MMN looking at the figure. Baseline is ok and hence one should see an MMN if it was there. The younger group do have an MMN but the baselines of the ERPs are not aligned which I think causes the difference to show up on the MMN potentials. Fig 3 shows almost identical ERPs for happy and angry faces for the young. The MMN looks more like noise for each of the ROIs. The older populations do have a change that is easily appreciated by the reader and hence also a MMN. Note also that the baselines are close to 0 and bit horizontal at the start of the ERPS which I think will allow you to see a possible MMN. The older group do have an MMN but the younger do not, which is strange. I presented figures do not show a MMN for either gourd for the contextual data and not for the faces only for the young group. Is there any other ROIs that could be used to enhance the data to create MMNs that look reproducible? At the moment I feel that these 2 figures are key to the paper. I am worried that the numbers used (receptions of images and number of patients) might be two small. Reviewer #3: In this study, the authors investigated neural responses to violations of visual temporal regularity in young and older healthy adults. A contextual oddball task with scene-face pairings was used to test this effect. A traditional oddball task was also included to examine established visual mismatch negativity (vMMN) responses to deviant stimuli. vMMN activity was detected in both age groups in the traditional oddball task. Such activity did not emerge in the scene-face sequence task, although the two groups showed distinct neural responses when processing deviant stimuli in this task. Overall, this is a solid and relevant study worthy of publication. Nonetheless, I have a few questions I hope the authors could clarify: (1) I found the title a bit misleading. What makes the stimuli “complex”? Perhaps “sequential visual stimuli” would be a better fit for this study. (2) Did the authors test differences in ERP results between the two age groups? This seems to be an important point of their study, but I could not find an analysis of this effect. (3) How did behavioral and ERP results relate to one another? An explanation for the group differences in response accuracy and reaction time, as well as an interpretation of how these differences relate to the neural responses, should be provided in the Discussion. (4) Could you elaborate further on why vMMN responses were not detected in the scene-face oddball task? While predictive coding is clearly relevant for framing the results of the traditional oddball task, I found the interpretation of the neural responses to the scene-face task a bit scarce. For example, these results could be linked to studies using other sequential stimuli, such as music (e.g., Bonetti et al., 2024a, 2024b). Bibliography: Bonetti, L., Fernández-Rubio, G., Carlomagno, F., Dietz, M., Pantazis, D., Vuust, P., & Kringelbach, M. L. (2024a). Spatiotemporal brain hierarchies of auditory memory recognition and predictive coding. Nature Communications, 15(1), 4313. https://doi.org/10.1038/s41467-024-48302-4 Bonetti, L., Fernández-Rubio, G., Lumaca, M., Carlomagno, F., Risgaard Olsen, E., Criscuolo, A., Kotz, S. A., Vuust, P., Brattico, E., & Kringelbach, M. L. (2024b). Age-related neural changes underlying long-term recognition of musical sequences. Communications Biology, 7(1), 1036. https://doi.org/10.1038/s42003-024-06587-7 ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Gerald K. Cooray Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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