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| Original SubmissionJuly 15, 2025 |
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Dear Dr. ko, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Summary of Major Revisions 1. Strengthened Methodology and Clarity of ASB Definition (Reviewer 5, Reviewer 3)
2. Expanded Description of Flow Cytometry Procedures (Reviewer 1, Reviewer 5)
3. Improved Statistical Rigor and Reporting (Reviewer 5, Reviewer 3, Reviewer 1)
7. Addressing Demographic Clarifications (Reviewer 4)
8. Data Availability Compliance (Reviewer 1, Reviewer 5)
9. Figure Improvements and Standardization (Reviewer 2, Reviewer 5)
10. General Language and Presentation Improvements (All reviewers)
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If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors provided data regarding the prevalence and risk factors of asymptomatic bacteriuria in community-dwelling Korean adults. However, I have a comment on the weak discussion section, as no single reference was cited in the last paragraphs. In Fig. 2, can the authors provide the statistical analysis used to determine significance?. The authors need to provide information about the false positives and negative results of flow cytometry. More details regarding the flow cytometer analysis should be mentioned in the Materials and Methods section. Reviewer #2: Dear author, The article titled "Prevalence and risk factors of asymptomatic bacteriuria in community-dwelling Korean adults" was reviewed. Please make the following corrections: 1- References 1-3, 5, 9, 13, and 16-25 are old, please use new references. 2- Please insert the suitable footnotes for Figures 1 and 2. Kind regards Reviewer #3: This manuscript presents a large-scale, population-based analysis of asymptomatic bacteriuria (ASB) in community-dwelling Korean adults, using data from the Korean Genome Epidemiology Study (KoGES). The study is technically sound, and the data support the conclusions drawn. Below are detailed comments addressing the key review criteria: -The study design is robust, leveraging a large sample size (n = 8,508) and excluding participants with missing data or symptomatic bacteriuria, which strengthens the internal validity. -ASB is clearly defined using both flow cytometry results and self-reported symptoms, aligning with accepted clinical standards. -The use of flow cytometry for bacteriuria detection is appropriate for large-scale screening and is supported by prior literature. -The conclusions regarding associations between ASB and factors such as age, sex, diabetes, physical activity, and serum albumin levels are well-supported by the data and statistical analysis. -The study adheres to ethical standards, with approval from the relevant institutional review board and appropriate handling of anonymized data. -The authors have declared no competing interests, and funding sources are transparently disclosed. -The data availability statement is clear and appropriately addresses privacy concerns. -The manuscript would benefit from a brief discussion of model diagnostics (e.g., goodness-of-fit, multicollinearity), although this omission does not undermine the validity of the findings. -Suggestions for Improvement: -Explore whether interaction effects (e.g., between sex and physical activity) might yield additional insights. --This is a well-executed and valuable contribution to the literature on ASB in Asian populations. The findings are novel, particularly the protective associations of physical activity and serum albumin, and warrant further investigation in future longitudinal studies. Reviewer #4: Overall, the study provided a comperhensive data analysis for the cohort included in the study. However, some questions need to be clrified: 1- The authors devided the study subjects into two age groups only, and named age under 50 yr as young!! while exluded the younger ages (childhood and adilescence) age groups. 2- Female subjects lack some information like the number of parturition, which could be an important parameter to lock at in the analysis. Reviewer #5: This manuscript examines the prevalence and risk factors of asymptomatic bacteriuria (ASB) among 8,508 community-dwelling Korean adults enrolled in the KoGES cohort. The authors employ standardized biochemical and clinical measurements and logistic regression analyses to identify factors associated with ASB, including age, sex, diabetes, serum albumin, and physical activity. The topic is clinically relevant and timely, as large-scale, population-based data on ASB in Asian adults remain scarce. However, several methodological and interpretive limitations limit the robustness of the conclusions. Major Strengths • Large, well-characterized cohort: The KoGES sample provides a robust foundation with standardized data and broad demographic coverage. • Clear research objective: The study targets an under-investigated population (Asian adults) with implications for clinical screening and antimicrobial stewardship. • Sound basic analysis: Logistic regression modeling and transparent presentation of odds ratios enhance clarity and reproducibility. • Ethical and procedural compliance: Ethical approval and participant consent are clearly stated. • Novel associations: The inverse relationships between ASB and both serum albumin and physical activity merit attention for future mechanistic research. Major Concerns (Revisions Required) • Definition and ascertainment of ASB: ASB is defined using flow cytometry (UF-1000i, ≥1+) rather than quantitative culture, and asymptomatic status is based on a single symptom question. This diverges from IDSA criteria and risks misclassification. Action: Re-frame as 'bacteriuria without self-reported urgency-frequency symptoms', cite validation for the ≥1+ threshold, and emphasize this limitation. • Incomplete exclusion of symptomatic cases: Only one urinary symptom was assessed. Clarify all symptom questions available and discuss the likelihood of misclassification bias. • Arbitrary cut-points: Thresholds for age, activity, and albumin appear data-driven. Explain or justify these, or treat variables continuously. • Handling of missing data: Approx. 1,395 participants were excluded but missingness is not described. Provide a flow diagram and justify the approach or use multiple imputation. • Model specification and confounding: Covariate selection strategy unclear; assess potential collinearity. Clarify modeling procedure and temper causal interpretations. • Discussion depth and literature currency: Relies heavily on older studies. Update with post-2019 ASB guidelines and literature to contextualize findings. • Data availability statement: Restricting access to corresponding author conflicts with PLOS ONE policy. Specify formal KoGES/KDCA mechanism and justify any restrictions. Minor Comments Figure 1: Caption should read: 'Prevalence of asymptomatic bacteriuria according to age and sex.' Methods: Specify urine volume analyzed and sample handling (for UF-1000i and serum assays). Results: Define all abbreviations at first use (ASB, CKD, CVD, BMI). Formatting: Standardize decimal points (e.g., '0.995' rather than '0,995') and units; ensure consistency. References: Update with more recent ASB epidemiology and methodological sources. Generally, the manuscript addresses an important epidemiologic question with a valuable dataset, but substantial clarification and methodological transparency are required before the conclusions can be considered reliable. Addressing definitional, analytic, and interpretive issues will strengthen the paper. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Ismail Yosri Abdelgelel Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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<p>Prevalence and risk factors of asymptomatic bacteriuria in community-dwelling Korean adults PONE-D-25-33638R1 Dear Dr. ko, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: Dear author, The article titled "Prevalence and risk factors of asymptomatic bacteriuria in community-dwelling Korean adults" was reviewed. It provides useful information for readers. Please make the following correction: References 6, 9, 14, 16, 17, 20, and 21 are old, please use new references. Kind regards Reviewer #3: The manuscript has been significantly strengthened by the inclusion of a participant flow diagram, a comparison table for excluded participants, and a more transparent discussion regarding the "operational definition" of asymptomatic bacteriuria (ASB) used in this study. The study's large sample size (N=8,508) remains its primary strength, allowing for meaningful epidemiological analysis despite the limitations inherent in retrospective data.The identification of high physical activity and serum albumin levels as independent protective factors is a novel and scientifically valuable finding that warrants publication. I recommend the manuscript for publication, provided the authors address the following minor technical errors found in the revised text. 1-I appreciate the authors' honesty in redefining their outcome as an "operational definition" based on flow cytometry (≥1+) rather than the IDSA culture-based standard.The added text in the Methods and Limitations sections adequately contextualizes this choice for the reader. This pragmatic approach is acceptable for a large-scale population study where culture is unavailable, provided the distinction remains clear throughout the text. 2-The addition of the participant flow diagram and the comparison table for missing data is excellent.The analysis reveals that the excluded group had a significantly higher prevalence of diabetes (44.6% vs. 12.6%). While the authors have noted this, it is worth ensuring the Discussion briefly acknowledges that the exclusion of this high-risk diabetic subgroup might mean the true prevalence of ASB in the general population could be slightly higher than reported. Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Ismail Yosri Abdelgelel Ismail Reviewer #4: Yes: Ali Hadi Abbas ********** |
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