Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 14, 2026 |
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Dear Dr. Webb, Please see comments from the Editor and from the Reviewers below. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 18 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Additional Editor Comments: Editor Comments: Please now address all comments from the Reviewers and also comments from the Editor. Comments from Editor Methods Subjects Please provide more information on these selections, to demonstrate adherence to ARRIVE recommendations. Surgery Although already reported, please provide information on approximate bregma levels where lesion occurred. Please also provide the time between surgery and behavioural task. Behavioural Procedures Please justify the reason for not including Gallagher’s proximity, e.g., https://doi.org/10.3389/neuro.07.004.2009 Results Probe Trial Please indicate this difference on the graph, e.g., Fig 7b, as asterisk or other symbol. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: If we interpret correctly, the authors aim for the over-arching, long-standing, and still unanswered question: If a linearly increasing number of hippocampal neurons is ablated or silenced, when does hippocampus-dependent allocentric navigation “collapse” into other, non-allocentric strategies? To date, no study has quantitatively mapped a graded, linear loss of hippocampal neurons to an exact behavioral collapse point in allocentric navigation (i.e., a specific threshold at which hippocampal strategies fail and animals switch to non-allocentric strategies). In this context, although the authors do not answer the above question, we find the study interesting and believe it merits publication. An additional strength of the study is its use of existing datasets, which avoids expending additional resources and time. We have, however, the following three main points that we recommend the authors address prior to publication. Point 1: Temporal dynamics in strategy classification Regarding machine-learning analysis with RODA, the authors correctly note that animals change strategies throughout individual learning sessions and during the probe trial. Collapsing behavioral dynamics into a fixed classification of individual whole trials risks obscuring lesion-related behavioral adaptations that are among the most informative aspects of the dataset. We suggest providing summary statistics on temporal, path-related strategy dynamics across individual animals. Specifically, RODA segment-wise allocentric versus non-allocentric scores could be analyzed over trial time within individual trials, allowing readers to appreciate segment-wise allocentric–egocentric transitions. Under this approach, the “random” category would be unnecessary and could be reinterpreted as a meaningful, highly informative group. These analyses could be presented alongside the existing results to provide a richer picture of intra-trial behavioral dynamics. Point 2: Trial-segment analysis It is possible that stereotypical temporal distributions of strategies exist within trials, including the patterns of transitions between them. Establishing a new variable, such as “trial segment,” would enable RODA classifications to be evaluated across consecutive ordered trials (1–9). Subsequent statistical analyses could then reveal interactions among factors such as SHAM versus different lesion degrees, and how these factors influence intra-trial strategy dynamics across trials. Point 3: Interpretation of size-strategy correlations The current interpretation that “the absence of a size-strategy correlation is striking” is overly simplistic. Each hippocampal lesion constitutes a temporal-anatomical path with often unpredictable behavioral outcomes. For instance, an animal in which a given CA1 subpopulation “dies first” as a result of the individual procedure, cannot easily be compared with an animal in which similar changes occur first in CA3 or CA2. We recommend that the authors elaborate on this aspect in the discussion, highlighting the inherent variability and path-dependence of hippocampal lesions. Reviewer #2: The time line of surgery and behavior is unclear from the manuscript. The surgery methods describe administering Metacam post-operatively once daily for 5 days, but it is unclear whether this is the total amount of time between surgery and behavior testing. A complete description and figure showing the time line of all manipulations is necessary. The work is said to be based on archival data of previously conducted experiments, but the experiments cited (citations 17-19) appear to be conference abstracts and not peer reviewed papers fully describing the experiments. Figure 1 shows example plots of allocentric, egocentric and random swim paths, but the reviewer has questions about classification of the random swim paths. Based on the description on line 186-187, it seems that any trials that do not meet the criteria of allocentric or egocentric are automatically classified as random. The classification criteria implies that a swim trial must be labeled with >50% of segments as allocentric to be considered allocentric or >50% as egocentric to be considered egocentric. This criteria seems to imply that a trial that consisted of 40% allocentric and 40% egocentric segments would be considered random. While this may be an edge case, could it contribute to the discrepancy between RODA and the assessments by the first manual rater for egocentric and random trials (59% agreement in each case, versus 99% agreement on allocentric trials)? Should there be a revised criteria to handle for edge cases where the majority of the trial is made up of a combination of allocentric and egocentric rather than random motion? At the very least there should be some discussion of why this is not necessary if not. Additionally, the agreement between the second manual rater and RODA does not appear to be reported. It would be helpful to have a graph of the trial assessment overlap between both of the manual raters as well as RODA for each of the three categories. Although figure 6 shows a lack of correlation between lesion size and mean path length, it appears that A-HPC are absent above about 90% lesion size. This appears to warrant some discussion on whether fully complete ablation of the hippocampus would prohibit the allocentric strategies used within the A-HPC subgroup. It is also noteworthy that while the A-HPC subgroup did not exhibit a significantly longer path length on trials 6-9 compared to sham in figure 5B, the time spent in the NE quadrant during the probe trial in figure 7C is still no better than chance on average for any of the subgroups, including A-HPC. The conclusion that "MWT performance was not related to HPC damage extent" is overly strong, particularly without a more in depth analysis of how lesion size may have correlated to the stratification of search strategy subgroups. That a subset of rats consistently used allocentric strategies is compelling, but more specific analysis should be presented to show whether or not mice with >90% hippocampal lesion size are under-represented within this subgroup. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Evidence of allocentric spatial learning in male rats with large lesions of the hippocampus PONE-D-25-65950R1 Dear Dr. Webb, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Miriam A. Hickey, PhD Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments: All Reviewer comments have been addressed satisfactorily. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Though not completely, the authors have sufficiently addressed my comments. The manuscript is ready to be published. Reviewer #2: Thank you for thoroughly addressing the concerns raised in my critique. My only outstanding issue is that I feel the conclusion would be better supported by a stratification of hippocampal lesion size, but that is now clarified as a known limitation of this study. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Miguel Remondes Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-25-65950R1 PLOS One Dear Dr. Webb, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS One. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. You will receive an invoice from PLOS for your publication fee after your manuscript has reached the completed accept phase. If you receive an email requesting payment before acceptance or for any other service, this may be a phishing scheme. Learn how to identify phishing emails and protect your accounts at https://explore.plos.org/phishing. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Miriam A. Hickey Academic Editor PLOS One |
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