Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 27, 2025 |
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Please include your full ethics statement in the ‘Methods’ section of your manuscript file. In your statement, please include the full name of the IRB or ethics committee who approved or waived your study, as well as whether or not you obtained informed written or verbal consent. If consent was waived for your study, please include this information in your statement as well. Additional Editor Comments: A well-designed cross-sectional study describing feed management practices on dairy farms in Brazil. The findings are useful for extension and benchmarking purposes and support the need for greater adoption of precision practices by higher-producing herds. Introduction L43 to 55: Please check if this statement is valid, it seems to me to be a very high percentage of increase in milk production per cow for a one-year outlook. ‘As a result, dairy production has grown substantially worldwide, where milk production per cow increased by 88% from 2017 to 2018 [4].’ L55 to 56: Please set this information to a more recent value, it has been almost five years. ‘In addition, from 2006 to 2017, fluid milk production increased by 45% country-wide and reached 35.4 billion L in 2020 [5]. The citations for key information contained in the introduction to the surveys on the property situation in Brazil are over 10 years old. It would be important to update this information. M&M Suggestion to include a flowchart in M&M (n invitations → n responses → exclusions → n final per analysis). Results L152 to 156: This part belongs to the materials and methods section. L185: The entire description in this paragraph belongs to table 2. Figures Figure 1: It would be more didactic and easier for readers to understand if the authors presented the sequence of comparisons first HPxMP, followed by HPxLP, and MPxLP. Tables Table 1: Herd ‘Her milk production level’ Conclusion The conclusion should be a little more straightforward. Remove the initial section summarizing the results; this has already been presented in the respective section. References L486: Custom Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** Reviewer #1: Introduction- The Introduction is a jumble of sentences without a clear logic. What is the study about? What is the context that justifies the research? What is the research intended to answer? The Introduction should be rewritten to clarify the context, justification, state of the art, and objective of the study. Line 53-54- "As a result, dairy production has grown substantially worldwide, where milk production per cow increased by 88% from 2017 to 2018." Where did milk production per cow increase? It's not possible that this happened worldwide. Line 55-56- "In addition, from 2006 to 2017, fluid milk production increased by 45% country-wide and reached 35.4 billion L in 2020." Which country are you referring to? Material and Methods- The description of the research methodology is incomplete. For example, why was the survey only conducted in the southern and southeastern regions of Brazil? These regions are vast. Where were the producers who received the questionnaires concentrated (state and region)? Were the state and region factors considered in the data analysis? What was the process for developing the 38 questions in the questionnaire (based on the literature)? Was the questionnaire sent only once, or were there multiple attempts? The content between lines 108 and 124 is the result of the questionnaires. Why are they included in the materials and methods section? Line 39-140- This classification reflects standard benchmarks used in the region to describe small, medium, and large-scale dairy operations." What is the reference for this classification? Results- The results are discussed superficially, descriptively, without critical analysis of the findings and their meaning. Lines 153-155- 138 responses , 21 blank responses and 33 incomplete surveys were excluded from the dataset. The final analysis was conducted using the remaining 82 complete responses. The correcte number is 84 Lines 157-159. It is important to note that the number of respondents represents only a small fraction of the Brazilian dairy producer population, which totaled approximately 1.1 million in 2019." But this is the total number of producers in Brazil. It wasn't the study's target audience, but rather only those in confined systems. Reviewer #2: The manuscript ‘Feed Management Practices Used for High-Producing Dairy Cows’ aligns well with the scope of PLOS ONE and provides valuable insights into management practices in Brazilian intensive dairy systems. However, minor revisions are required before the manuscript can be accepted. The following suggestions are offered to improve clarity and rigor: Title: The title could be made more informative by including the country, at least, to provide greater precision. Dairy intensive systems in Brazil differ from those in other regions and have unique characteristics, as discussed in the manuscript. Abstract: L31: What was the criterion for selecting those 500? Please add a brief explanation to clarify. Introduction: L54: Review this statement. L56: Please provide an updated value for milk production in Brazil. L58-59: Please revise this sentence, as the phrasing currently resembles AI-generated text format. Ensure it aligns with a natural, academic writing style (review throughout the manuscript). Lines 73-76: The stated objective seems too narrow. Based on the manuscript, the study does not focus solely on high milk production pens but includes herds across low, medium, and high production levels. Consider revising the objective to reflect the full scope of the study. Material and methods: Start the section with approval from the Ethics Committee. L109: This information is duplicate. Please review. L110-124: Please review this text. In my opinion, it does not belong in the Materials and Methods section. Consider moving it to the Discussion or removing it. Results: L164: Review last column format. L166: Standardize with others. L169: I did not understand. L186-187: Blank lines. L191: A reference is not needed if this information comes from the present study. L224-229: Review the use of “;” and “.”. L236: No not use “numerically”. Discussion: It would be interesting to discuss the survey’s representativeness in terms of herd size and production level relative to the Brazilian dairy producer population. L344: Blank line. L355-358: Avoid conclusion statements in each section. L376: Please rephrase. L387: Review to improve readability. L408-410: Please review the text. This result also deserves more discussion and implication “Across all HLMP groups, 83% of producers reported evaluating FE on a monthly basis”. L426-440: I suggest removing this section from the text, as the manuscript is already concise and includes a conclusion section. Conclusion: L444: No dot use methods or results statements in this section. Be objective. Acknowledgements: The Financial Disclosure brings “The author(s) received no specific funding for this work.” . However, they acknowledge “Conselho Nacional de Desenvolvimento Cientifico” for financial support during the study. Please clarify. Reviewer #3: The title should be "Feed management practices used for high-producing dairy cows in Brazil" The manuscript provides important and up-to-date information. However, starting with the title, it should be clear that it refers to dairy systems in Brazil. I recommend having all the manuscript writing and grammar reviewed by a native English speaker. As an example on the first page, there are more appropriate terms, for "furnish" such as "provide" on line 62, or "strategies employed on farms" such as "practices applied on farms" on line 63, and so on throughout the text. There is also incorrect information such as "As a result, dairy production has grown substantially worldwide, where milk production per cow increased by 88% from 2017 to 2018" line 53; It should be clear in phrases like " In addition, from 2006 to 2017, fluid milk production increased by 45% country-wide and reached 35.4 billion L in 2020", especially in the introduction, that you are referring to Brazil. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Feed management practices used for dairy cows in confined dairies in Brazil PONE-D-25-41297R1 Dear Dr. Marcelo B. Abreu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Manasa Varra Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Dear Marcelo B. Abreu, We are happy to inform that the revised manuscript, PONE-D-25-41297R1 entitled "Feed management practices used for dairy cows in confined dairies in Brazil" has addressed all the comments and hence is recommended for acceptance. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The authors have done a good job revising the manuscript. The reviewers’ comments were carefully addressed, and the manuscript has improved in clarity, structure, and overall rigor. This study provides valuable benchmarking data on feed management practices in confined dairy systems in Brazil, relevant for producers, nutritionists, extension professionals, and policymaking within the dairy sector. Reviewer #3: The authors cited that all data are fully available without restriction but state that the data will be made available in a public repository after the manuscript is accepted. "Data will be make available in a public repository upon acceptance of the manuscript" ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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