Peer Review History
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If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: 1. The finding that neck–shoulder–back (NSB) pain increases immersion is unusual and contradicts most prior research. However, the manuscript only provides a brief speculative explanation. 2. The Methods section briefly states that the VR modules covered three nursing skills using Unity and Autodesk 3DS Max, but does not describe scenario difficulty, feedback design, or instructional cues. 3. provide more detailed descriptions of scenario complexity, interactivity levels, feedback mechanisms, and how consistency across participants was ensured. This information is necessary for reproducibility. 4. The paper employs PLS-SEM with a cross-sectional survey and a single VR session. Clarify the justification for using PLS-SEM to test directional hypotheses, especially where causal language is used. Consider explicitly acknowledging limitations due to cross-sectional design and discuss how future longitudinal work could better validate the proposed causal mechanisms. 5. The manuscript lists construct names but does not present the exact questionnaire items in the main text; the reader is directed to “Appendix A,” which is missing in the PDF. Include the full items or ensure Appendix A is attached, and clarify translation/validation procedures if the scales were adapted for a Taiwanese population. Reviewer #2: Overall, the study shows that giving learners ways to actively interact with the system has a stronger impact than simply making the experience immersive. Interactivity boosts their confidence, motivation, and interest, and it also helps reduce unnecessary mental effort. The findings also show that when participants experienced visual discomfort—such as eye strain—it reduced both their sense of immersion and their willingness to interact. Interestingly, people who felt more neck, shoulder, or back pain actually reported feeling more immersed, possibly because they stayed in one posture for too long while deeply engaged. The study further notes that female participants tended to report more visual discomfort, which in turn lowered their immersion and interactivity, and younger participants were more sensitive to how visual discomfort affected their overall immersion. Main Review Questions (These are high-level questions that address the core methodology, interpretation, and contributions of the study. 1.On the Counter-Intuitive Finding of NSB Pain and Immersion: The positive association between neck, shoulder, and back (NSB) pain and immersion (β = 0.272, p < 0.05) is a highly unexpected and central finding. The discussion posits this may be due to heightened bodily awareness enhancing presence. Could the authors elaborate on this interpretation and discuss alternative explanations? For instance, could this correlation be influenced by unmeasured factors, such as the duration or intensity of physical engagement required by the tasks that might independently induce both NSB pain and a higher sense of immersion, making the relationship spurious? 2.Reconciling Causal Hypotheses with a Cross-Sectional Design: The study uses strong causal language in its hypotheses (e.g., "H1: Immersion with VR has positive impacts on...") and discussion, yet the cross-sectional design only allows for establishing correlations. A participant’s pre-existing high self-efficacy, for example, might cause them to perceive higher interactivity, rather than the other way around. How do the authors justify the causal framing of their findings, and could they explicitly address the limitations of inferring causality from their data in the discussion? 3.Investigating the Contradictory Finding on Interactivity and Cognitive Load: The finding that interactivity significantly *reduced* extraneous cognitive load (β = -0.566) directly contradicts hypothesis H2e and the theoretical basis suggesting that complex interactions can increase it. While the authors attribute this to well-designed tasks, this is a significant finding with major implications for instructional design. Could the authors elaborate on how "interactivity" in this specific application was conceptually distinct from the learning task itself? Is it possible that the implemented interactivity functioned as a form of instructional scaffolding (thus reducing cognitive load) rather than as a separate, potentially distracting feature? Minor Revision Questions (These are more specific questions focused on clarity, completeness, and consistency, which are typically easier to address.) 1.Clarification of Exclusion Criteria: Line 282 states that an exclusion criterion was "those who experienced discomfort during VR use." This appears to contradict the study's aim of measuring the effects of physical discomfort. Please clarify this criterion. Was it intended to exclude only participants who experienced debilitating discomfort that required them to withdraw from the training session? 2.Completeness of the Path Model in Figure 2: In Figure 2, the path diagram only presents the final significant paths. For completeness and transparency, please consider adding the non-significant paths that were tested (e.g., from Head Discomfort and Limb Pain to Immersion/Interactivity) as dotted lines with their corresponding non-significant coefficients. This would provide a more comprehensive overview of the full model that was analyzed. 3.Rationale for the Age Cut-Off in Multi-Group Analysis: The multi-group analysis uses a 35-year-old age cut-off, justified by citing Saredakis et al. [44]. Could the authors provide a brief rationale for why this specific cut-off is considered relevant for the current sample of nurse aide trainees? For instance, does this demarcation represent a meaningful split in terms of digital literacy, prior professional experience, or career stage within this cohort? 4.Operationalizing "Embodied Learning": While Appendix A provides the questionnaire items for "Embodied Learning," the concept itself is complex. Could the authors add a brief operational definition in the Methods section (e.g., in 3.3 Measuring instrument) explaining what this construct is intended to capture in the specific context of procedural nursing skills in VR? 5.Specificity of Practical Implications: The conclusions urge educators to "consider these factors when planning VR courses." To make the findings more actionable, could the authors offer more concrete suggestions? For example, based on the results, should training sessions for younger or female participants be designed to be shorter, include more frequent breaks, or utilize different hardware settings to mitigate the greater impact of visual discomfort? 6.The authors may consider citing and discussing the following related study, which presents a similar approach with your work. A. A. Laghari et al., “Quality of experience assessment in virtual/augmented reality serious games for healthcare: A systematic literature review,” Technology and Disability, vol. 36, no. 1–2, pp. 17–28, Feb. 2024, doi: 10.3233/tad-230035. This paper could help strengthen the related work section and provide a clearer comparison with the proposed method. Reviewer #3: The manuscript is overly lengthy and would benefit from tighter organization—several sections contain redundant explanations that hinder readability Some hypotheses lack strong theoretical justification, especially those concerning physical discomfort; more prior literature should be cited to support these claims The discussion of unexpected findings (e.g., NSB pain increasing immersion) is speculative and needs stronger evidence or alternative explanations The multi-group analysis results are interesting, but the interpretation feels superficial—more depth is needed to explain gender and age differences The study relies solely on self-reported questionnaires; the lack of objective physiological or behavioral measures limits the strength of the conclusions ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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<p>Effects of Interactivity, Immersion, and Physical Discomfort on Learning in VR Nursing Education PONE-D-25-54729R1 Dear Dr. Yang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Muhammad Shahid Anwar Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The manuscript presents a comprehensive and well-executed investigation into the effects of immersion and interactivity in VR-based nursing education, with particular attention to learners’ affective, cognitive, and physical experiences. The study is well motivated, employs appropriate VR system design and robust analytical methods (PLS-SEM), and provides clear, meaningful results supported by adequate sample size and multi-group analysis. The findings offer important theoretical contributions and practical implications for designing effective and user-centered VR learning environments in healthcare education. Overall, the paper is methodologically sound, clearly written, and makes a valuable contribution to the field, and I recommend it for acceptance. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: SHILPA SHARMA Reviewer #2: Yes: Avichandra Singh Ningthoujam ********** |
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