Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 10, 2024 |
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If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review your paper. Overall, I think it's a straightforward paper that is easy to read and understand. My main comment is that I would like to see some more discussion on what your findings actually mean. You show that patients injured by low-energy falls are older, have more TBI and higher mortality, but overall receive "lower intensity" care. Do you think this is adequate, or should it change? The death rate in the UK population among 45-49 year olds is something like 2-3 per 1000 population per year, whereas it is 50-70 per 1000 population per year for 80-84 year olds. So maybe the mortality difference is not very surprising? You state that it is challenging triage older patients, but do you think they should be triaged differently, and if so, why? You acknowledge that some of your findings are difficult to interpret, but I think you can do more to connect your suggestions for future research with your findings. For example, what type of brain injuries do the low-energy falls patients have and can the differences in neurosurgical intervention be justified? In addition to strengthening the discussion, I have the following comments and suggestions for changes: - You write "However, recent studies in high income countries have identified injuries from low-energy transfer mechanisms, such as falls less than two metres, as the most common cause of major trauma presenting to hospital.", but your references are only from England and Wales. Do you have any references from other countries? - Add spaces between sentences and citations, replace for example "Classifying injuries by energy transfer has received growing attention recently by trauma systems(1–3)" with "Classifying injuries by energy transfer has received growing attention recently by trauma systems (1–3)." - Move the TARN eligibility criteria to the Participants section. - Please add a Variables section and specify your demographics, care processes and outcomes. From the variables you list under Statistical methods, it looks like you're studying variables that cannot be classified as demographics, care processes or outcomes, for example GCS and ISS. - Please add a Data sources section and clarify how the variables were measured. For example, "Pre-existing medical conditions", how were they measured? - Clarify how missing data was handled. - Clarify how you dealt with different follow-up times. - Add the total number of patients included in the study to the beginning of the Results section. - Present the amount of missing data for each variable in the Results section. I suggest you include this information in table 1. - Please be consistent in how you present confidence intervals and p-values. For example, in one place you write "Patients injured by low-energy falls (53.6%, n=16,087) were older (median age 80 vs. 47 years", but in another place you write "the low-energy falls cohort were less than half as likely to present with severe impairment of consciousness (GCS 3-8, 6.0% vs. 15.3%; p<0.001)". I suggest you include the p-values in all comparisons, or preferably the differences and associated confidence intervals, especially as you write that because of the large numbers more or less all differences are statistically significant. - Spell out MTC the first time it is used. - I don't see that you include anything on the differences in the anatomical distribution of injuries between the two groups in the Results section. As far as I can see, it looks like the low-energy falls cohort has more isolated head injuries whereas the high-energy falls cohort has more multiple injuries. I suggest you include something on this in the text. - The paragraph "The low-energy falls cohort stayed on average one day (median nine vs. eight days) longer in hospital but had shorter critical care stays (median three vs. four days). Hospital mortality was 3.5% greater in the low-energy falls cohort (16.1% [95%CI 15% - 17%] vs. 12.6% [95%CI 12% - 13%]; p=<0.0001) (Table 2)" does not match the table, or did you by mistake use the wrong column headings? Because the columns in the table are reversed compared to the paragraph, and compared to table 1. Reviewer #2: Really clear message. Most trauma is low velocity. the ageing population mean its growing. Reference to the NHFD work on improving outcomes maybe needed for all frailty fractures may add to the discussion. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Martin Gerdin Wärnberg Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org |
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Dear Dr. Lecky, Please consider the reviewers' suggestions, in particular re the need to add further details on your analyses, and/or to justify not using a multivariable analysis to support your findings. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 19 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. 2. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thank you for consider my previous feedback. I do have some additional comments: 1. Characteristics actually works quite well in the title, rather than the long "demographics, vital signs, injury patterns" that you have added. My main point in the previous round was that you study many variables which are not demographics, but these are well captured by "characteristics". I would probably keep the title as "Comparative analysis of the characteristics, care pathways, interventions and outcomes of English and Welsh major trauma patients injured by high versus low energy transfer mechanisms in 2019." 2. Align the aim with the above comment, it still reads as "demographics, care processes and outcomes" and still doesn't cover the vital signs and injury patterns, for example. 3. Include p-values in the abstract. 4. I've put No in response to the question "Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?". The reason is that you still do not present differences with appropriate uncertainty (for example 95% CIs), but only p-values, for example (58.3% vs. 33.0%; p<0.001). It would be more informative to see an estimate of the difference with uncertainty. 5. Move the information about the missing data to the beginning of the results section, see STROBE. Reviewer #3: Overall, I find this an interesting article that draws attention to the changing trauma population. I have a few suggestions for improvement. - Titel: I prefer a shorter title, e.g. Comparative analysis of the characteristics, care pathways, and outcomes of English and Welsh major trauma patients injured by high versus low energy transfer mechanisms - Introduction - The aim is stated as: “Therefore, the aim of our study was to compare the demographics, care processes and outcomes of patients with severe injuries caused by low and high-energy transfer mechanisms.”. I assume that the underlying question is whether the care provided for high-energy trauma is also appropriate or necessary for low-energy trauma cases. I feel this link is missing in the final paragraph of the introduction. - Method section; o Please indicate in the methods section which version of the AIS was used. o Minor detail: In section Participants: “After study inclusion, a dataset of prospectively recorded variables covering demographics plus injury-related physiological, 7 investigation, treatment and outcome parameters are collated” has to be is collated. o Variables: 1. Pre-existing medical conditions do not fall under the category of demographic data, add a category clinical data or change demographics to patient characteristics. 3. Change penetrating in Penetrating or blunt - Results: The p-values are described, but not showed in the tables. Please add a column in the tables with p-values. - Statistical methods: o Under ordinal variables AIS is mentioned. I assume that it concerns the AIS severity, otherwise it is not ordinal. o Glasgow Coma Scale can be abbreviated to GCS in the second paragraph. o I wonder why the authors did not conduct a multivariable analysis to compare the two groups on outcome and adjust for characteristics of patients and injury (age, comorbidity, severity of injury etc)? It is currently difficult to draw firm conclusions about whether low-fall patients are inappropriately receiving higher-level care. It appears that they are less severely injured but older and therefore more likely to be transported to a non-major trauma center (nMTC). It is in line with the comment of reviewer 1 that it is no surprise that the low fall group has a higher mortality. I would strongly advise to do a more sophisticated comparison between high and low falls to add more depth to the manuscript. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Martin Gerdin Wärnberg Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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