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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: In this manuscript, the researchers attempted to review implementation science and quality improvement strategies to promote uptake of equitable, evidence-informed care for pregnant or birth people with SUDS in acute hospital-based settings. In addition, they wanted to identify barriers to care based on these interventions. The overall search strategy was well designed; however, there are some methodological issues to consider. Major areas to address include the following: 1. Studies included in this review were too heterogeneous. The timeline for the literature search was based on publication dates of 8 different "guidelines" or "best practice recommendation documents"; however, the implementation strategies were not linked back to best practice recommendations. Meaning that the studies included in this review consisted of any intervention to address SUD among pregnant persons. 2. Specifying outcomes of interest prior to the literature search The methods did not specify which outcomes were the focus of this review - was it changing provider knowledge, attitudes and behaviours or patient engagement in care? From the introduction, it seemed that both were desired outcomes but these are such broad categories that I would suggest narrowing down the studies to focus on one audience for interventions. 3. Table 2 contains too many columns and too much information. It does not provide enough details for the reader to understand the kind of interventions that were used in these studies. For example, type of substance use is irrelevant since only a minority focused on opioids and the rest on any substance use. So this may be a column to eliminate. Similarly, the heading of "strategy actor" was confusing. 4. Funding is from Canada but review is focused on US based interventions - this seems Overall, this review included studies with too much heterogeneity in terms of audience for interventions and types of interventions to make meaningful summary statements. This limits the utility of this summary and not clear how it would be used to guide future implementation strategies. No definite conclusions could be made. Researchers may opt to narrow target audience to hospital providers since the focus of acuter care settings in this review was on hospital-based programs. Reviewer #2: Overall Review This is a well written and important manuscript that presents a systematic scoping review on strategies for implementing evidence-informed care for pregnant and birthing people with substance use disorders (SUDs) in acute care settings. In light of the evolving substance use crisis in the United States, this study is timely, well-structured, and contributes significantly to the literature on maternal healthcare and SUD treatment. Further, this publication can serve as a resource for clinicians and researchers to address implementation gaps in perinatal care. The paper is well written and thorough, and I have a few minor comments and suggestions for the authors. I hope the authors find them helpful. Comments 1. Introduction. The introduction effectively outlines the problem but could benefit from more discussion on the intersection of SUDs and maternal health disparities to provide additional context. 2. Pp. 9 lines 193-194 and figure 1. The manuscript does not specify why 1,037 out of the 1,101 studies were excluded. Providing a brief explanation—such as lack of alignment with study objectives, absence of perinatal populations, or other relevant criteria—would improve clarity and consistency with the other reported exclusions. 3. Methods in general. It would be beneficial to specify how grey literature findings were integrated into the review to ensure reproducibility (e.g., How were grey literature sources evaluated for relevance and quality? Were they screened using the same inclusion/exclusion criteria as peer-reviewed studies? Were grey literature findings analyzed separately or synthesized with peer-reviewed studies?) 4. The racial equity lens assessment is commendable, but I wonder if authors could also describe how racial equity was coded (i.e. how was it identified and analyzed during data extraction? Did authors use a predefined framework (e.g., an existing racial equity assessment tool) or develop their own criteria? Was there a process to ensure consistency between reviewers in identifying racial equity considerations?). 5. Results. The manuscript notes that only 4 studies considered racial equity explicitly. It would be useful to also explore whether these studies showed implementation success. 6. The discussion effectively contextualizes findings within the broader healthcare landscape but could further explore implications for policymakers and hospital administrators. 7. Consider elaborating on sustainability challenges for SUD interventions in acute care settings. How do funding models and policy environments influence implementation success? ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Dear Dr. King, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Editor's comments Authors are required to make all data underlying the findings described fully available, without restriction, and from the time of publication. PLOS allows rare exceptions to address legal and ethical concerns. See the PLOS Data Policy and FAQ for detailed information. Kindly follow the instructions on data availability statement and provide clear reasons as to why the data cannot be made available. Please ensure consistency of the subject, research objective, methods, and conclusions made when revising. Your objective does mention that you are looking at strategies to "promote uptake of equitable, evidence-informed care for pregnant or birth people with SUDS in acute hospital-based settings". `From this objective we expect the focus of the paper to be on strategies to increase demand and hence uptake. Your response was that you "summarized the outcomes that were measured by the studies (i.e., changes to provider knowledge or attitudes, uptake of medications for SUD treatment)." This is not clear since your objective has specified the outcome to be "adoption/uptake". For every atrategy listed, the readers need to see how they are related to adoption/uptake of equitable, evidence-informed care for pregnant or birth people with SUDS. Even though scoping reviews cover wide topics, you are still limited to what your objectives are. Kindly revise accordingly. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 09 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Kind regards, Belinda J Njiro, M.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thanks for your responses and changes in response to previous comments. 1. Introduction Thanks for the clarifications as outlined in your response letter. I appreciated the attempt to specify which recommendations were included as follows "... including SUD treatment referrals, medications for addiction treatment, harm reduction resources and education, and non-punitive/non-stigmatizing care, could help improve quality of care and address inequitable SUD treatment gaps. [11, 12, 30]". These are broad categories in themselves and overlapping. For example, medications to address SUD are generally considered as harm reduction strategies. I would suggest picking 2 or 3 specific recommendations such as medications or referrals to addiction treatment programs and then evaluating how these were implemented. You stated that "We exclude aspects of care that are best practices for pregnant and birthing people with SUDs, but that do not directly address SUDs"; however, in the section on system level changes, the use of supports during labour and delivery to help with intrapartum ?pain was included which is not directly related to SUD. 2. Methodology You have indicated that you followed the PRISM flowchart for scoping reviews; however, the checklist for this methodology still requires clear indication of "Data items in section 11 - List and define all variables for which data were sought and any assumptions and simplifications made." Therefore, the outcomes of interest for this review would be helpful. Overall, organizing articles into 3 categories provided a structure for this review but the 3 topics themselves are very broad. Changing provider attitudes was not linked to change in practice which would be more meaningful in terms of evidence for educational interventions or persistent change in attitudes at months post-intervention. These specifics would be more meaningful in terms of determining what has been effective and what should be changed in future interventions. As mentioned previously, this review's broad focus leads to inclusion of studies with too much heterogeneity in terms of audience for interventions and types of interventions to make meaningful summary statements. Reviewer #2: I thank the authors for thoroughly addressing reviewer comments and editing the manuscript thoughtfully. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thank you to the authors for addressing the reviewer comments and making the indicated revisions to this manuscript. Overall, the clarifying points made this manuscript easier to follow. However, there are a couple of brief feedback points that I would like to highlight. 1. Title: thanks for revising the title; however, I am not sure if "Integrating" is the correct descriptive word of the strategies, the description oft he types of services lead to perhaps "implementing" or "adopting" since some of the strategies occurred only once (eg. educational initiatives). 2. Introduction: The intro section is very long - 3 page and there are many facts presented; however, it would be easier to follow where the article is going by having a more cohesive presentation. The terminology "acute care settings" sounds confusing since the main focus is hospital inpatient care so why not label it as such. Acute care settings refer to both outpatient and inpatient settings, but this review is aimed at inpatient hospital setting primarily. 3. Outcomes under data extraction are mentioned very vaguely. It appears that there were no predefined outcomes and that researchers accepted all published outcomes of various strategies. Grouping studies into five types makes the vast amount of information provided much easier to follow and to understand. Overall, there is a heterogeneous mix of services and strategies presented which suggests a wide variation in types of strategies even within one category which lends to difficulty in future studies. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Implementing substance use services into acute care settings for pregnant and birthing people: A systematic scoping review of implementation and quality improvement strategies PONE-D-24-60102R3 Dear Dr. King, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Kingston Rajiah Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): The authors have addressed the reviewers comments Reviewers' comments: |
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