Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 16, 2026 |
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-->PONE-D-26-04324-->-->Impact of blood pressure control during pregnancy on long-term maternal cardiovascular health – secondary analysis of a follow-up study 15 years post preeclampsia (PAVA study)-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Groten, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 26 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: This manuscript presents a secondary analysis of the PAVA study investigating whether blood pressure control during pregnancies complicated by preeclampsia and/or fetal growth restriction influences long-term maternal cardiovascular health approximately 15 years postpartum. The authors analyzed a subgroup of 53 women and compared those who were hypertensive at follow-up with those who were normotensive. Blood pressure values during pregnancy were retrospectively retrieved from medical records. Cardiovascular outcomes were assessed using comprehensive clinical evaluation, transthoracic echocardiography, and VICORDER measurements. Statistical analyses included non-parametric group comparisons and multivariable logistic regression models adjusted for pre-pregnancy BMI, gestational age at delivery, and blood pressure control during pregnancy. Overall, the article addresses a clinically relevant and timely question. The idea of linking the degree of blood pressure control during pregnancy with long-term cardiovascular outcomes is important and relevant in light of evolving treatment targets. The methodology appears appropriate, cardiovascular phenotyping at follow-up is comprehensive, the statistical analyses are generally adequate, and the results are clearly described. Nevertheless, several issues should be addressed: Limited sample size and statistical power The analyses are based on a relatively small cohort, with very small subgroup sizes for trimester-specific blood pressure data. Some regression models include few events, resulting in wide confidence intervals. While the authors acknowledge the lack of statistical significance, the Discussion occasionally suggests a protective effect despite non-significant findings. The interpretation should be more cautious and clearly framed as exploratory. Potential confounding and baseline group differences Women who were hypertensive at follow-up differed significantly in BMI, smoking behavior, education level, and physical activity (Table 1). These variables are strongly associated with cardiovascular risk and may confound the observed associations. Adjustment was limited, and residual confounding cannot be excluded. A more detailed discussion of these differences and their potential impact on the findings would strengthen the manuscript. Definition and completeness of blood pressure control during pregnancy Blood pressure data during pregnancy were incomplete (e.g., no first-trimester data, missing values in later trimesters). The definition of “blood pressure in target range” (all recorded values ≤135/85 mmHg) appears strict and may lead to misclassification, especially in women with sparse documentation. The authors should discuss how missing data and variable documentation frequency might have influenced the categorization and results. Separation of Results and Discussion In the Discussion, the authors repeatedly restate specific numerical results (e.g., odds ratios and p-values, as well as explicit references to Table 1 and Table 4). In my view, detailed reporting of numerical findings belongs primarily in the Results section, whereas the Discussion should focus more on interpretation, contextualization, and implications. Reiterating exact ORs and p-values in the Discussion can blur the structural distinction between sections and may give additional weight to statistically non-significant findings. I would recommend streamlining the Discussion by summarizing the direction and magnitude of effects without repeating detailed statistics, and by placing greater emphasis on interpretation rather than result reporting. In summary, this is a well-conceived and clinically relevant exploratory study with appropriate methodology and clearly presented results. Addressing the points above—particularly by ensuring cautious interpretation and clearer structural separation between Results and Discussion—would further strengthen the manuscript. Reviewer #2: The current study goal is to evaluate whether blood pressure values during pregnancy impact on maternal long-term cardiovascular health and to analyze the effect of blood pressure control during pregnancy on the cardiovascular risk profile obtained during the PAVA study. Obviously there is no sample size calculation as this is a retrospective evaluation. 1. However, the study does have the limit of being subject to poor design conditions and perhaps having an insufficient sample to properly address the objectives. 2. Also in the abstract what is the meaning of the phrase,’ Furthermore, although due to the small sample size not reaching significance, adjusted analysis did …….. etc’? Reaching what significance? There was no calculated sample size to reach any effect size goals. What effects, differences , etc. were the investigators striving for, if any? 3. Using non parametric analyses implies that the sample size was anticipated to be small. 4. Also in the Statistical analysis section and later in the analysis results what ‘binary regression’ was used? Presumably logistic regression? Please be specific as to what analysis is being used when presenting the results? 5. Using the term, ’hypothesis’ in the Conclusion, lines 58-60 in the Abstract may be inappropriate. Perhaps the term , ‘goal’, or ‘aim’ may be more appropriate. 6. There are many comparisons being made in Tables 1 to 3 for such a small sample. This could be a multiple comparisons issue and there is no mention made of p-value adjustments. This , well as the small sample, should be listed as a limitation in the ‘Discussion’ section and the reader notified that the significant results should be interpreted with caution. 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Impact of blood pressure control during pregnancy on long-term maternal cardiovascular health – secondary analysis of a follow-up study 15 years post preeclampsia (PAVA study) PONE-D-26-04324R1 Dear Dr. Groten, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Vincenzo Lionetti, M.D., PhD Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #1: Yes: Ulrich Pecks Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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