Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 3, 2025 |
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-->PONE-D-25-37051-->-->Efficacy of routine tuberculosis education in Kampala, Uganda: A prospective observational cohort study-->-->PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Davis, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Overall, reviewers found the manuscript well written, relevant, and ethically sound but identified several key areas for clarification and improvement. The most significant issues concern terminology consistency and study design alignment —authors should replace “efficacy” with “effectiveness” throughout and ensure that objectives, methods, analyses, and conclusions align accordingly. Conceptual clarity is needed around definitions of “TB knowledge,” distinguishing overall knowledge from disease- and treatment-specific domains, and explaining how counselling fits within an education-focused intervention. Reviewers also request greater transparency in methods and analyses , including justification for the sample size, details on how TB knowledge scores were calculated and weighted, clarification of statistical assumptions, and presentation of results according to objectives. Visual and structural improvements (figures showing study timing and knowledge change, clearer tables, and possible inclusion of flipchart images) were encouraged. Additional comments highlight the need to describe language adaptation of materials , factors influencing delivery modes , instrument reliability , and data sharing compliance . Finally, reviewers recommend discussing the feasibility, scalability, and potential cost implications of implementing structured TB education within routine care. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 13 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Conceptual clarity is needed around definitions of “TB knowledge,” distinguishing overall knowledge from disease- and treatment-specific domains, and explaining how counselling fits within an education-focused intervention. Reviewers also request greater transparency in methods and analyses, including justification for the sample size, details on how TB knowledge scores were calculated and weighted, clarification of statistical assumptions, and presentation of results according to objectives. Visual and structural improvements (figures showing study timing and knowledge change, clearer tables, and possible inclusion of flipchart images) were encouraged. Additional comments highlight the need to describe language adaptation of materials, factors influencing delivery modes, instrument reliability, and data sharing compliance. Finally, reviewers recommend discussing the feasibility, scalability, and potential cost implications of implementing structured TB education within routine care. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: Very well written manuscript. However, a few modifications would be of added value. 1. A simple arrow diagram showing timing of education delivery and points of knowledge assessment would be useful to visually summarize the process. 2. It would be good to know if the use of flipchart for education sessions and the use of individual vs group counselling, had any impact on the knowledge scores. 3. A visual depiction of changing knowledge scores across time would be useful. 4. The flipbook cited is in English. Is it used in same language in Kampala or are there any regional languages? In case yes, was the flipbook available in regional language? Reviewer #2: the study conclusions are hinged on the sample size computed based on one of the objectives. it is unclear whether all objectives especially the TB knowledge increase would be evaluable. Hence the statistical approach needs a further review. Reviewer #3: This manuscript presents a well-conducted prospective observational cohort study evaluating the effectiveness of routine tuberculosis (TB) education on patient knowledge and adherence in Kampala, Uganda. The research question is relevant, the design appropriate, and the manuscript consistent with PLOS ONE’s scope, which values methodological rigor and data transparency over novelty. The article is technically sound and ethically compliant. The writing is clear, and the authors present results in a balanced and cautious manner. Minor revisions would enhance clarity, reproducibility, and alignment with PLOS ONE reporting standards. 1. Structure and presentation The paper is well organized. The Abstract correctly reports the study design, sample size, and key findings. The Introduction provides appropriate background and justification. The Methods are clear and well referenced; a short statement linking the selected knowledge domains to WHO TB education frameworks would add conceptual strength. Tables and figures are relevant and clearly labeled; Table 3 could benefit from slightly improved formatting of headings and footnotes. The Discussion is well written but could emphasize implications and scalability rather than restating results. The English is fluent and professional. Minor stylistic improvements (shorter sentences, consistent terminology, uniform abbreviations) would further improve readability. 2. Methodology and statistical reporting The analytic methods are appropriate and transparently described. The use of Poisson regression is suitable for count data, though the manuscript should clarify whether model assumptions were verified. If overdispersion was tested and found acceptable, please state so explicitly. Reporting robust standard errors (sandwich estimators) would reassure readers about the stability of estimates in repeated measures. Loss to follow up (23/80) is described; including a short comparison of baseline characteristics between completers and non-completers would address potential attrition bias. The small sample size is acknowledged—this should be explicitly linked to the wider confidence intervals observed in adherence-related analyses. The newly developed TB knowledge instrument is an asset of the study. Including a brief description of its internal consistency (e.g., Cronbach’s alpha) in supplementary material would strengthen validity evidence. 3. Interpretation and discussion The authors interpret results carefully, avoiding causal overstatements and recognizing limitations. The discussion effectively situates findings within the context of TB program implementation. Adding a concise reflection on the feasibility and scalability of integrating structured education into national programs would enhance applied relevance. 4. Data transparency and ethics The study meets international ethical standards and includes appropriate approvals. To fully comply with PLOS ONE’s data-sharing policy, please ensure the anonymized dataset and analysis code are publicly available (Dryad/Zenodo) with a DOI cited in the Data Availability Statement. 5. Summary This is a rigorous, ethically robust, and well-written study providing practical insights into patient education and adherence in TB care. With minor revisions—mainly clarifying statistical assumptions, adding instrument reliability data, and refining the presentation—it will fully meet PLOS ONE’s standards for clarity and reproducibility. Recommendation: Accept after minor revision. Reviewer #4: This is an interesting study examining the impact of TB education on adherence, strengthened by specifically studying domains within the larger topics of TB disease and treatment for impact. The study is clear and easy to follow. As health departments face increasing funding constraints, it would be useful to have some indication in the methods and discussion of the amount of time that was spent on individual and group education at the first visit, the follow up visits, and for each domain topic. The information could help provide an idea of staff cost added for TB education. I would also be interested in seeing a follow up study on cost-effectiveness. Lastly, images of the flipchart that was used might be of interest to readers as well, and if possible, to provide in the appendix. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy .--> Reviewer #1: Yes: Swathi Krishna Njarekkattuvalappil Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Robert Arana Narvaez Reviewer #4: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Effectiveness of routine tuberculosis education in in a high-burden setting: A prospective observational cohort study PONE-D-25-37051R1 Dear Dr. Davis, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: The manuscript is close to publishable and the main message is clear: routine TB education improves TB knowledge in the short term, but sustained “TB literacy” remains uncommon. Before acceptance, I recommend the following minor but essential revisions: Mandatory editorial correction: The title contains an obvious duplication (“in in a high-burden setting”). Please correct this and complete a final language/consistency pass (PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts). Intervention clarity and consistency: Please ensure consistent terminology throughout (e.g., “education” vs “counseling”) and provide a brief, standardized description of the minimum intervention components (core topics covered, who delivers it, and approximate duration). Cautious interpretation: When discussing clinical end outcomes, keep conclusions appropriately cautious and aligned with the programmatic/observational nature of the study; avoid strong causal wording. Key limitations: Please explicitly emphasize that adherence was self-reported and may be affected by recall/social desirability bias, and that loss to follow-up may influence estimates of knowledge retention. Recommendation: Minor revision. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy .--> Reviewer #2: Yes: eric wobudeya Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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