Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 24, 2025 |
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Additional Editor Comments: In general, both reviewers are supportive of the work that has been presented, but some methodological issues that need attention have been highlighted. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Summary This manuscript examines the role of concurrent training (CT)—the integration of aerobic and strength exercise—within cardiac rehabilitation (CR) for patients with coronary artery disease (CAD). The authors describe the study as a scoping review conducted according to PRISMA-ScR guidelines and registered on the Open Science Framework. Fourteen clinical trials were included. The review concludes that CT improves aerobic capacity, muscle strength, and functional performance, while effects on physical activity (PA) and health-related quality of life (HrQoL) remain inconsistent. The topic is clinically important, timely, and relevant to advancing exercise-based CR. However, the manuscript shows a conceptual mismatch between its stated design (scoping review) and the methodology and interpretation used (which align more closely with a systematic review). Substantial revision is required to achieve conceptual and methodological coherence. Major Comments Introduction In the final paragraph of the introduction, the authors state that “a systematic synthesis of available evidence is warranted” but then identify the study as a scoping review. This creates terminological inconsistency from the outset. If the intent was to “characterise and map” CT protocols, the term “scoping review” is appropriate, but the outcome synthesis should remain descriptive. If the goal is to evaluate the effectiveness of CT, the study should be reframed and registered as a systematic review. Methods Several methodological issues warrant attention: The restriction to clinical trials only contradicts the exploratory scope of a scoping review, which typically includes a broader range of study designs. The search strategy is not fully presented, and there is no mention of grey literature, conference abstracts, or manual reference checking. Revise the inclusion criteria to justify why only clinical trials were selected, or broaden eligibility to include other study designs consistent with scoping review methodology. Results The Results section is detailed, thorough, and well-organized, providing granular data on study characteristics, intervention parameters, and outcome domains. However, it reads more like a systematic synthesis than a scoping overview. The authors provide statistical detail and comparative analysis rather than mapping the breadth of evidence or identifying knowledge gaps, which limits the alignment with scoping review principles. Discussion The Discussion is comprehensive and clinically grounded, effectively situating findings within the broader literature. It highlights heterogeneity in CT delivery and the need for standardised exercise prescriptions. However, it again adopts language and interpretation typical of a systematic review, focusing on intervention effectiveness rather than evidence mapping. The discussion could be improved by synthesising how study design, CR phase, and delivery setting influence outcomes and by restructuring the “gaps” section to align with the PCC (Population, Concept, Context) framework. Reviewer #2: This scoping review sought to describe the effects of concurrent training (CT), a combination of aerobic and resistance exercises, across various health-related outcomes compared with standard care in patients diagnosed with coronary artery disease (CAD). The systematic search identified fourteen studies involving a total of 1,126 participants. Overall, the findings suggest that CT leads to improvements in exercise capacity, muscle strength, and functional performance among individuals with CAD. However, its influence on physical activity levels and health-related quality of life remains inconsistent. The authors attributed these mixed results to variations in exercise prescription across studies and highlight the need for more standardised research to clarify the long-term impact of CT in cardiac rehabilitation settings. This scoping review offers a valuable synthesis of existing literature and identifies key gaps in current understanding of CT’s role in clinical populations. In particular, it provides novel insights by emphasizing the limited evidence surrounding the benefits of CT programs for patients with CAD. Nonetheless, several minor issues and clarifications remain to be addressed to enable a more accurate understanding of the findings. Comments: Line 35: Please add a dot above the “V” in the VO2 abbreviation and ensure that the “2” is consistently formatted as a subscript throughout the manuscript (e.g., in Table 3). Lines 35-36: Could you please clarify what is meant by moderate and high-intensity format? Does the term “intensity” refer to the aerobic training, the strength training, or both? Line 48: Change to “cardiovascular diseases remain a leading…” (remove the). Lines 61: Consider adding a definition of concurrent training here, along with the abbreviation “CT.” Lines 109-110: Please clarify whether four or five databases were used, as only four examples are cited. Adjust accordingly. Lines 110-111: Could you clarify what was done in July 2025? What revisions were made since October 2023? Lines 111-112: Please add the range of publication years for the oldest and most recent studies included. Lines 113-114: Add quotation marks around “CAD” and “rehabilitation.” Line 116: A closing bracket is missing after “fitness.” Line 156: In the abstract, it is mentioned that there were no adverse events. However, this is not addressed in the results section. Please clarify. Lines 161: Add the total sample size and the number of female participants. Additionally, were there studies that included only male or only female participants? Line 177: Could you specify what is meant by “conducted in separate sessions”? Line 218: This paragraph mentions that one study did not report a significant improvement in VO2peak compared to aerobic training. What about the other studies? Lines 310-312: The exercise prescription could also have influenced the results. The mixed findings open the door for future research exploring different combinations of aerobic and strength training. Does intensity or frequency matter? Line 330: I also think it is important to highlight the lack of studies examining sex differences in response to combined training (CT). Does sex influence the physiological or functional adaptations to CT? This is an important question that has not been sufficiently addressed or emphasized in this scoping review and warrants further discussion. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Dear Dr. Latir, Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 19 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Juan M. Murias Academic Editor PLOS One Journal Requirements: If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The manuscript has been improved and addresses the previous comments. The only minor issue is to ensure that all abbreviations are clearly defined at first mention and used consistently throughout the text. Reviewer #2: I appreciate the authors’ continued efforts to address the previous comments and suggestions. The manuscript has improved overall. However, several minor issues remain that require clarification, and correction. In particular, greater consistency is needed in terminology, definitions, and reporting across sections, especially in the Abstract and Results. Abstract • Line 24: The term “modalities” is too vague. Please specify by adding “exercise” before “modalities.” • Line 25: Revise to “to improve cardiovascular and musculoskeletal health.” • Lines 30-31: The supplementary file indicates that the final search was conducted in early December 2025. Please clarify this discrepancy. To avoid confusion, I suggest stating simply that the search was conducted in December 2025, covering the period from 2000 to 2025. • Lines 35-36: Please clarify the distinction between aerobic interval training (AIT) and high-intensity interval training (HIIT) in the Methods section. • Lines 36-37 and 40: All abbreviations should be defined at first mention even in the abstract. • Lines 44-45: This sentence appears redundant and does not add new or relevant information. I suggest removing it. Introduction The introduction provides an overall good understanding of the goal of the research which to better understand the use of concurrent training in CR program; however, the rational may benefits from adding current guideline recommendations to better contextualise the use of aerobic and strength exercises. • Line 53: The abbreviation CVD is typically used without an “s” at the end. • Line 74: Please remove the duplicate use of the abbreviation CT. • Line 76: Rephrase to “on a separate day throughout the training program.” • Lines 91–92: Please remove “which integrates aerobic and strength training within the same programme,” as this has already been stated earlier and is redundant. Methods • Line 122: Should this date be December 2025, as stated in the supplementary file? • Line 151: A reference could be added here. Results Overall, the Results section provides a well-detailed overview of the characteristics and outcomes of the included studies, facilitating the understanding of the current diversity in CT protocols used across CR programs. However, several revisions are needed to improve clarity, consistency, and readability. Moreover, it is described that • Lines 166-169: The flow of study selection is unclear. Based on the description, 22 articles were identified, 4 were inaccessible, and 10 were excluded, leaving 8 studies. However, you later state that 14 studies were screened for eligibility. Please reconcile these numbers. • Line 173: I recommend a more cautious interpretation. In the Methods (line 150), a score >60% is defined as good methodological quality. • Line 180: Please report the overall sex distribution as percentages. • Lines 205-207: As in the abstract, please clarify the difference between AIT and HIIT. • Table 2: For reference 41, please explain why the intervention is labeled as HIIT + ST rather than CT. • Line 217: Correct to “maximum heart rate.” • Line 219: Please clarify what is meant by “based on VT and power output.” Does this refer to a specific percentage of power output at VT? • Line 220: Please explain the difference between peak work rate and peak power output. • Line 221: Clarify what is meant by “target heart rate.” Is this a predicted heart rate? • Line 221: VO2peak has already been defined; there is no need to redefine it. • Line 222: Similarly, the distinction between HRpeak and HRmax is unclear and potentially confusing. I recommend selecting one term and using it consistently. • Lines 224-225: There appears to be an issue with references [40] and [34]. • Line 228: Please clarify what is meant by “reciprocally.” • Line 241: RPE has already been defined. • Line 253: VO2peak has already been defined. • Line 256: After “control,” please add “(i.e., no exercise prescription).” • Line 267: Please be more specific. What does “limited changes” refer to? • Line 285: Information regarding participant characteristics appears to be missing. Discussion • Line 299: Please correct to “that integrate both aerobic and strength exercise training.” • Line 348: “assessed” rather than “operationalised” • Line 350: How many studies in your dataset demonstrated greater improvements in VO2peak? • Line 375: Please include the percentage of female participants. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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