Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 22, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-61676-->-->Is There a Cure for Chronic Thromboembolic Pulmonary Hypertension? Long-Term Functional and Exercise Hemodynamic Responses After PEA and BPA-->-->PLOS One?> Dear Dr. Calé, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 29 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Additional Editor Comments: The reviewers have raised substantial concerns regarding this current version of the manuscript. Please address each comment individually in your revision letter. Thank you for this submission. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Cale and colleagues present long term data for 36 (29 in analysis) patients who underwent BPA or PEA in a single centre between 2017 and 2023. The manuscript is generally well written but the results section and conclusion was quite hard to read through due to the length of the sections. Parts of the discussion are not directly relevant to the manuscript and to help the reader should be removed. Specific major comments There were some patients who did not have PH post procedures - did these have better QoL or less steep mPAP-CO slopes? Did the patient on vasodilator therapy vs no vasodilator therapy have any difference in mPAP-CO slope? The number of patients may mean this may not be statistically significant but should be discussed because the title is talking about curing CTEPH patients. The SF36 questionnaire is a general QoL measure and has been shown to be less effective PROM in PH patients compared to specific measures e.g. CAMPHOR, EMPHASIS-10, etc. Why was SF36 chosen. I understand at this stage it cannot be changed but this should be discussed. Other authors have reported exercise haemodynamic outcomes and QoL after BPA and these should be discussed. Specific minor comments In multiples places the authors use the phase "mean systolic pressure" instead of "mean pulmonary artery pressure". Please correct. anestesia (4th line of BPA section on page 8) needs to be corrected. Reviewer #2: This single-centre case series reports the post-treatment status of patients with CTEPH after BPA or PEA. The authors employed a comprehensive assessment, including exercise right-heart catheterisation and patient-reported outcomes. The breadth of phenotyping is a key strength, and the dataset may be valuable in providing a detailed, real-world, single-centre depiction of residual physiological abnormalities after intervention. The reviewer acknowledges the widely held clinical concept that CTEPH is not always fully “curable” even after BPA/PEA, in part because of concomitant small-vessel vasculopathy. Nevertheless, I do not consider that the present dataset, as currently analysed and presented, is sufficient to support such a general conclusion. Accordingly, the current manuscript overreaches by concluding that CTEPH cannot be cured with BPA/PEA. At best, the data show that, in this centre/cohort, physiological normalisation is frequently incomplete. Major comments 1. The conclusion that CTEPH cannot be cured is overstated. This is a single-centre observational case series and cannot support a general statement that BPA/PEA cannot cure CTEPH. The manuscript should instead conclude that complete normalisation was not achieved in many patients in this cohort/centre. 2. “Not curable” requires a clear, operational definition and proof of complete revascularisation. If the authors wish to argue “not curable,” they should define it a priori as persistent abnormalities in (i) resting haemodynamics, (ii) exercise pulmonary vascular response (mPAP/CO slope), and (iii) exercise tolerance despite complete anatomical revascularisation documented by contrast-enhanced CT pulmonary angiography and/or pulmonary angiography and/or V/Q scintigraphy. At present, the manuscript does not demonstrate whether complete revascularisation was achieved after BPA or PEA, making it impossible to distinguish “non-curability” from potentially incomplete reperfusion therapy or residual treatable lesions. 3. Hybrid (PEA + BPA) cases should be included and described. If this work is presented as a single-centre case series describing outcomes after intervention, hybrid management cases should not be excluded. Contemporary CTEPH care often involves BPA after PEA for residual PH (or vice versa), and excluding such patients limits clinical relevance and may bias the interpretation. 4. A comparative analysis of BPA versus PEA is not valid in this dataset. Baseline characteristics, treatment pathways, and background therapy differ substantially between BPA and PEA patients (including pulmonary vasodilator use and process of care). The manuscript should avoid implying a head-to-head comparison and should frame the results as a descriptive case series of outcomes following two distinct treatment strategies. 5. The manuscript is overly long and should be reorganised. The text is verbose, and descriptions of well-established examinations and procedural aspects of BPA/PEA can be substantially shortened. In contrast, it is appropriate to describe the exercise RHC protocol in detail, as protocols vary across centres and materially affect interpretation. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Dear Dr. Calé, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 25 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. 2. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Overall the manuscript is markedly improved. The reviewers have some minor comments to address in your revisions prior to acceptance. We thank you for your substantial work and dedication to the revised version. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: General comments The revised manuscript is substantially improved compared with the previous version. The tone and conclusions are now better aligned with the descriptive, single-centre observational nature of the dataset. I also appreciate the clearer framing of BPA and PEA as distinct treatment pathways rather than as a head-to-head comparative study, as well as the overall streamlining of the text. The inclusion and description of hybrid cases in the supplementary material is a welcome addition. Overall, the manuscript is now much closer to being suitable for publication. I have one remaining major point and a small number of minor comments. Major comment Operator- and centre-dependence should be more explicitly acknowledged as a determinant of post-interventional improvement While the Discussion appropriately avoids over-attributing residual abnormalities to fixed “non-curability,” it still under-emphasizes an important practical consideration: both PEA and BPA are highly operator- and centre-dependent interventions. The magnitude of improvement—and the likelihood of residual physiological abnormalities—can vary meaningfully with procedural strategy, completeness of revascularisation, institutional volume, and operator experience/learning curve. Minor comments 1. “mean systolic pulmonary arterial pressure” in Figure 4 should be corrected. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Kazuya Hosokawa, MD, PhD. Associate professor, Advanced open innovation center, Kyushu University, Fukuoka, Japan ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Residual Physiological Abnormalities After Pulmonary Endarterectomy and Balloon Pulmonary Angioplasty in CTEPH PONE-D-25-61676R2 Dear Dr. Calé, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, R. Jay Widmer Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): We thank the authors for their careful attention to each comment and their thoughtful revisions. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: The revised manuscript is substantially improved compared with the previous version. The authors have responded constructively to prior feedback, and the overall tone and conclusions are now appropriately aligned with the descriptive, single-centre observational nature of the dataset. Overall, I consider that the authors have provided an adequate and appropriate response to the major methodological and conceptual concerns previously raised. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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