Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 29, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-16317Exploring the Interconnections between Antenatal Depression, Birth Outcome, and Postnatal Depression in Rural IndiaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Deepak, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ==============================You are requested to ignore the review comments by Reviewer 2, and respond only to the comments of Reviewers 1 and 3.============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 27 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Comments from the editorial office: Upon internal evaluation of the reviews provided, we kindly request you to disregard the reviewer report provided by Reviewer 2. No amendments are required in response to Reviewer 2’s comments. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review this paper. The paper examines a very interesting topic. The sampling method is very good, and the paper is overall well-written. However, I have a few comments: Please clarify the reasoning behind the exclusion criteria. Please provide a more detailed explanation of the population studied to enhance Reviewer #2: This study presents a current and relevant approach by investigating the impact of depression on the well-being of women in childbirth, a topic of increasing importance in both public health and scientific research. The choice of this topic is justified by the high prevalence of depressive disorders during the perinatal period, which can significantly affect the physical, emotional, and social well-being of women. Previous studies have shown that postpartum depression, in particular, is associated with adverse consequences not only for the mother but also for the development and bonding with the newborn. Despite the merits of the present study, we believe it can be improved. The introduction of this work could be significantly enhanced through a more comprehensive literature review, considering investigations conducted in varied contexts, including different realities and health care systems. Incorporating comparative studies that analyze preventive interventions, early diagnoses, and effective treatments would better support the relevance and innovation of the proposed research. Including up-to-date statistical data on the prevalence of perinatal depression and its short- and long-term consequences would further strengthen the argument for the relevance of this study. From a methodological standpoint, the study is organized and structured appropriately; however, a more in-depth detailing of certain technical aspects is recommended. For example, the chosen research design should be justified based on previous studies that have used similar methodologies and demonstrated effectiveness in collecting and analyzing data on depression in women during the perinatal period. It would also be pertinent to more clearly describe the inclusion and exclusion criteria for participants, the selection of data collection instruments used, and provide detailed consideration of the procedures adopted to ensure the validity and reliability of the results. The presentation of the results, in turn, could benefit from a graphic and structural review. Tables 1, 2, and 3, although presenting valuable information, lack clarity due to their size and complexity. It is suggested to simplify the tables or divide the information into smaller and more specific segments, allowing for a more fluid and objective reading. The discussion of the results is a central aspect of this study and could be considerably enriched. It is essential for the article to thoroughly discuss the impact of the study, both for science and public health. It would be valuable to clearly highlight how the findings align or differ from previous studies and to what extent they bring novel contributions to the knowledge in this area. Comparison with similar research conducted in different cultural and social contexts is fundamental to validate the findings and identify potential limitations. Furthermore, it would be interesting to propose concrete measures based on the obtained results, especially concerning prevention and early intervention. The discussion could include practical recommendations for healthcare professionals, public managers, and institutions that deal directly with the well-being of women in childbirth. Identifying gaps in current knowledge and suggesting new paths for future investigations would also contribute to making the research more comprehensive and relevant. Finally, the conclusions should highlight the importance of the study and its potential practical applications, both in terms of public policies and clinical practice. It is important to emphasize that, although this is a solid and well-structured research study, there are aspects that can be improved, especially regarding the expansion of the bibliography used, the presentation of the results, and the deepening of the discussion. With such improvements, the study could achieve an exponential impact on understanding the phenomenon of perinatal depression and formulating more effective strategies for addressing it. Reviewer #3: Minor Comments 1. Title: Consider making the title more concise, such as: "Antenatal Depression and Its Relationship with Birth Outcomes and Postnatal Depression in Rural India: A Longitudinal Study." 2. Abstract: Well written. However, briefly mention that the 4DSQ was translated and validated. 3. Table Presentation: - Ensure all supplementary tables are accessible and referenced properly in the main text. - Tables could benefit from clearer footnotes explaining abbreviations and reference categories. 4. Discussion: - The cultural interpretation of family structure (nuclear vs extended) is insightful. Consider expanding this considering potential implications for intervention design. - Adding comparative references from rural African or Latin American contexts may increase global relevance. 5. Limitations: - Well discussed. Also consider: - Possible recall bias for subjective variables like 'birth experience'. - Exclusion of women with adverse birth outcomes in Phase II this may have underestimated PND rates. Major Comments 1. Clarity of Hypotheses and Objectives: While the introduction thoroughly presents the background, the research objectives could be made more explicit as testable hypotheses. Consider clearly stating whether you aimed to test direct causal links between AND and PND or examine independent associations. 2. Strength of Longitudinal Design: The use of a longitudinal cohort is commendable. However, the temporal gap between data collection points and the attrition of 49 participants (from 246 to 197) warrants further explanation. Were there any systematic differences between those lost to follow-up and those retained? 3. Statistical Analysis: The use of multivariate logistic regression is appropriate, and the model-building steps are well explained. However: - Some wide confidence intervals (e.g., caste ORs) suggest limited statistical power. Consider discussing this as a limitation. - Clarify whether multicollinearity was tested, especially since education and employment, and caste and religion, were excluded together. 4. Interpretation of Non-significant Results: The lack of significant association between AND and birth outcomes contradicts some prior findings. While the discussion acknowledges this, it would benefit from more critical evaluation of why this may have occurred in your population, beyond nutritional explanations. 5. Measurement Tool 4DSQ: The internal consistency is high, and the tool is clearly described. However, the scale’s cutoff score (≥6 for depression) should be justified based on prior literature or validation work, especially in rural Indian contexts. - Acknowledge the 4DSQ’s use as a screening tool, not a diagnostic one. 6. Ethical and Cultural Context: The mention of in-laws present during interviews is a valuable insight. Please elaborate more on how interviewer bias or social desirability bias might have influenced responses, particularly on sensitive topics like IPV. ********** 6. 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PONE-D-25-16317R1Antenatal Depression and Its Relationship with Birth Outcomes and Postnatal Depression in Rural India: A Longitudinal StudyPLOS One Dear Dr. Deepak, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by latest by Mar 29 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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