Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 21, 2025 |
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors present an interesting study on the ability of the Ordinary Differential Equation framework to model Likert-scale psychometric data over time. Their analysis is well conceived and statistically sound. I would recommend that the authors conduct a limited study on a validation dataset that is similar to the original dataset from the Swedish Adoption/Twin Study on Aging dataset to establish whether the model is generalizable to other datasets that measure similar variables. The authors should discuss potential limitations of the types of data that could be implemented into this framework of analysis to demonstrate where their methods are applicable. This would allow for the conclusions that the authors draw to be more thoroughly founded and validated to determine whether their framework is generalizable. Reviewer #2: Firstly, I wasn’t to applaud the (single?) author for tackling an interesting interdisciplinary topic with mathematical tools. I especially appreciate the author making available the code they used and the transparency of the results. Furthermore, the use of ODEs instead of machine learning makes this research much more useful. I thought the work is creative and spans psychometrics, dynamical systems, and evolutionary theory. I’m a physicist with biological modelling training. Hopefully a person that understands psychometrics is involved in this review. I will try to be helpful in trying to get the best possible paper out of this submission, so please take my bluntness as honest help. Let’s start with the main concept of neuroticism. Neuroticism is broad and overlaps with anxiety, depression, stress reactivity. i.e a “catch-all” for negative affect. Can the author please include the definition of the concept they are using in this research in the introduction? From the methodology, this seems to be a score from a statistical composite trying to capture the individual’s tendency to experience negative emotions such as anxiety, sadness, irritability, or emotional instability (not direct biological measurement). Stating this from the start, will help readers decide whether they wasn’t to read the whole paper or not. From this review, I am operating under the assumption that neuroticism is not a mechanistic unit of biology, but rather a psychometric abstraction. On to the ODE’s: Could you please add clear definitions of each term? how exactly do they encode mutation–selection balance, pleiotropy, metabolic constraints, and environmental feedback? Without the explicit form, the claims remain metaphoric. If this is the intention, please state that. On to entropy: Entropy (bits) and time (years, irregular intervals) have different units. Could the author please provide detail on the parameter units, scaling or nondimensionalization to make the model interpretable and comparable? It’s unclear to me if the entropy is computed at each item level, across respondents, or pooled across items. This choice critically affects interpretation. Could the author please clarify whether entropy reflects individual dispersion or population-level heterogeneity? Also, if entropy is being treated as a mechanistic input (vs a descriptive output), this must be tested through surrogate or intervention experiments—e.g., replacing entropy with randomised traces and showing loss of emergent dynamics. The author should soften their claims about entropy being a “causal driver” unless supported by intervention-style analyses. On to sample size: Given the small sample of timepoints (SATSA waves), parameter values may be poorly constrained. If possible, could the author include identifiability diagnostics (e.g., profile likelihoods, multistart fits, parameter correlation matrices)? If not they could state that there are risks regarding sensitivity due to small sample, and that future work could consider small-sample bias corrections. On to parameters: Parameter identifiability given six SATSA waves is not strong. The author could consider diagnostics such as profile likelihoods, parameter correlation matrices, or sloppiness analyses to provide stronger parameter identification. On to statistics: The author uses fit statistics like RMSE and R^2 over six points, which offers some, evidence for their prediction claims. To provide stronger evidence, the author could implement out-of-sample testing, e.g., leave-one-wave-out, to assess forecast performance. On to the attractor state claims: This is the weakest part of the document, as the attractor evidence is quite thin. Usually, multi-stability claims are supported by bifurcation analyses, phase portraits, and stability basin identification—not just narrative assertion. If the author wants to keep this as evidence that supports the claims, demonstrations of how varying parameters shift attractor landscapes are needed. A similar situation occurs with Lyapunov-Proxy Validity. With only a handful of timepoints, estimating divergence rates is quite unreliable. The authors should validate their Lyapunov-proxy metric on synthetic systems with known dynamics and sampling patterns, or soften their claims. I think the ODEs have proved enough, and this could be future work. You don’t need to use complex techniques at this point, and I think it takes away from the main message of the paper. On to the validation: Benchmarking against an uncoupled null system is too weak; coupling almost always improves fit. Would the authors consider out-of-sample forecasting (leave-one-wave-out), to provide stronger evidence of predictive skill? Further clarifications: “Environment” is described as a recursive driver but is not defined or measured. What specific environmental variable(s) are used, with what lag structure? To justify entropy as a functional driver rather than a descriptive marker, surrogate analyses (e.g., shuffled entropy series) should be used to test whether coupling structure persists. Also, in Line 67: Can you please explain what you mean by a lawful, coherent system? On to documentation: I thought the GitHub repository was much better for me to understand what the author was doing (https://github.com/amr28693/ECTO_system_walkthrough). I will point out there’s a mismatch between what's documented (README notebooks) and what's actually present in the repository, which was a bit confusing. I encourage the author to align the pipeline, labelling, and documentation across branches. Also, I couldn’t find an environment specification (e.g., a requirements.txt) nor the preprocessing pipeline to convert ICPSR data into entropy trajectories. Could the author please add these for reproducibility? Finally, suggestions on shortening the 120 page manuscript: I think this is a very original piece of research, but the length of the manuscript and the highly abstract descriptions detract from the main finding. To turn it into a sharp, publishable article, the author should trim aggressively to highlight the core conceptual contribution and leave secondary explorations for appendices or follow-ups. For a journal such as Plos One, I would expect a 20–25 pages document. I would suggest the following pipeline: 1 – Identify the Core Contribution Define the one main idea: ECTO = entropy-reduced psychometric trajectories embedded in coupled ODEs that exhibit structured attractor dynamics. Clarify novelty: not “I did everything,” but I show entropy can serve as a dynamical variable that yields attractor behaviour for a long-standing trait (neuroticism). Choose one flagship dataset: focus on SATSA neuroticism (or one trait), not multiple traits or ecology extensions. 2 – Streamline Structure Abstract & Introduction (2–3 pages) One motivating puzzle (trait stability despite maladaptation). One key contribution (ECTO framework). One headline result (multi-stable attractors in SATSA neuroticism). Methods (6–8 pages) depicting Data pipeline and ODE formulation (equations and biological interpretation) Fitting procedure: parameter estimation, identifiability checks. Baseline comparisons: uncoupled ODE + simple time-series models. Results (6–8 pages) including: Empirical entropy trajectories, Coupled vs uncoupled fits and Evidence for attractor structure (phase portrait, bifurcation diagram, or just remove this). Forecasting or out-of-sample validation. Either validate rigorously Lyapunov proxy analysis or cut. Discussion (4–5 pages): Include here the interpretation of attractors in trait stability and the limits of entropy as a “driver.” Discuss future extensions (machine learning, multi-omics) in one concise paragraph. Supplement/Appendix should include secondary traits, ecology case study, Lyapunov-proxy experiments, extensive stress tests, and theory elaborations belong here, not in the main text. 3 – Cut or Relegate expository text Compress the lengthy expositions of evolutionary theory to 1–2 paragraphs + schematic. Move multiple traits and species/ecology comparisons to supplement or another paper. Replace repeated justifications with one clear figure + one paragraph. Place technical derivations in appendix or online notebook. Final Recommendation: Please condense the manuscript into a single strong narrative around entropy trajectories + coupled ODE attractor dynamics in SATSA neuroticism. Push all auxiliary analyses (ecology, other traits, proxy Lyapunov) to supplementary material or spin-off manuscripts. I would strongly encourage the author to first submit some of this material, perhaps as a Late Breaking Abstract, at a conference such as ALIFE in the Models of Consciousness track or ABMHuB’25. This work would be very welcome there and the author might find a suitable collaborator to balance out some of the interdisciplinary work and claims in this work. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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An Entropy-Initiated Coupled-Trait ODE Framework for Modeling Longitudinal Cohort Dynamics PONE-D-25-39290R1 Dear Dr. Rodriguez, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Mario Treviño Villegas, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors have significantly strengthened the conclusions, reproducibility, and generalizability of the methodology and findings of the study by their use of an external dataset for validation. The ability of the methods to be applied to other types of data is now qualified in a way that enhances the reader's understanding of the applicability of the model to specific data types. Reviewer #2: Adding an independent longitudinal cohort (U.S. dental students) had significantly elevated this research. I previously asked the author to focus on their core finding: entropy can serve as a dynamical variable that yields attractor behaviour for a long-standing trait (neuroticism). To tackle this, the author has clearly defined neuroticism as a psychometric construct, not a biological mechanism. Further changes such as ODE terms framed as phenomenological analogues, not mechanistic evolutionary claims, and entropy softened from “driver” to “summary statistic used for initialisation have helped clearly define the author’s contribution. The author included a separate fitting and LOO validation, demonstrating the method is not SATSA-specific. Leave-one-wave-out forecasting on both datasets is a great validation. I am happy to see some predictive power of this model. I also thank the author for softening the strong claims about multistability and Lyapunov exponents, and especially for moving these analyses to appendices as illustrative. While still a very large document, this has focused the narrative and tightened the results. I will warn that, even with LOO validation and sensitivity sweeps, some will remain sceptical that 5–6 timepoints can meaningfully constrain ODE dynamics. However, because the researcher has explicitly acknowledged this limitation, this shouldn’t stop this from being published as the claims are now proportional to evidence. I am very impressed the author was actually able to reduce the size of the manuscript to a reasonable length, while clarifying many ideas that were very nebulous in the previous version, while strengthening the original contribution. Once again, I would like to applaud the researcher for a very interesting piece of work and wish them all the best on their future endeavours. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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