Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 18, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-65215Impact of postoperative macular disorders on visual outcomes after Descemet’s membrane endothelial keratoplasty: A multicenter analysisPLOS One Dear Dr. Hayashi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 21 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: The reviewers and editor have completed their assessments of your manuscript Impact of postoperative macular disorders on visual outcomes after Descemet’s membrane endothelial keratoplasty: A multicenter analysis (PONE-D-25-65215) and would like to publish it in the journal once you have responded to the referees' comments (enclosed below). In the cover letter with the revised manuscript, please indicate how each of the reviewers' suggestions was addressed. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors present an interesting study that analyzes whether postOP macular disorders limit final visual recovery after DMEK. Overall, the manuscript is readable and the clinical message is clear and sensible: macular disease matters. However, several aspects of the study currently make the manuscript insufficient for publication due to weak strength of evidence supporting their conclusions. The main limitations are: 1) the authors do not state whether any of the listed macular disorders were pre-existing prior to surgery. This is a very important point that needs to be addressed, in addition to stating whether there was any macular edema or a dry/wet AMD preoperatively. As the authors acknowledge in limitations, the corneal opacity limiting a proper preOP OCT scan analysis highlights this loophole of information. 2) the authors should address the non-independence from including both eyes of some patients without accounting for clustering, or restrict to one eye per patient and redo analyses as sensitivity. At minimum, the authors should report how many cases were bilateral and include a sensitivity analysis. 3) the authors model CME, ERM, wet AMD, and "macular comorbidity" (defined as "any of CME/ERM/wet AMD"), which is mathematically redundant and invites collinearity/suppression effects. The authors should either model each individual macular diagnosis and not include the composite, or model only the composite and do not include the individual diagnoses. 4) The primary endpoint is BCVA at final follow-up; however, the follow-up time ranges from 12 to 4302 days (!). Given that the final VA strongly depends on the time since surgery and whether macular events occurred early/late, the authors should define a more standardized time point (e.g., 6 months or 12 months) or include follow-up duration (or time since surgery at which the final VA was measured) as an adjustment variable. 5) Several fundamental variables known to affect VA after DMEK are omitted, including baseline BCVA, lens status (phakic/pseudophakic), DMEK vs. triple-DMEK, rebubbling rates, ECC of the graft, and corneal comorbidity severity (krachmer grade). 6) the authors state that 47% of patients were FECD and 41% BK; what about the rest? Overall, while the study question is worthwhile, the authors should address the aforementioned points to be considered for publication in PLOS one Reviewer #2: Dear Authors, Thanks for this manuscript, which addresses a clinically relevant and timely question: the impact of postoperative macular disorders on visual outcomes following DMEK. The manuscript is generally well written, the surgical technique appears standardized, and the authors appropriately attempt multivariate modeling to identify independent predictors of postoperative visual acuity. Clarification is needed regarding the timing and definition of macular comorbidities, the robustness of the statistical modeling given small subgroup sizes, and the clinical interpretation of statistically significant findings. Addressing these points would substantially improve the manuscript. Major comments 1. Definition and timing of macular comorbidity Macular comorbidity is defined as the presence of CME, ERM, or wet AMD detected during postoperative follow-up. It is unclear whether these conditions were pre-existing but only detected postoperatively due to improved media clarity, or whether they truly developed after surgery. This distinction is critical for causal interpretation and clinical counselling. The authors should clarify whether preoperative OCT was routinely performed and, if possible, distinguish between pre-existing and de novo postoperative macular disease. If this is not feasible, the limitation should be explicitly acknowledged in the Discussion. 2. Statistical modeling and risk of overfitting The multivariate linear regression includes multiple covariates despite a relatively small sample size (82 eyes) and very small subgroups (e.g., wet AMD n=4, PEX n=2). This raises concerns regarding model stability and overfitting, particularly in the context of AIC-based variable selection. The authors are encouraged to justify the model complexity (e.g., events-per-variable considerations) or perform sensitivity analyses excluding very small subgroups. 3. Interpretation and clinical relevance of regression coefficients Although several predictors reach statistical significance, the clinical magnitude of some effects appears modest. For example, the age coefficient (β ≈ 0.006 logMAR per year) represents a small change in vision over a decade. The authors should consider translating key coefficients into clinically interpretable terms (e.g., Snellen equivalents or lines of vision) also in the discussion and discuss whether these differences exceed commonly accepted thresholds for clinical relevance. 4. Handling and interpretation of pseudoexfoliation syndrome PEX is identified as a strong independent predictor of poor postoperative visual acuity; however, only two PEX cases are included. While the sensitivity analysis excluding PEX is appropriate, conclusions regarding PEX as a high-risk subgroup should be tempered. The authors should more clearly acknowledge the uncertainty associated with this very small sample size and frame the findings as hypothesis-generating rather than definitive. 5. Absence of corneal-specific postoperative parameters The analysis focuses exclusively on postoperative visual acuity without incorporating corneal-specific outcomes such as endothelial cell density, graft detachment or rebubbling, graft clarity, or rejection episodes. These factors can independently influence visual outcomes and may correlate with age or PEX. The rationale for excluding these variables should be clarified, and this limitation should be more explicitly discussed. Minor comments 1. Follow-up duration is highly variable. Please clarify whether visual acuity was assessed at a standardized postoperative time point or whether time from surgery to assessment was considered in the analysis. 2. Terminology alternates between macular disease, macular disorder, and macular comorbidity. Consistent terminology throughout the manuscript would improve clarity. 3. For CME cases, it would be helpful to report whether CME resolved with treatment and whether final visual acuity was measured after resolution, as this directly affects interpretation of the results. 4. Figures 1 and 2 provide limited additional information beyond the regression analyses. Consider simplifying the figures or enhancing them with stratified regression lines and confidence intervals. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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