Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 1, 2025 |
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If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Additional Editor Comments: I congratulate the esteemed authors for their efforts. The relationship between epicardial adipose tissue and various diseases has been investigated. Your study is generally well planned, and your manuscript is well structured and written. The manuscript was reviewed by two external reviewers, and their comments are below. Please provide point-by-point responses to the comments and make the necessary revisions to your manuscript. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Best of luck. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: General Comments: I found your study interesting and relevant, as it addresses the role of epicardial adipose tissue in cardiometabolic health. You clearly put effort into collecting and analyzing the data, and the manuscript is generally well structured. While reading, I paid close attention to how your results link to your study objectives and to the potential limitations of your cohort and methods. I have several comments that I believe could help clarify the interpretation of your findings, improve transparency, and make the manuscript stronger and more convincing for readers Specific Comments: Point1: I found the introduction rather weak in terms of focus and logical flow.You mention several conditions (hepatosteatosis, diabetes, pancreatitis, subcutaneous fat), but, there is no clear narrative connecting these elements. It feels as if several conditions were listed without a central rationale explaining why they were all included in the same study... The link between EAT and pancreatitis, in particular, seems weak and needs stronger biological justification. Since EAT is a cardiac fat depot, the biological pathway by which it could influence pancreatic inflammation is not evident. You might consider citing mechanistic or imaging studies, if available, or explaining your hypothesis more clearly. Also, stating that ""the link is not conclusive"" doesn’t clearly define the research gap. Readers need to understand waht exactely is uncertain or conflicting in the literature. I also noticed you didn’t refer to any existing studies with similar objectives or findings. Without that, it’s hard to see how your work differs from what’s already been done or what new aspect it brings. I suggest you restructure this section to highlight one clear gap, explain why these associations are relevant, and end with a precise hypothesis connecting EAT to the selected metabolic factors. Point2: I think the methods section needs much more detail. While you report sample size and sex in the results section, it’s important to include this information in methods along with how participants were selected and the inclusion//exclusion criteria. Without that, it’s hard to know if your results are reliable or representative. Please consider adding these details so we can understand the conditions of your study and how representative your population is. Also, it would also help to clarify whether potential confounders like age, sex, or BMI were considered, as this is important for interpreting your results. Point3 : The results section is detailed, but it feels somewhat descriptive and difficult to follow in relation to your study objectives. You report many associations, yet it’s not always clear which ones are most central to your objective. I suggest reorganizing the results according to your main aims (for example, EAT and diabetes, EAT and pancreatitis, etc.) and adding short linking sentences to guide the reader through the key findings. This would make the section clearer and more coherent. Point4: I see that several of your results are statistically significant, but when I look at the actual correlation values. For example, between age, EAT, and subcutaneous fat (r = 0.15–0.32). These relationships appear quite weak. Even with low p values, such small effect sizes may not have much clinical meaning. I think it would really strengthen your paper if you could comment on whether these findings are meaningful in practice, or if they might simply reflect confounding factors like BMI or general adiposity. point5: I noticed that some important potential confounders, such as BMI, overall body fat, hypertension, or medication use, don’t seem to have been accounted for in your analyses. Since EAT and subcutaneous fat are strongly influenced by these factors, the associations you report with diabetes, pancreatitis, or LDL cholesterol could be affected. Could you clarify whether these variables were available, and if so, consider including them in your multivariate models??? If not, a discussion of the possible impact of unmeasured confounding would help strengthen the study. point6: In the regression analyses, it’s not clear how you decided which variables to include in the multivariate models. Were variables selected based on univariate significance (e.g.,, p < 0.1), or were all measured variables considered??? Point7: I see that you mention the retrospective design as a limitation, which is good. However, some of the language in the results and discussion, such as "independent predictors"" implies causality. Since causality cannot be established in a retrospective study, I suggest clarifying this in the text and using more neutral language (e.g.. "variables significantly associated with…") to avoid overinterpretation. Point8: The prevalence of pancreatitis (73.5%%) and diabetes (31.4%) in your cohort seems unusually high compared with the general population. Could this reflect a selection bias; for example, if the sample mainly includes patients undergoing CT for pancreatic evaluation?? Could you clarify your sampling source and whether this distribution is representative of the broader population you aim to study.. Reviewer #2: The manuscript has potential but would require major revision before it could be suitable for publication. Please address the following comments in the manuscript: The abstract lacks a clear problem statement as it lists results but does not sufficiently justify why this research matters or what specific knowledge gap it addresses. The final sentence should highlight the broader relevance rather than repeat outcomes. The research gap is weakly articulated in the introduction. While prior work is mentioned, the authors do not convincingly explain what was missing in existing literature that this study uniquely addresses. The rationale for selecting the study design is limited. The manuscript does not explain why the chosen population, tools, and parameters are most appropriate to answer the stated research question. Methodology lacks detail and reproducibility in some areas. Key procedural specifics (e.g., selection criteria, sample handling, or validation of measurement tools) are missing or insufficiently described. This may prevent replication. The study seems observational/descriptive, yet some statements imply causal relationships. These need to be toned down or reframed as associations only. Sample size justification is not clearly provided. A power analysis or rationale for participant numbers would strengthen the manuscript. The statistical analysis section is too brief. The authors should clarify corrections for multiple testing, how missing data were handled, and whether data met normality assumptions before applying parametric tests. Results presentation feels fragmented. While data are provided, there is limited integration of findings into a coherent narrative. Tables/figures could be better linked in the text with clearer interpretation rather than simple reporting. Tables and figures appear overly descriptive. Several contain too much raw numerical detail without clear summaries or take-home messages. They also need clearer captions that explain what readers should focus on. Discussion largely restates results rather than interpreting them. There is little critical reflection on why certain outcomes emerged, how they compare to similar studies, or what mechanisms may be involved. Limitations are acknowledged but underdeveloped. Key issues such as potential confounders, selection bias, and measurement limitations deserve a more honest discussion. The manuscript overextends its conclusions. The findings support limited association but not practical recommendations. The authors should temper claims to match the strength of their data. The implications for policy, clinical relevance, or future research are not clearly drawn. The conclusion could be more forward-looking, stating how these results should guide subsequent work. Language is generally understandable, but certain paragraphs feel stiff and overly technical, reducing flow. Some grammatical issues remain; the manuscript would benefit from careful editing for clarity and conciseness. Overall novelty appears modest. The study adds incremental information rather than a fundamentally new insight. The authors should emphasize what is genuinely new i.e., population studied, new analytical approach, or unique findings if applicable. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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<p>THE ASSOCIATION BETWEEN EPICARDIAL ADIPOSE TISSUE THICKNESS AND DIABETES MELLITUS, HYPERLIPIDEMIA, HEPATOSTEATOSIS, PANCREATIC STEATOSIS AND PANCREATITIS PONE-D-25-52339R1 Dear Dr. Evrimler, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Eyüp Serhat Çalık Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** Reviewer #1: I appreciate the author's thorough and thoughtful responses to my previous comments. The revisions have significantly improved the focus of the introduction, the transparency of the Methods, and the organization of the results, and the limitaion are now appropriately discussed. I have no further comments. Only minor editorial ajustements, if any, may be handeled at at the discretion of the editor. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Zargham Faisal ********** |
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