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| Original SubmissionJuly 18, 2025 |
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If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Additional Editor Comments: Dear Authors, I regret to inform you that the manuscript cannot be accepted as such. However, the three referees appreciated the effort and the approach adopted. Therefore, it will be possible for you to revise or rebutt the criticisms raised in a modified version of the manuscript. Please, consider that the manuscript will undergo another round of revision. Thank you for submitting your best work to our Journal. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors present a laboratory-made (LM) DNA extraction method benchmarked against two commercial kits for coastal sediments. The LM approach produced substantially higher yields and longer DNA fragments, enabling improved recovery of eukaryotic diversity. Although more labor-intensive, it proved reproducible, cost-effective, and well-suited for large-scale or resource-limited studies. Overall, the paper makes a valuable contribution, but certain sections (methods clarification, conceptual definitions, and expanded comparisons) should be improved for clarity and completeness. Abstract The sentence “While prokaryotic diversity metrics were largely similar across methods, we observed differences in eukaryotic richness that were likely influenced by the amount of sediment processed” could be worth keeping, but you should clarify why this observation is relevant for the paper’s scope. Does it support the strength of your method (better for eukaryotes)? Or does it show a limitation (sensitive to sample size)? At present, it feels underdeveloped. Introduction Line 49: The sentence “However, those technologies are still dependent on DNA extraction methods” — but isn’t this true for other sequencing or analysis approaches as well? Please clarify the distinction you are making here, otherwise the statement sounds too general. Line 55: Since this is a generalist journal, please briefly define alpha and beta diversity for non-specialist readers (one short clause each should be enough). Please expand slightly on the difference between NGS shotgun sequencing and metabarcoding (at least two sentences). For example: emphasize that metabarcoding targets specific loci (e.g., 16S, COI), which can bias taxonomic resolution, whereas shotgun metagenomics enables recovery of longer fragments and broader taxonomic/functional profiles. Methods Line 61: Please describe the sediment type in more detail (grain size, organic content, coastal location, depth collected, etc.). This information is important to contextualize yield and inhibition challenges. Line 77: Clarify what exactly was performed in triplicate (DNA extractions? PCRs? sequencing libraries?). Also, explain why triplicates were necessary (e.g., to ensure reproducibility, to capture variability within sediment aliquots). Line 93: The statement “protocol should be adapted” is vague. If you mean that increasing input material often leads to inhibitor co-extraction, please state that explicitly and explain what adaptations you recommend or tested. Line 175: “Clenned?” — please check this typo. If you mean cleaned libraries, specify the parameters: bead-to-sample ratios, fragment size ranges retained, or kits used. This will improve reproducibility. Line 200: The authors already mention “Kruskal–Wallis p-value cutoff of 0.05” (line 195). Later (line 200), you repeat “p-value threshold for statistical significance was 0.05”. Consider consolidating into one clear statement at the end. Results Line 211: When mentioning statistically significant or nt, include p-val and test. Discussion Consider adding a brief statement about limitations (e.g., only sandy sediments tested, other sediment types may behave differently). Reviewer #2: The paper « Cost-effective DNA extraction method optimized for high yield and long fragments from coastal sediments » proposes a new « home-made » DNA extraction method efficient for sediments, particarly for sandy or low-biomass sediments. Moreover, this method could be very useful for studies requiring high-quality DNA, specifically for long-fragments analysis, like metabarcoding or metagenomics using third generation sequencing technologies. This protocol was compared to very widespread commercial kits used in genomic environmental studies, and different soil compositions were tested, which was very important for the protocol validation. Moreover, DNA extractions were realized in triplicate for each method to check the repetability and reproductibility of the lab work. To check the efficiency of the method, 3 parameters have been checked : DNA extraction yield, DNA fragment size, and alpha and beta biodiversity based on 16S (prokaryotes) and 18S (eukaryotes) markers. I really appreciated the details in the protocol, which can be directly applied in the lab. The references and the costs are clearly listed. Moreover the methods used to measure the quantities and the qualities of DNA extracts are really precises and showed in the paper. Nevertheless, I found the protocol quite time-consuming and requires long reagent preparation time steps. These 2 factors have to be considered when you have a lot a samples to process. I also have some questions an remarks about the strategy of study validation : 1- Did you try to modify some parameters from commercial kits PSP and PM ? I know lysis steps can be very rough. Did you test different lysis condition sto to optimize the integrity of DNA extracts? 2- I am quite sceptical regarding eukaryotes PCR amplification step : - Go Taq polymerase (Promega) is known to not be the best choice to amplify marine microbes, specifically protists. Most of protists taxa have high-rich GC content, so Kapa and Phusion polymerases are preferably used. - Could you explain the choie of V7 marker and primers please ? I totaly approve V7 is a good candidate regarding sedaDNA metabarcoding studies, but n most of modern marine eukaryotic metabarcoding studies (coastal and open ocean areas), V4 or V9 markers are more used. (ie Zimmermann et al. 2024 DOI:10.1002/edn3.580, Mahe et al. 2017 DOI:10.1038/s41559-017-0091). 3- How many replicates did you do for each of your DNA amplifications ? I didn’t find the information in the text. 4- You highlight the potential of the LM method to recover long-fragments of DNA. Why didn’t you check alpha and beta diversity using 3rd generation sequencing like PacBio or ONT ? (ie https://doi.org/10.1101/2025.07.20.665787, https://doi.org/10.3897/mbmg.9.163750 ) To conclude, I would suggest to do more amplification tests on V7 marker and longer fragments (like entire 18S marker or more) and using a different Taq such as Phusion High Fidelity F532L to prove the efficiency of the method. Reviewer #3: This manuscript presents a laboratory-made (LM) DNA extraction method optimized for high yield and long DNA fragments from coastal sediments, comparing its performance against two commercial Qiagen kits (PowerSoil Pro and PowerMax Soil). The study addresses a relevant methodological bottleneck in environmental DNA research, extracting high-quality DNA from complex, low-biomass matrices such as sandy or organic-rich sediments, with the goal of providing an affordable, non-hazardous alternative suitable for large-scale or resource-limited settings. The topic is scientifically relevant and of clear practical value. The study is generally well structured and clearly written. However, some aspects of the methodological comparability, data normalization, and interpretative depth limit the robustness of the conclusions. While the LM method appears promising, certain parts of the work require clarification, additional controls, and normalization to ensure fair comparisons among extraction approaches. 1- How many independent replicates were performed for each extraction protocol and sediment type? Please specify whether biological and technical replicates were included. This is essential to assess reproducibility and to validate the statistical comparisons (ANOVA, PERMANOVA). 2- No extraction blanks or negative controls appear to have been sequenced. These are essential for detecting contamination, especially in low-biomass matrices. 3- The authors appropriately normalized DNA yields to both sediment dry weight (µg DNA g⁻¹) and total elution volume, as stated in the Methods (lines 220–222). This normalization ensures that reported extraction efficiencies are mathematically comparable across the three methods (LM, PSP, and PM). However, even though yield normalization was properly performed, the biological and ecological comparability among extraction protocols remains partially limited due to the large differences in input sediment mass and lysis chemistry: LM and PSP processed 200–250 mg of sediment, whereas PM used 5 g, potentially capturing a broader microbial and eukaryotic diversity simply by integrating more microhabitats. The LM protocol relies on enzymatic and detergent-based lysis (CTAB/SDS + Proteinase K), while PSP and PM use mechanical bead-beating, which can favor the extraction of different cell types (e.g., Gram-positive bacteria, spores). These factors could influence both DNA yield and community composition, independent of extraction efficiency. Therefore, the manuscript should explicitly acknowledge in the Discussion that, while yield data were normalized correctly, the ecological representativeness of each extraction remains partly influenced by input mass and lysis mechanism. To strengthen this comparison, I recommend including a PCoA or NMDS plot showing beta-diversity differences between extraction protocols across sediment types. This would visually confirm whether extraction method drives distinct community structures. 4- It is unclear whether sequencing depth normalization or rarefaction was performed before comparing alpha and beta diversity. This is critical for metabarcoding data to ensure comparability across methods and sediments, The Methods should specify how read counts were normalized before ANOVA/PERMANOVA tests (e.g., rarefaction to minimum library size, relative abundance transformation, or DESeq2 variance stabilization). To complement this, an Upset plot illustrating shared vs unique ASVs among the different extraction protocols would provide a more intuitive visualization of overlap and method-specific recovery of taxa. This approach would highlight whether the LM method captures a unique subset of taxa or primarily overlaps with commercial kits. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Dear Dr. Navarro, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Please, see the reviewer's comments Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 18 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Daer Authors, while the referee acknowledges that the majority of criticisms have been addressed, there still are some points that need to be clarified in the manuscript. And some of them require to smooth the statements of the overall conclusions, in terms of readiness and validity of the protocol proposed. As a consequence, we cannot accept the revised version per se, but another round of corrections is needed. Thank you for submitting your best work to PLoS [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: No ********** Reviewer #2: The paper « Cost-effective DNA extraction method optimized for high yield and long fragments from coastal sediments » proposes a new « home-made » DNA extraction method efficient for sediments, particarly for sandy or low-biomass sediments. It is the second article submission after review. Authors noted seriously all remarks from my reviews and answered in detail on my questions. Comments on 1 : Thank you for your response. It is clearer. Comments on 2a and 5 : Many thanks for your tests. But it is still not clear. I suggested in my review to do some amplifcation tests on 18S-V7, but in your new submission, you studied both 18S-V7 (eukaryotes) and 16S-V4V5 (prokaryotes). Which marker do you finally amplified with the Phusion ? 18S-V7 or 16S-V4V5 ? Comments on 2b : Many thanks for your explanations. Comments on 3 : Thank you very much for your answer. I am disappointed to not have technical replicates in the PCR. We know that amplification step adds a lot of biaises for metabarcoding studies, even at 25 cycles, that’s why technical replicates (at least 3) are recommended, specially in sediments. Maybe you had to face resource constraints, but it is a critical point. Comments on 4 : Thank you very much for your explanations and I totally understand your resource constraints. Nevertheless, this LM DNA extraction protocol is promoted for getting high-molecular-weight DNA. It would have been interesting to show some results on ONT or PacBio. I still have new questions about the modified article : Line180-182 for 18S-V7 failed amplifications, you mentionned you reamplifed with 20 ng of DNA. Did you test with the PCR with less DNA amounts (1 or 0.1 ng startin material) ? Despite the fact DNA extraction methods have a lot of purification steps, there are still a lot of inhibitors in DNA extracts from sediments. If you dilute the DNA input in the PCR, you also dilute PCR inhibitors and increase the amplification yield. S2_File : it is not « furnisher », but « Supplier ». And Fisher brand is the same than Thermofisher. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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