Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 28, 2025 |
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: 1. This is a clinically important study addressing a mechanistically intriguing and very rare event. Prior evidence is mostly isolated case reports; a 21-year, zero-event cohort is highly reassuring. It would help if the authors more explicitly compare their upper 95% CI with the expected background incidence (e.g., estimated expected CSC cases in this population), to better frame the clinical impact. 2. OCT availability and choroidal thickness methodology For the CDW cohort, please clarify whether OCT data were directly used or whether CSC screening relied only on codes and free text. For the detailed cohort, specify: Whether EDI-OCT was used for all included eyes. What proportion of all intravitreal steroid–treated eyes in 2023–2024 had analyzable OCT and why others were excluded. This is important for understanding selection bias and how broadly imaging findings apply. 3. Definition and adjudication of CSC Please provide a clear operational definition of CSC (clinical + OCT ± angiography criteria) and describe the adjudication process (number of reviewers, how discrepancies were handled). This will reassure readers that 4. Systemic/other steroid exposure and prior CSC Since the main concern is “steroid-induced” CSC, more detail on other steroid exposures would strengthen the Reviewer #2: The authors address an important clinical question - do intravitreal corticosteroid injections/implants increase the risk of developing CSC - and provide a clear, well-supported answer. Comments: 1. The abstract could benefit from being re-organized. 2. What was the rationale for limiting the search to 6 months after intravitreal injection? 3. Clarify in the methods whether patients received both “triamcinolone acetonide and dexamethasone implant” (as stated at the moment) or one of the two. 4. Loss to follow-up: is all post-injection follow-up performed in-house? How many patients are missing data post-injection? 5. The use of SFCT as a surrogate for CSC is reasonable, however - CSC often presents in a non-subfoveal location, which should be acknowledged. 6. There is no control group of similar patients receiving no or different treatment - could the observed thinning reflect the natural history of the underlying pathology rather than steroid effect? 7. In Table 2, parentheses around the n values are misplaced. 8. Please report the range of ages (not just mean ± SD) to clarify whether patients in the typical CSC age group were included, and if not - address. Overall, the study is of high clinical relevance. Addressing these points would strengthen the manuscript and improve interpretability. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy .--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Intravitreal injections of corticosteroid and the risk of central serous chorioretinopathy PLOS One Dear Dr. Woo, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 06 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols .. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Alon Harris Academic Editor PLOS One Journal Requirements: 1. If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. 2. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: I would like to thank the authors for addressing an important yet clinically vague topic and for carefully revising the manuscript 1. Free-text screening methodology in the CDW cohort Given that OCT images were not systematically reviewed for the majority of the CDW cohort, the accuracy of CSC detection relies heavily on diagnosis codes and free-text searches. To improve transparency and reproducibility, the Methods section would benefit from a more detailed description of the free-text search strategy. Specifically, listing the exact search terms (and whether variants, abbreviations, or non-English terms were included), similar to how search strings are reported in systematic reviews, would strengthen confidence in the completeness of case ascertainment. 2. The relationship between Intra virtual corticosteroid exposure and central serous chorioretinopathy remains a source of uncertainty in daily practice. Many clinicians continue to avoid intravitreal steroids in patients with pachychoroid spectrum disease on their differential, despite the evidence being largely limited to isolated case reports. The Discussion could be further strengthened by explicitly framing how these findings together with the fact that CSCR wasn't raised as a safety issue in the pivotal trials approving these preparations/implant should influence clinical decision-making. Otherwise, suggest which additional work is required to make such a conclusion Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed all comments satisfactorily. The revisions clarify methodology, justify the 6-month follow-up window, transparently report exclusions and follow-up, and appropriately acknowledge key limitations, including the use of SFCT and the lack of a control group. Overall, the changes improve clarity and interpretability, and the manuscript is suitable for publication ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Intravitreal injections of corticosteroid and the risk of central serous chorioretinopathy PONE-D-25-57894R2 Dear Dr. Se Joon Woo, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support .. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Alon Harris Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: I have reviewed the latest revised version of the manuscript. The authors have addressed my previous comments satisfactorily, and the additional revisions made in response to the other reviewer’s comments have further improved the manuscript. I continue to recommend the manuscript for acceptance for publication. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy .--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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