Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 1, 2025 |
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review this paper. The topic of a national-scale telehealth application for mental health is highly significant. The study is exceptionally well-designed and executed, demonstrating a broad scope and resulting in a practical and currently implemented system. It is commendable that the system is already operational and in use, and I have reviewed the corresponding website. I have a few specific comments aimed at further strengthening the manuscript: 1- I recommend a thorough check of the manuscript's punctuation and grammar. For instance, in the Abstract (Background section), I noted a sentence concluding with two periods (..) instead of a single one. A general review for consistency in punctuation (commas, periods, colons, etc.) across the entire text is advised. 2- In the Introduction section, while the third paragraph makes an essential reference to prevalence data, the Introduction would be significantly improved by explicitly stating the global prevalence of mental health disorders, followed by specific prevalence statistics within Peru. The current text implies the source of the data through citations, but it should explicitly state in the text that these statistics pertain to Peru. 3- In the Method section, the description of the setting for the system's implementation is currently ambiguous. If the scope is indeed national (national scale), this should be stated explicitly and specifically in the Methods section to reflect the significant scale of the project. 4- In the Result section, the inclusion of a flowchart (Figure 2) and a view of the initial website page in the Appendix is helpful. However, to better illustrate the user experience and the functional processes outlined in Figure 2 (from screening to the final report), it is recommended to include additional screenshots of the live system/website in the main body of the paper. 5- The Discussion is well-written, thoroughly analyzing the work from various angles. To provide richer context and academic rigor, it is suggested to integrate relevant similar studies in the appropriate sections and include a comparative analysis of this work against those studies. 6- If this information is not planned for a separate publication, it would be beneficial to include some current key utilization metrics for the operational system. This could consist of the total number of individuals who have received assistance from the system to date, or other relevant indicators of current scale and impact. Reviewer #2: This manuscript addresses a timely and significant issue regarding mental health support for vulnerable occupational groups during the COVID-19 pandemic. The application of a User-Centered Design (UCD) framework is a major strength of this study, providing a robust model for developing effective health IT solutions. However, there are specific methodological clarifications and minor corrections required before publication. 1) Methodological Terminology:In the "Usability, satisfaction and acceptability assessment" section, the analysis is described as a "phenomenological approach." Given that the results focus on usability feedback and satisfaction rather than the deep essence of lived experiences, this term seems misapplied. The analysis appears to align more closely with "Thematic Analysis" or "Qualitative Content Analysis." Please revise this terminology to accurately reflect the method used. 2) Citation Accuracy: Reference [45] (Universitat Oberta de Catalunya, Interview Toolkit) is currently cited in the context of data analysis using Atlas Ti. This reference pertains to data collection (interviews), not analysis. Please correct this citation to a source relevant to the analytical method employed. 3) Abstract Clarity: The Abstract mentions "81 participants in the efficacy assessment" without sufficient context. To avoid confusion regarding the response rate, please clarify that these 81 participants are a subset of the 134 users who received psychoeducation. 4) Comparative Analysis Context: The study compares satisfaction scores with historical outpatient data (Moscoso et al.). While valid as a benchmark, please explicitly acknowledge in the Discussion or Limitations section that comparing a telehealth service (during a pandemic) with traditional outpatient services (pre-pandemic) involves different contexts and user expectations. 5) Minor Errors and Typos: Please correct the following errors: - Abstract: Correct the double period in "complex cases. . Telehealth". - Abstract-Conclusion: Add a space in "groupsAdditionally". - Ensure consistent spacing between citations and text throughout the manuscript. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Evaluation of usability and acceptability of a Peruvian Telemental health service for early assessment among vulnerable occupational workers: mixed-method study with a user-centered design approach PONE-D-25-40617R1 Dear Dr. Villarreal-Zegarra, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jahanpour Alipour, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** Reviewer #1: I would like to thank the authors for their thorough responses and the effort put into revising the manuscript. I am pleased to note that all of my previous concerns have been addressed satisfactorily, and I have no further comments. I believe the paper is now ready for publication. Reviewer #2: The authors have satisfactorily addressed the previous comments and revised the manuscript to meet the journal's publication criteria. The methodological terminology has been corrected, the scope of the study is accurately defined, and the limitations regarding the comparative analysis are now appropriately contextualized. I have no further concerns. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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