Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 11, 2025 |
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Although the analysis is limited to a single experience it provides an important information in how DKD is also expanding in non western countries. As a main suggestion to appreciate the relevance of the study, it would be interesting to reinforce the strenghts of the study in the discussion. Why is this study informative despite its limitations? How does it compare to other studies conducted in similar countries? Is it larger? First describing DKD in a specific population? The descriptive nature of the study should be also better clarifies in the text. The Literature cited is quite limited and sometimes not updated. The Authors should follow the Reviewers suggestions to improve this section. Please pay particular attention to Reviewer #1 comments, which may improve the text. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: 1) In the multivariable analysis, rural residence has an AOR < 1 (0.278), suggesting lower odds of DKD; however, the Discussion interprets rural residence as a risk factor. Can the authors confirm the reference category, re-check multivariable model coding and interpretation and correct text accordingly. 2) Since CKD-EPI and albuminuria categories were used, full KDIGO classification (G and A categories) should be reported. It would be good add a table summarizing G-stage and A-stage distributions. 3)Participants were recruited from a tertiary care center and may not reflect the community diabetic population, therefore it is necessary to clarify to what extent the cohort is representative. 4) Multiple statements imply causation, even if this is a cross-sectional study, I suggest to make a revision of the language using “associated with” rather than “predicts” or “leads to” 5) Can the authors add more details about the regression model, clarifying which variables were included and why they were chosen. 6) In the introduction I suggest to reduce the epidemioloy 7) Can the author clarify whether ACR measurement was repeated to confirm presence of albuminuria? 8) Can you clarify whether DKD prevalence differs between urban and rural subgroups? 9) In the discussion can the authors explain the mechanism behind early albuminuria with preserved eGFR? 10) The diabetic drugs in use are insulin, metformin, sulfonylureas which don’t provide diabetic kidney protection, can you make a comment regarding the neuw class of drugs such as SGLT2i and GLP-1RA mentioning the following articles: -AWARE A novel web application to rapidly assess cardiovascular risk in type 2 diabetes mellitus Berra, C., Manfrini, R., Mirani, M., ... Fiorina, P., Folli, F. Acta Diabetologica, 2023, 60(9), pp. 1257–1266 -Improved glycemic and weight control with Dulaglutide addition in SGLT2 inhibitor treated obese type 2 diabetic patients at high cardiovascular risk in a real-world setting. The AWARE−2 study Berra, C., Manfrini, R., Bifari, F., ... Cimino, V., Folli, F. Pharmacological Research, 2024, 210, 107517 11) Check the english spelling and change Sulfonureas into Sufonylureas Reviewer #2: The paper is overall well written and structured and give novel information concerning the prevalence of DKD in Ethiopia. To put the paper in a bigger scenario, I suggest including a paragraph in the discussion concerning novel therapeutic approaches to couteract DKD. In particular the authors can consider to cite the following papers: PMID 35908663; PMID 36871895 ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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<p>Diabetic Kidney Disease in Northwest Ethiopia: Prevalence and Determinants Among Adults with Type 2 Diabetes PONE-D-25-53996R1 Dear Dr. Hailu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Francesca D'Addio, MD, PhD Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): By responding for the most part to the main comments raised by the Reviewers, the paper has been significantly improved and it is now suitable for publication. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors has adequately addressed the comments and now the article has reached a good level and It is now acceptable for publication, it is presented in a n intelligible fashion and written in standard english. Reviewer #2: The authors addressed all reviewers' comments. I just would like to highlight that the bibliography han not been updated as compared to the previous version. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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