Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 14, 2025 |
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This is a review of the manuscript entitled “Role of the endothelial cell apolipoprotein E receptor 2 in modulating the effects of apoE3 and apoE4 on insulin blood-brain barrier transport” by Thomas et al. The authors investigate whether the murine apolipoprotein E receptor 2 (ApoER2) expressed in brain endothelial cells contributes to insulin transport across the blood-brain barrier (BBB), and whether this process is modulated by human apoE isoforms, apoE3 and apoE4. Using endothelial-specific ApoER2 knockout mice crossed with humanized apoE3 or apoE4 lines, the authors report minor regional differences in insulin BBB transport in the context of apoE3, but find that apoE4’s effects on insulin transport appear largely independent of endothelial Apoer2. The study is well designed and addresses an important question regarding the role of apoE isoforms and endothelial ApoER2 in insulin transport across the BBB. The data are generally well interpreted, and the use of radiolabeled tracers is appropriate. However, several issues, particularly regarding data presentation, validation of the knockout, and interpretation of regional effects, should be addressed to improve clarity and strengthen the conclusions. Major comments: 1. The presentation of animal numbers in the figure legends and graphs is confusing. While the text states that n = 4 animals were used per group, the figures instead emphasize the number of outliers removed (e.g., “n = 1 outlier”), rather than clearly indicating the number of animals included in the analysis. I recommend that the authors explicitly indicate the number of animals analyzed for each group in the figure or legend, ideally by showing the actual data points (e.g., 2, 3, or 4 points per bar). This would greatly improve clarity and transparency. Additionally, it would be helpful to know whether the same animal was removed as an outlier across multiple brain regions, or whether different animals were excluded for different regions. This detail could inform the reader about potential variability or technical issues in the dataset. 2. The authors rely on a previously published study (line 74) to support effective endothelial-specific deletion of ApoER2 using VE-cadherin-Cre; however, no confirmation of receptor loss in endothelial cells is provided in the current study. Given that the key finding is a lack of effect on insulin transport, it would strengthen the conclusions to validate that Apoer2 was indeed deleted in the animals analyzed. While I recognize that tissues used for radiotracer quantification may not be suitable for additional analyses (e.g., IHC or qPCR), the authors could consider including parallel validation data from separate animals, or referencing relevant confirmatory data (e.g., mRNA, protein, or reporter expression) if available. Without such confirmation, the possibility of incomplete recombination or variable Cre efficiency in this cohort remains a caveat and should be acknowledged. 3. The results highlight regional differences in insulin transport across the BBB, particularly in apoE3-expressing mice. However, the discussion does not address whether regional variation in ApoER2 expression might underlie or contribute to these differences. Incorporating existing expression data, such as from the Allen Brain Atlas, would strengthen the interpretation of the findings and provide valuable context regarding the receptor’s distribution in the brain. 4. The study examines the effects of human apoE isoforms in a mouse model, yet there is no discussion of how human apoE variants interact with mouse ApoER2, or whether these interactions differ across isoforms. It would be important to clarify whether the binding affinity and functional interactions of human apoE with mouse ApoER2 have been characterized, and how this might affect the interpretation of isoform-specific effects on insulin transport. Minor comments: 5. Line 70 – The manuscript should specify which humanized apoE mouse line was used, as multiple lines are now available. Providing the exact model (including source or reference) would improve clarity and reproducibility. 6. Line 151 – Radiolabeled albumin is referred to only as a "vascular marker," but its function as a negative control for BBB permeability should be made explicit. Since albumin does not normally cross the BBB, it serves to distinguish active transport (e.g., insulin) from passive leakage or vascular entrapment. This clarification would enhance the methodological transparency. 7. If mice were purchased from Jackson Labs or other vendors, the corresponding strain names and stock numbers should be listed in the methods section for clarity and reproducibility. 8. Since Reelin-ApoER2 signaling has been associated with endothelial vasodilation, the authors should consider measuring Reelin protein levels, ApoER2 expression (as a positive control), and phospho-Dab1 levels in endothelial cells to explore this potential mechanism further. 9. To evaluate endothelial signaling, the authors could isolate microvessel-enriched brain extracts for Western blot, or alternatively use RNAscope or immunohistochemistry for cell-specific analysis. 10. It would also be informative to measure circulating ApoE levels across the four mouse lines. This could be done most quantitatively by ELISA, to determine whether differences in plasma ApoE might contribute to the observed effects. Reviewer #2: The use of constitutive Cdh5-Cre might be problematic, as it also deletes APOE in hematopoietic stem cells, thereby altering multiple downstream immune lineages. This confounds the interpretation of endothelial-specific effects on the insulin BBB transport through ApoER2. The authors should at least discuss this limitation. ApoER2 is only one of several ApoE receptors expressed by endothelial cells. The manuscript does not evaluate potential compensatory upregulation of other lipoprotein receptors following ApoER2 deletion, which limits the conclusions regarding receptor-specific mechanisms. At least the authors should perform some WB with their brain region samples. The manuscript does not clearly report the final number of mice included in each analysis. It is difficult to assess whether the study is adequately powered without these details. The rationale linking the established ApoE isoform–dependent differences in ApoER2 binding to region-specific brain effects is not clearly explained and remains difficult to interpret. Additional evidence is needed to support this connection. For instance, do ApoER2 protein levels vary across the implicated brain regions, or are there regional differences in ApoE abundance? ********** what does this mean? ). 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Role of the endothelial cell apolipoprotein E receptor 2 in modulating the effects of apoE3 and apoE4 on insulin blood-brain barrier transport PONE-D-25-44397R1, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Sungho Maeng, M.D., Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors have done a reasonable job of addressing both reviewers critiques and the revised manuscript is acceptable for publication. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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