Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 14, 2025 |
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-->PONE-D-25-55259-->-->Leukotriene receptor antagonists and eosinophilic granulomatosis with polyangiitis: a disproportionality analysis from FAERS, JADER, CVAR databases and analysis of the drug-gene interaction network-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Zhang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please address the reviewers' comments promptly. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 20 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: 1- rewrite the section Network analysis of LTRAs-EGPA gene interactions? 2- why montelukast remained significantly correlated with EGPA regardless of concomitant corticosteroids use or exclusion? 3- unclear in Fig. 2 presented the characteristics of patients experiencing EGPA re-imaging in high resolutions Reviewer #2: I appreciate the authors for their time and effort in preparing this manuscript. The study presents a compelling analysis of rare LTRAs-associated adverse events (EPGA) by meticulously analyzing multiple databases from different countries and employing a variety of disproportionality analyses, subgroup analyses, co-medication assessments, and gene-network analyses. However, I have several suggestions that may further strengthen the manuscript and improve its clarity and readability. I believe after considering these points and remarks, this paper can provide valuable information for clinicians and regulatory authorities. 1. The current format of the tables is prone to confusion therefore, I strongly advise reformatting tables. Each table should have clear rows with aligned columns for each entry. Also, if a table contains multiple sections i.e., table 2 and 3, separate each section with proper lines and delineated headings. 2. While SRSs databases contain an extensive amount of information regarding drug use and related adverse events, they have important limitations. Firstly, they don’t show the exact records of drugs dosage changes/tappers or past drug history in this particular study, steroids and disease severity/comorbidities. Secondly, these types of databases are based on the voluntary reports of specific adverse events. Due to these facts, I recommend to clarify whether the authors have already considered this possible bias, when they concluded the existence of significant correlation between montelukast use and EPGA emergence. Since, the unmasking result could be due to steroid tapering or dose changes or patients’ other comorbidities and not solely LTRAs administration. 3. LTRAs are sometimes prescribed for the patients with steroids intolerance or patients with comorbid allergies, which may lead to a false drug-adverse event correlation unrelated to causality. Nevertheless, the authors did not address these potential sources of bias in the manuscript. I advise the authors to clarify if this possible bias have been considered. 4. LTRAs represent a class of drugs and should not be listed next to their individual agents such as montelukast, pranlukast, and zafirlukast. Thus, I advise to use the phrasing “LTRAs, including montelukast, …” or use parentheses “LTRAs (e.g., montelukast, etc,)” consistently throughout the manuscript. (Ref. lines: 29,329,427). 5. Consider replacing “pharmacogenetic network analysis” with “network pharmacology” or “bioinformatics-based network analysis” throughout the manuscript. Because your study only identifies some genes using predicted drug target (from SwissTargetPrediction, CTD, PharmMapper, etc.,), DEG, protein-protein interaction networks via cytoplasmic antibodies and pathway enrichment. These methods are not pharmacogenetic per se, hence, these should not be interchangeably used with pharmacogenetics. Pharmacogenetics include examination of patient genotype that affect drug response, SNPs, inherited risk variations, polymorphisms, etc., which your study lacks such analysis. 6. As per the manuscript the LTRAs selection for this study are montelukast, zafirlukast, pranlukast and ibudilast. However, there is no data provided for ibudilast in the entire manuscript. I recommend to briefly explain why it was excluded from the study. 7. In order to make the paper more comprehensive, it is recommended to add a sentence to explain what are the other indications apart from asthma, specifically when such a definitive statement is mentioned that “the other indications bear a higher signal strength than asthma” (Ref. line 239). 8. The sentence” …. which offers substantial backing for clinical medication choices” seems vague and informal. Therefore, I suggest paraphrasing it to for instance, “…. Which may inform clinical decision-makers and safety-efficacy assessment for LTRAs therapy.” (Ref. line 433). 9. There are some discrepancies/inconsistencies in the manuscript. a) Line 192, the authors mentioned 949 cases involved montelukast, but later in line 206, it is mentioned “among 415 cases of montelukast”. Is his number a subset from other database or the authors intention is “Among 949 montelukast cases, 415 cases were observed with severe clinical outcomes.” Please clarify these statistics. b) Some parts in Table 3 represents redundancy. The digits for prednisone in “Concomitant drugs” section is repeated for fluticasone in the “Removal of cases with concomitant drugs” section. I advise to re-check calculations for the fluticasone and prednisone and correct the numbers. c) In the Results section (3.3 TTO), the authors mentioned that the median TTO of EGPA associated with montelukast was 244 days, but later in the discussion it was stated “median TTO for montelukast is 284 days” (Ref. line 377). Please clarify which one is a correct digit. d) Line 142, “A positive signal was defined as meeting all four methodological criteria”, however, you have mentioned five criteria. 10. There are some minor Typo/grammar errors. a) Line 175, “…… (DEGs) in the row dates of GSE…”. Replace date with data. b) Line 339, the sentence “…. increasing attention has been directed toward determining whether a genuine correlation between LTRAs and EGPA” seems missing a verb. Suggestion; “…. increasing attention has been directed toward determining whether a genuine correlation exist between LTRAs and EGPA.” c) Ensure consistent capitalization in the table captions. (Ref. line 222, (h)). d) Line 419, replace microenvironmental with microenvironment. e) Line 426, replace EGAF with EGPA. f) It is more appropriate to use comma between multiple factors rather than slash since throughout the manuscript, comma has been used. (Ref. line 148). ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Leukotriene receptor antagonists and eosinophilic granulomatosis with polyangiitis: a disproportionality analysis from FAERS, JADER, CVAR databases integrated with network pharmacology PONE-D-25-55259R1 Dear Dr Zhang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an email detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter ,and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be issued upon formal acceptance of your article. Please note that if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximise its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Vipula Rasanga Bataduwaarachchi, MD Academic Editor PLOS One |
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