Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 9, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-30641-->-->What do editors of medical journals think about opportunities and barriers to advancement in the publication of plain language summaries? A qualitative analysis-->-->PLOS ONE?> Dear Dr. Gainey, plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Further line by line comments should also be considered by the authors. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: I believe that this manuscript is worthy of publication, but may some amendment, particularly around providing adequate data on the characteristics of the participants to support interpretation of the data, and also a more through review of the literature surrounding the impact of PLSs than is currently provided. Please see my comments provided as an attachment. Reviewer #2: Congratulations to the authors for selecting to investigate such a relevant topic for the current times. It is a complex topic and involves a relatively unreachable participant group, this deserves acknowledgement. I believe the insights from this paper will be a fantastic starting point to dig deeper into systemic challenges that plague the publishing industry, when it comes to offering PLSs. Here are my recommendations. Introduction: Well-written in the context of the current scope of the study. The only suggestion I would have is to assess whether this scoping review can complete the landscape sweep the authors aim to achieve. doi: 10.1007/s40271-024-00700-y Methods: I do have a few major questions on this section. Defining criteria for applying the concept of information power: study aim, sample specificity, established theory, quality of dialogue, analysis strategy - Do the authors feel that the sample specificity was sufficiently narrow to support using information power rather than saturation? - Phenomenological analysis or reflexive thematic analysis involves exploration of lived experiences, which is rightly adopted by the authors. However, that doesn't offer the established theory for analysis, that the authors mention. It would be important to understand the rationale for this unique approach. Data analysis: - Was any software such as MaxQDA used? - Was a coding tree developed and used for cross transcript analyses? - How were disagreements resolved? Also, I'd recommend using the COREQ COREQ (COnsolidated criteria for REporting Qualitative research) checklist to make the reporting more robust. Perhaps I missed this but what was KMcC's role in this whole interview and coding process? I'm being mindful of the contributions that qualify for authorship per ICMJE criteria. Results: Very well written and embeds the quotes from the participants effectively to support the insights drawn. Minor: - 11 to 9 is perhaps not majority for males? - Was any data collected to understand the exposure of participants to specifically PLS-related decision-making? - As some participants represented more than one entity, does this make it challenging to analyze their input, as to whether their approach and experiences varied across the journals? For the thematic analysis reporting, it would be even more impactful if the participants are labeled by which group they're representing, editors or publishers and, whether their journal publishes PLSs. Curious as to whether these topics came up during to discussions: - any experiences shared about this perceived "pain" of developing PLSs vs other formats such as visual abstracts? - whether they worry about an imbalance b/w industry-funded vs academic research PLSs? - making available or the utility of already available PLS author guides? - about some publishers developing PLSs themselves? - how to ensure that PLSs maintain a fair and balanced narrative? - how to make PLSs more searchable and accessible? Consumers: Technically an apt term, but in the context of PLSs as these could be patients, general public, etc, could there be a different term such as intended audience, end-user? Discussion: Overall, this section can be improved. There is a wealth of insights in the Results section, which deserve more contextualization, to highlight the novelty of this research. For instance, the potential contradiction b/w editors of journals which offer PLSs vs those which don't. This is perhaps even more relevant in the context of perceived barriers. I also wonder whether the study can be labelled as comprehensive, given the qualitative nature and typical lack of generalizability that comes with it. Detailed for sure, high value no doubt. Restrictions around language (English only) and no specific consideration to include journals which publicize themselves as patient experience or participatory science journals - both are easy-to-identify limitations. The implications should be discussed under Discussions given that one of the main aims of PLSs is accessibility and inclusiveness. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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PONE-D-25-30641R1-->-->What do editors of medical journals think about opportunities and barriers to advancement in the publication of plain language summaries? A qualitative analysis-->-->PLOS One?> Dear Dr. Gainey, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 08 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. 2. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: I appreciate the Authors making the effort to incorporate a large number of changes. While I don't think that the additional information requested would be sufficient to allow the potential identification of the interviewees, I respect that the Authors are in the best position to make that judgement and how the manuscript is presented is their prerogative. Therefore, I look forward to seeing this published in due course. Reviewer #3: Thank you for the detailed revisions and point-by-point responses. Overall, I think you have addressed the key concerns from the previous round. In particular, you clarified the heterogeneity of what can be considered a PLS and added text acknowledging non-text formats, which better aligns the scope and findings. You also strengthened methodological transparency by explicitly stating the English-language eligibility criterion, and improved interpretability of participant characteristics by adding frequencies/percentages and correcting presentation issues. The addition of a new table that captures whether PLSs are published or mandatory also responds well to prior suggestions. Lastly, the conflict of interest section appears to have been revised to reflect the requested clarity in disclosure. Reviewer #4: The comments were attached as a word document with tracked changes. Also, a critical appraisal checklist for qualitative studies was used as a tool during the review. All pervious comments to the authors were addressed except one. It was added as a comment at the end of the manuscript file just before the references heading. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Blair Hesp Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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