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| Original SubmissionDecember 11, 2025 |
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** Reviewer #1: The authors investigated whether thromboelastography (TEG) can help predict venous thrombosis in patients with traumatic brain injury. While the limited sample size restricts the strength of the conclusions, the manuscript provides a relatively detailed longitudinal description of TEG parameters. However, several key methodological details remain insufficiently described—most importantly, the definition of the primary outcome and the clinical protocols for thrombosis prevention, diagnosis, and treatment. My specific comments are as follows. Methods 1. The rationale for selecting the study period should be clarified, particularly the non-standard end date of February 2. 2. The rationale for including sleep disorders and mental disorders among the exclusion criteria is unclear. 3. Excluding patients who received anticoagulants affecting the coagulation system within 7 days post-injury may have excluded cases in which venous thrombosis developed early, and anticoagulation was initiated during that period. If so, this constitutes an important limitation that should be explicitly acknowledged. In addition, it should be made clear that the results and discussion primarily concern venous thrombosis confirmed after 7 days post-trauma. 4. Because coagulation markers can vary substantially with time after trauma, information on the interval from injury to hospital presentation should be provided. 5. The definition of the primary outcome is unclear. The authors should specify how venous thrombosis was diagnosed, including the diagnostic modality and whether imaging was performed systematically or only when clinically suspected. If a standardized surveillance protocol was used, it should be described. 6. For patients in the thrombosis group, the timing of thrombosis diagnosis should be reported. Interpretation differs significantly depending on whether laboratory/TEG values were obtained before or after thrombosis onset. 7. Given the availability of clinical practice guidelines for the prevention of venous thromboembolism, it is necessary to describe the specific preventive measures implemented in this study. Results 8. For Tables 1–3, the 95% confidence intervals should be reported in addition to the p-values. 9. For “The coagulation status was categorized into normal, hypercoagulable, and hypocoagulable states.” (Page 12, lines 211-213), definitions for these three categories should be provided in the Methods section. 10. Since K-time is described in the Methods section, corresponding results for K-time should also be presented, or the reason for omission should be stated. 11. With this sample size and number of outcome events, including seven predictors in a multivariable logistic regression model may exceed commonly recommended events-per-variable thresholds. 12. The Methods section does not describe the methods used for correlation analysis. Furthermore, it is unclear whether this was performed in all patients without stratification. 13. Table 5 reports p-values only as thresholds (e.g., p > 0.05) rather than as exact values. Discussion 14. "In our cohort, the thrombosis group exhibited significantly elevated PT and D-D levels compared to the non-thrombosis group. This pattern suggests substantial consumption of coagulation factors and rapid fibrin formation and turnover, consistent with systemic activation of the coagulation cascade following brain injury." (Page 20, lines 306-309) Given this interpretation, which may suggest a DIC-like pathophysiology, the finding of elevated fibrinogen appears atypical. Further discussion is needed to address this apparent inconsistency. 15. The conclusion states that PT and D-dimer are practical and effective tools for predicting venous thrombosis risk. However, the between-group difference in PT appears to be approximately 1 second, with both values close to the normal range. The clinical application of these findings should be clarified. 16. The reference list appears to require substantial revision. Reviewer #2: This study examines whether DVT risk can be predicted in patients with head trauma using conventional coagulation parameters and TEG parameters. This is a very interesting, but also very challenging, study. The coagulation parameters used in this study dynamically change over time in patients with head trauma. Furthermore, different patterns are observed depending on the severity of the head injury. Furthermore, thrombus formation, including DVT, affects coagulation parameters. Given the complex interplay of these factors, perhaps a more refined analysis method is needed. 1. When was the DVT diagnosis made? Wouldn't the timing of thrombus formation affect coagulation parameters differently? This factor was not included. 2. Pathological conditions vary considerably depending on the severity of head trauma. Perhaps stratified analysis taking this into account is necessary? Reviewer #3: 1. Sample Size and Statistical Power The final analysis includes a relatively small cohort (n = 71), with only 30 thrombosis events. This raises concerns regarding statistical power, particularly for multivariate logistic regression analyses involving multiple covariates. The possibility of model overfitting cannot be excluded, and a formal power calculation is not provided. The authors should acknowledge this limitation more explicitly and interpret regression findings cautiously. 2. Retrospective, Single-Center Design The retrospective single-center nature of the study introduces potential selection bias and limits external validity. Institutional practices related to thromboprophylaxis, imaging frequency, and ICU management may influence both coagulation parameters and thrombosis rates. This limitation should be emphasized in the Discussion. 3. Lack of Standardization of Thromboprophylaxis The manuscript does not clearly describe the timing, type, or consistency of pharmacological thromboprophylaxis across patients. Given the strong influence of anticoagulation on both conventional coagulation tests and TEG parameters, this represents a significant confounder. Clarification is required, or this should be addressed as a major limitation. 4. Potential Detection Bias for DVT DVT diagnosis was based on Doppler ultrasound and pulmonary angiography; however, the frequency and indications for screening are not specified. Patients with more severe TBI or prolonged immobilization may have undergone more frequent imaging, potentially leading to detection bias. This issue should be discussed. 5. Interpretation of TEG Findings Although TEG parameters demonstrated a persistent hypercoagulable state in the thrombosis group, they did not retain independent predictive value in multivariate analysis. This negative finding may be due to limited sample size rather than true lack of association. The conclusion regarding the limited predictive utility of TEG should therefore be tempered. 6. Incomplete Adjustment for Confounders Several known risk factors for venous thrombosis—including duration of immobilization, mechanical ventilation, central venous catheterization, transfusion requirements, and infection—were not included in regression models. Residual confounding may influence the reported associations. 7. Causality Cannot Be Established Given the observational design, causal relationships between coagulation parameters and thrombosis cannot be inferred. The Discussion occasionally implies mechanistic interpretation, which should be clearly framed as speculative. ________________________________________ 8. Clarification of TEG Methodology Only kaolin-activated TEG was used. The authors should acknowledge that this approach may not fully capture fibrinolytic activity or platelet inhibition pathways. 9. Timing of Coagulation Changes The predefined time points (24, 72, and 168 hours) may miss early or transient coagulation changes immediately post-injury. This limitation should be briefly mentioned. 10. Language and Grammar Minor grammatical inconsistencies and typographical errors are present throughout the manuscript and should be corrected during revision. 11. Figures and Tables Some tables are dense and may benefit from simplification or clearer labeling to improve readability. ________________________________________ ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Eiichi Suehiro Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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<p>The potential value of thromboelastography and conventional coagulation detection in guiding the management of venous thrombosis after traumatic brain injury PONE-D-25-62755R1 Dear Dr. Niu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Tatsuo Shimosawa, M.D., Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: I thank the authors for their careful and comprehensive responses. All of my concerns have been addressed. Reviewer #2: Thank you for resubmitting and your honest response to my comment. I think this paper will be useful to readers. Reviewer #3: The authors have responded thoroughly and professionally. Most issues are appropriately acknowledged, and limitations are clearly integrated into the manuscript. The tone is measured, and overinterpretation has largely been corrected. That said, several responses rely heavily on post-hoc framing rather than methodological mitigation, which should be noted. The authors have substantively engaged with my critiques, strengthened the manuscript’s methodological transparency, and appropriately tempered interpretation. Remaining limitations are largely intrinsic to the study design and are now clearly acknowledged. No major unresolved issues remain. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Eiichi Suehiro Reviewer #3: Yes: Dr. Ishwar Singh **********
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