Peer Review History
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Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. 11. If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This manuscript presents a well-conducted preclinical study investigating the effects of ACE-031, a soluble ActRIIB receptor, on muscle mass and function in the common marmoset, a non-human primate (NHP) model. The study is timely and addresses a critical gap in the field of myostatin/activin pathway inhibition, namely, the translation of promising murine data to a more clinically relevant primate model. The experimental design is robust, incorporating longitudinal body composition analysis, terminal morphometric assessment of muscle fibers, and functional ex vivo contractility measurements. The results clearly demonstrate that ACE-031 treatment increases lean mass, muscle fiber cross-sectional area, and muscle strength in marmosets. While the findings are positive and support the therapeutic potential of broad ActRIIB ligand inhibition, the manuscript has significant weaknesses in its statistical reporting, data interpretation, and discussion that must be addressed prior to publication. The study uses a control group of n=4 and a treatment group of n=8. There is no justification provided for this sample size, and no power calculation is reported. With such a small control group (n=4), the study is severely underpowered. This increases the risk of both Type I and Type II errors. The authors themselves note that one outlier in the control group (Marmoset "A") may have affected the group means and statistical outcomes. A small n amplifies the impact of such outliers. The abstract states, "Marmosets administered ACE-031 showed a significant increase in body weight and lean body mass from baseline, while no change was seen in the vehicle-treated controls." However, the statistical analysis in the results (Fig 1A, B) reports a main effect of time, but no main effect of treatment and no significant interaction for body weight. For lean mass, there is a significant interaction but no main effect of treatment. This indicates that while the ACE-031 group increased over its own baseline, the statistical comparison between the treatment and control groups over time is not robust. The phrasing in the abstract is therefore misleading and must be corrected to accurately reflect the statistical findings. The use of one-tailed t-tests is questionable and requires strong justification. One-tailed tests should only be used when there is a priori, directional hypothesis with no possibility of an effect in the opposite direction. While the hypothesis was for an increase, the use of one-tailed tests doubles the risk of a false positive. The journal's policy on this should be checked, and it is standard practice to use two-tailed tests unless there is an overwhelming justification otherwise. All analyses using one-tailed tests should be re-run with two-tailed tests, or a compelling justification must be provided. The discussion reads like a positive interpretation of the data without a balanced critical perspective. It fails to adequately address the central paradox of the ACE-031 clinical program: why did a drug that shows efficacy in NHPs (this study) and humans (increased lean mass) fail in Phase II trials for Duchenne Muscular Dystrophy (DMD) due to safety concerns (epistaxis, telangiectasias)? The discussion on fiber types is informative but could be more incisive. The authors conclude that the inherent metabolic profile is unaltered, which is a strength. However, they could more directly discuss the potential clinical implications of hypertrophy in both fiber types versus a selective effect. Reviewer #2: This paper studies the effects of ACE-031, a protein that blocks activin receptor type IIB ligands, on muscle growth and strength in common marmosets. The topic is important and relevant, especially for developing new treatments for muscle-wasting diseases. The study is well organized and the writing is clear. Using a non-human primate model makes the results more meaningful for human application. However, there are some problems with the experimental design, data analysis, and interpretation that should be fixed before the paper can be published. 1. The goal of testing ACE-031 in primates is reasonable, since mouse models don’t always match human biology. Still, the novelty is limited because ACE-031 and other ActRIIB blockers have been studied before. The authors should explain what new information this study adds. For example, what unique features of the marmoset model make these results important? 2. Only 12 animals were used (8 treated, 4 controls). This small sample size reduces the strength of the findings. Also, using one-tailed t-tests is not appropriate here, since the direction of effect was not fully predictable. Use two-tailed tests, include a power calculation, and explain how the small sample size might affect the results. 3. The results show increases in lean mass and body weight, but some effects were not significant when using two-way ANOVA. One animal in the control group gained a lot of weight, which likely affected group averages. Re-analyze the data with and without that animal and discuss how it changes the outcome. Show individual data points in the figures to make variability clear. 4. The study measured strength in the EDL muscle, but muscle growth was mainly shown in the biceps. This makes it hard to connect the structural and functional results. Explain why EDL was used instead of biceps, or include strength data from a muscle that also showed hypertrophy. 5. The study does not report much about safety. Since ACE-031 has been linked to bleeding problems in past human studies, this part is important. Include data or at least a summary on blood tests, organ changes, or any visible side effects. 6. The Discussion repeats a lot from previous studies and doesn’t say much about what these specific results mean. It would help to explain the possible biological reasons for the observed effects, such as which muscle pathways might be involved. Add more explanation about how ACE-031 might cause muscle growth and strength increases, and compare how this may differ from mice or humans. 7. Use consistent terms for “lean mass,” “muscle mass,” and “lean body mass.” 8. State if the data were tested for normality before using parametric tests. After these revisions, the study could make a good contribution to the field. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Dear Dr. Pistilli, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 09 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Keisuke Hitachi Academic Editor PLOS One Journal Requirements: 1. If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Additional Editor Comments: Thank you for addressing the comments. However, the reviewers have pointed out that several concerns remain. I also feel that the reviewers' comments are well-founded, so please address them appropriately. Please pay particular attention to the statistics and the differences in the analyzed muscles. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: Thank you for the revised manuscript and the detailed responses. The authors have made clear improvements, and many of the earlier concerns are now addressed. The paper reads better, the analyses are more transparent, and the Discussion has more depth. I appreciate the effort put into the revisions. Below are my updated comments. 1. Statistical clarity The authors corrected the statistical approach and re-ran the tests as two-tailed, which is appropriate. This fixes one of the main issues from the previous review. However, the interpretation of the mixed-model results is still a bit difficult for readers who are not familiar with these analyses. In the current form, the Results section may still leave some confusion. Add 1–2 short sentences explaining, in simple terms, what the significant Time × Treatment interaction means in practice (e.g., lean mass increased over time in the treated group but stayed stable in controls). This will make the results easier to understand. 2. Muscle function interpretation The additional explanation on force measurements is helpful. Still, there is a structural–functional gap: • hypertrophy was measured mainly in the biceps • force was measured in the EDL The authors justify this choice scientifically, but a brief reminder in the Discussion that systemic therapies may not produce identical effects in every muscle would help readers understand this limitation. 3. Some figure legends still have small grammatical issues and could be proofread once more. 4. Use consistent terminology for lean mass throughout the paper. 5. Ensure that all figure labels match the panels exactly. The manuscript is clearly improved. The authors addressed most of the earlier concerns in a meaningful way, and the scientific content is now stronger and more transparent. A few remaining issues relate to clarity and presentation rather than major flaws. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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ACE-031, a Soluble Activin Type IIB Receptor, Increases Muscle Mass and Strength in the Common Marmoset (Callithrix jacchus) PONE-D-25-54403R2 Dear Dr. Pistilli, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Keisuke Hitachi Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: I have reviewed the latest revised version of the manuscript as well as the authors’ detailed responses. The authors have addressed all previous comments thoroughly and thoughtfully. The manuscript is now clear, well organized, and scientifically sound. The statistical explanations have been clarified, the Discussion flows more naturally, terminology is consistent, and the figures and legends have been corrected. The additional notes regarding muscle selection for functional testing and the potential variability between muscles in systemic treatments are helpful and complete the interpretation. I do not see any remaining issues that require further revision. The study is well designed, the data are presented transparently, and the conclusions are supported by the results. The manuscript is suitable for publication in its current form. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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