Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 5, 2025 |
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This paper presents a valuable study evaluating the clinical and microstructural outcomes of vitrectomy for lamellar macular hole (LMH). The findings are significant as they highlight not only the improvement in visual acuity but also the time course of resolution of intraretinal cysts (Inner/Outer Cysts) and identify specific microstructural features—namely Epiretinal Proliferation (EP) and Ellipsoid Zone (EZ) disruption—as important prognostic factors. I believe this paper will be acceptable with a few more revisions. Major points To more clearly identify the true prognostic factors for visual outcome (e.g., final 6-month BCVA), please consider to perform univariate and multivariate regression analyses using the baseline (preoperative) characteristics (i.e. including BCVA, EZ status, EP status, and cyst status) as variables. It would be a great interest for the readers. If it is difficult to conduct in the study, please include the reasons for that in the limitation. It is unclear whether the inclusion of data points from Month 1 to Month 6 in Table 2 is necessary or informative, given the study's primary objective of identifying prognostic factors. Please consider to remove these data if it is unnecessary for authors' discussion and conclusions. Minor points The Results section appears to discuss subtypes or specific forms of LMH, yet the Methods section only states that diagnosis was 'based on OCT.' The criteria for distinguishing and classifying these specific LMH subtypes must be clearly defined in the Methodology. Similarly, the changes in OCT parameters, particularly those related to EP, EZ disruption and cyst, constitute a highly significant finding of this manuscript. Although image examples are provided in the Methods section, detailed descriptions of how these features were defined are lacking and should be included. It would be beneficial to include a more detailed description of the OCT imaging protocol. For instance, were these assessment based solely on a single B-scan slice through the macula, or were multiple slices or volume scans reviewed to determine the presence and extent of the pathology? The Statistical Analysis section should be expanded to include greater detail. While the results indicate comparisons across multiple time points, it is unclear whether the authors employed multiple comparison adjustments (e.g., Bonferroni or Holm's correction) when conducting comparisons between different time points (preoperative vs. 1 month, 1 month vs. 3 months, etc.). Clarification on the specific post-hoc tests used is necessary to ensure the validity of the reported p-values. "ERM-F0053zzz" should be typo in Table 1. The sample size (n) for each group in Table 2 must be clearly indicated. The 0.02 in the last line in Table 2 should be bold and with * because it is < 0.05. Reviewer #2: Goto et al. investigated changes in visual function and OCT parameters following vitrectomy for LMH. The Introduction is appropriate, and the Methods, Results, and Discussion are sufficiently described. The manuscript would become even stronger by addressing the following points: 1. Six eyes with glaucoma were included in the study. Please clarify whether these cases had no clinically significant visual field loss or optic nerve damage that could affect visual acuity. If eyes with advanced glaucoma were included, exclusion or subgroup analysis may be warranted, as glaucoma could confound postoperative visual outcomes. 2. In Table 2, it would be more informative to present the actual number of eyes with and without each OCT abnormality (e.g., inner/outer retinal cysts, EP, EZ disruption) at each time point. Providing case numbers in addition to percentages would enhance clarity and interpretability for readers. 3. Were there any differences in postoperative visual outcomes or OCT improvement between eyes that received air tamponade and those that did not? A brief subgroup comparison or statement confirming no meaningful difference would strengthen the clinical applicability of the findings. 4. Based on the present results, it may be helpful to discuss practical clinical indicators or decision-making points when considering surgery for LMH—such as preoperative BCVA, presence of EZ disruption or EP, progression of anatomical changes, or persistence of cystic alterations. Including such considerations in the Discussion would increase the manuscript’s clinical relevance. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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<p>Changes in visual acuity and retinal microstructures following vitrectomy for lamellar macular hole PONE-D-25-46076R1 Dear Dr. Kubota, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Tatsuya Inoue Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors have addressed all of my concerns and suggestions comprehensively. The revisions made have significantly improved the clarity and quality of the manuscript. I have no further comments and recommend the paper for publication. Reviewer #2: The authors have adequately responded to my comments, and I believe the manuscript has improved significantly and is now suitable for publication. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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