Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 5, 2025 |
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Additional Editor Comments : We now have two reviewers' reports. We cannot accept the paper in its current form but encourage you to revise the paper. Both reviewers mention that it is necessary to improve the literature review, and to present a better introductory section of GCC's specific contexts. We believe that the paper requires a careful round of revision, but the revision is doable. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** Reviewer #1: This paper studies how DCI influences expatriate work adjustment in GCC countries. The paper has a theoretical framework alongside a qualitative analysis. The paper studies an interesting question, but there is also huge room for improvement. I here suggest several thoughts: 1. This paper lacks serious engagement in GCC's specific context. I believe that both the authors and readers would agree that the labor markets in GCC countries are very different from those in other countries like the United States or Europe. While the authors are welcome to do a comparative analysis, it is extremely important to first describe how GCC's specific context presents particular interests to the general audience -- what can we learn from an analysis in GCC countries in the first place? 2. A particular feature of GCC HRM and difference between GCC HRM and HRM in other countries, in my opinion, is not diversity of different cultures; rather, it is how people -- workers, managers, consumers -- from the same culture have different behavioral responses to the inter-cultural interactions, local labor markets and businesses, etc. To me, this is something I can feel in GCC countries but is less studied in the prior literature; in other countries such as the United States, there are some previous findings but they are not as relevant as those in the GCC context, which I believe is quite unique. Can the authors shed light on this point and delve into it? For example, what if two expatriates with the same cultural (or demographic) background develop different paths of "cultural fit" in a GCC country? How does this phenomenon inform policymaking or HRM? Are there any convergence or divergence of "cultural fit" based on social network behaviors? Here are some papers the authors can take a look and consider -- they are not in the GCC context, and thus the authors may use their analysis to argue why the GCC context is particularly interesting. Segmented assimilation: Issues, controversies, and recent research on the new second generation - M Zhou - International migration review, 1997 The social context of assimilation: Testing implications of segmented assimilation theory - Y Xie, E Greenman - Social science research, 2011 Acculturational homophily - D Xu - Economics of Education Review, 2017 Understanding inclusion - KA Brix, OA Lee, SG Stalla - BioScience, 2022 Champions of Diversity Governance? City Approaches to Cultural Heterogeneity in Europe, Japan, and South Korea - B Peruzzi Castellani - 2025 - working paper 3. The authors should present a more comprehensive introduction to sample selection. For example, even to me it is not entirely straightforward why the authors choose tourism, healthcare, and higher education as the three sectors studied in the qualitative analysis. Is it possible to provide some descriptive statistics of the representativeness of these sectors, especially among the expatriates? This is important, because expatriates working in higher education are supposed to be very different from their counterparts in hospitality, no? Also, is it possible to visualize the fieldwork sites possibly at the city level, especially for large cities where interviewees are less likely to be identified? 4. The authors should present an introduction to fsQCA, both methodologically and conceptually. Reviewer #2: I was invited to review this paper. While this paper concerns an interesting research question, I have several serious concerns about the paper's methodological and writing issues, and I believe that this paper cannot be accepted until a round of careful revision. My specific comments: 1. Should introduce the economic and policy contexts of Gulf Cooperation Council countries. Readers outside of Middle East might not very little about this region and its labor market. 2. I am surprised to see a paper discussing "environment fit" and "cultural fit" does not review the literature on social networks. There are many previous studies of cultural and demographic social networks, and how these networks have similar and different features. I also suggest the authors of this paper conduct a thorough literature review on previous empirical studies of the relevant topics (e.g., social networks as mentioned above). Currently, most papers the authors cite are regarding the general theoretical framework. But this paper is not a theoretical one. 3. There are many writing issues. I am not talking about grammar -- although the authors of the paper should perhaps check this as well. But more seriously, the authors should focus on two types of revisions regarding writing issues: (1) the use of abbreviations -- it is fine to use "GCC" or "UAE", and perhaps DCI as well, but there are many abbreviations that are not even pre-defined in this paper, such as EWA and HRM; (2) from Section 5 (and actually as early as Section 4.5), the paper gradually turns to be a bullet-point-type presentation rather than an academic paper; see an example of Section 5.5 -- they are purely bullet points rather than a well-organized paragraph. 4. Since it is a qualitative paper, it would be great if the readers can see some records of actual conversations, interviews, etc. of the surveyed individuals. It is great to see some illustrative results and statistics, but it would be more interesting to see people's original words. 5. I would actually be hesitant to try to frame this paper as a "global HR" paper. It seems that Gulf Cooperation Council countries are very unique, so unless the authors want to conduct a comparative analysis -- which, by the way, is certainly a way to improve this paper -- the authors of the paper should engage more in describing why this paper's unique context is interesting and important to the world. It needs not to be generalized in the practice sense, although the findings of the paper might contribute to the theoretical side (such as the network literature suggested above). ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Digital Cultural Intelligence and Its Role in Enhancing Expatriate Work Adjustment: A Configurational Approach in Global Work Environments PONE-D-25-57282R1 Dear Dr. mahdy, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Dafeng Xu Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No ********** |
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