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Methodological Clarity and Reproducibility Issue: The methods section lacks clarity on the specific R scripts or packages used for data extraction, cleaning, and analysis (e.g., version numbers for openFDA API, R packages for BCPNN/EBGM computation). Revision Suggestion: Provide detailed methodological transparency by specifying the analytical workflow (R functions or packages), data filters applied, and thresholds for signal detection. This will enhance reproducibility and compliance with pharmacovigilance reporting standards such as the CIOMS VIII guidelines. 2. Lack of Validation Against Comparator Drugs or Negative Controls Issue: The study focuses solely on Fondaparinux without contextual comparison to similar anticoagulants (e.g., enoxaparin, dalteparin, rivaroxaban). This limits interpretability of the disproportionality signals. Revision Suggestion: Consider adding a sensitivity analysis or discussion comparing signal magnitude and pattern to a pharmacologically similar agent. This would strengthen claims about the distinct safety profile of Fondaparinux. 3. Overinterpretation of Signal Strength (Causality vs. Association) Issue: The discussion implies causal relationships (“Fondaparinux may induce HIT” or “should be included in the drug label”), which overstates the inferential capacity of FAERS data. Revision Suggestion: Revise such statements to emphasize signal detection and hypothesis generation, not causation. A clearer distinction between statistical signal and clinical causality is needed throughout the discussion and conclusion. 4. Limited Consideration of Reporting Bias and Confounding Issue: Although the paper mentions underreporting and bias briefly, it does not quantify or adjust for these biases. For instance, the large number of reports from consumers versus clinicians (45.91%) may distort clinical signal interpretation. Revision Suggestion: Expand the Limitations section to discuss confounding by indication, stimulated reporting (e.g., post-ACS approval in 2007), and missing denominator data. Where possible, suggest statistical corrections or triangulation with other data sources (e.g., VigiBase, EudraVigilance). 5. Data Presentation and Consistency Issues Issue: Figure 2 caption incorrectly refers to “Ambrisentan” instead of “Fondaparinux.” Inconsistent capitalization and redundant labeling also appear in tables and figures. Revision Suggestion: Conduct thorough proofreading to correct labeling errors and ensure consistency between text, tables, and figures (e.g., Table 2 SOC classification titles, Figure 3 panel descriptions). Ensure all figures are clearly linked to the text narrative and include legends that are self-explanatory. 6. Clinical Interpretation of Rare Events Issue: The discussion highlights rare events such as abnormal coagulation factor X concentration (n=3) and antiphospholipid syndrome (n=6) as potential novel signals but lacks adequate caution regarding the reliability of such small counts. Revision Suggestion: Temper conclusions on rare AEs and explicitly discuss false-positive risks due to low event frequency and multiple testing. Emphasize the exploratory nature and the need for prospective validation. 7. Incomplete Integration with Existing Literature and Regulatory Implications Issue: The discussion is largely descriptive and lacks engagement with contemporary pharmacovigilance literature or prior disproportionality analyses involving Fondaparinux or factor Xa inhibitors. Revision Suggestion: Strengthen the discussion by comparing current findings with existing post-marketing surveillance studies and FDA/EMA safety updates. Include references on recent data-mining frameworks or label-change precedents to contextualize clinical and regulatory implications. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This is a disproportionality analysis of the FAERS to identify potential safety signals of fondaparinux. The paper is clear and well-written. Please see below for a few suggestions. 1. The Abstract contains many abbreviations that are not defined (e.g., FAERS, ROR, PRR, BCPNN, EBGM). Ideally these should be defined with first use in both the Abstract and main text. 2. Figure 2 – The incorrect drug (ambrisentan) is listed in the figure title. Please ensure that the data apply to fondaparinux and not to ambrisentan. 3. Fondaparinux is capitalized throughout the manuscript. It should not be capitalized as it is a generic name. 4. Table 1 – For age, please specify what is being shown? Is it a mean or median? Is the range an IQR? Please also define “tto” and “ttoQ” in the table or table legend. 5. The authors write, “…most adverse events in both male and female patients occurred within the first month of treatment…” Would it be more accurate to say, “…within the first month of INITIATING treatment…”? 6. The authors write, “However, it remains necessary to continue safety monitoring throughout the entire treatment period and during the extended follow -up phase, potentially up to one year after drug discontinuation.” I disagree with this sentence. As one would expect, the authors identified bleeding as the main toxicity of fondaparinux. The half-life of fondaparinux is about 18 hours. Thus it is unrealistic to think that fondaparinux could contribute to bleeding more than a few days after stopping. I cannot think of any toxicities, identified by the authors, that could be expected to occur as a result of fondarinux months after it was stopped. 7. It is remarkable that AE reporting for fondaparinux has significantly decreased over the last several years. It would be interesting if the authors speculated as to why this might be. Is it because the drug is no longer new and there is thus less incentive to report adverse effects? Or could it be because it is used far less than it once was, possibly due to increased use of direct oral anticoagulants. 8. It is worth noting that hematologists do not recognize a single disorder called “thrombosis and thrombocytopenia syndrome”. Rather, this is a group of disorders associated with both thrombosis and thrombocytopenia including but not limited to heparin-induced thrombocytopenia, other PF4 disorders such as vaccine-induced thrombotic thrombocytopenia, antiphospholipid syndrome, disseminated intravascular coagulation, and thrombotic thrombocytopenic purpura. Reviewer #2: The study addresses an important pharmacovigilance question on the safety profile of fondaparinux using FAERS data and multiple disproportionality algorithms (ROR, PRR, BCPNN, EBGM). The dataset is large, spanning 10 years, and the analysis identifies both known and novel safety signals. However, there are significant methodological, interpretational, and presentation issues that limit the scientific rigor and impact. 1. Title of the study should be revised. 2. Introduction is a bit short and avoid redundancy, revise accordingly 3. The manuscript often implies causal links, but FAERS can only generate signals, not establish causality. Stronger disclaimers are needed throughout, revise accordingly for better clarity and impact 4. FAERS reports are prone to underreporting, duplication, missing covariates, and confounding. Although limitations are mentioned, their implications for interpretation are underplayed. Discussion all the issues accordingly throughout the revised manuscript. 5. Cite reference for FAERS in method part. 6. Also cite relevant references in the method part i.e. Medex_UIMA_1.8.3 system, Preferred Terms, (PTs) and System Organ Classes (SOCs) from MedDRA, Reporting Odds Ratio (ROR), Proportional Reporting Ratio (PRR), Bayesian Confidence Propagation Neural Network (BCPNN), and Empirical Bayesian Geometric Mean (EBGM) (20-23) 7. The chosen thresholds for disproportionality signals are not fully justified or compared with established best practices. Adjustments for multiple testing are not discussed. 8. Without exposure data (number of patients on fondaparinux), the relative risk cannot be estimated. This limitation should be emphasized more. This issue may cause negative impact on the generalizability of results. 9. Some signals are based on extremely few cases (e.g., abnormal factor X concentration, n=3 ), yet interpreted as meaningful. Such findings lack statistical power and clinical reliability. 10. While interesting, stratified results (age, gender, onset) may reflect reporting bias rather than true pharmacological effects. This caveat is insufficiently acknowledged. 11. The discussion part does not adequately distinguish between well-established adverse events (e.g., bleeding, hematoma) and weak, hypothesis-generating signals. 12. Several figures are descriptive but not critically analyzed. For example, time-to-onset curves are shown but not contextualized clinically. 13. Captions and legends of figures and tables should be standalone and self-explanatory, revise accordingly. 14. Table formatting is not good for publication, revise for better clarity, readership and impact. 15. Claims about “new” adverse events would benefit from a systematic side-by-side comparison with FDA/EMA product labelling. 16. Statements such as recommending monitoring of anti-PF4 antibodies and eosinophils are premature, given the weak evidence base. This is overinterpretation. Revise accordingly. 17. The dataset is dominated by US and European cases, with minimal Asian data . This limitation is noted but should be emphasized earlier. 18. The conclusion suggests changes to labeling and practice, but the evidence presented does not justify such strong recommendations. 19. Several grammatical issues and long sentences reduce readability. 20. The terminology “Adverse drug events” vs. “adverse drug reactions” are used interchangeably—should be standardized. 21. About 30% of reports lacked outcome data , but this important limitation is buried rather than highlighted. 22. Ethical approval required or provide a statement clarifying that ethical approval was not applicable. Reviewer #3: Hematoma/hemorrhage/hematoma are expected in surgical patients receiving anticoagulants. The FAERS analysis must try to separate background risk (e.g., post-operative bleeding) from drug-specific signal. At minimum, report how many bleeding/hematoma reports included concomitant heparin/LMWH or warfarin or antiplatelet agents. How many HIT-like and TTS reports had recent/ concurrent heparin exposure? Provide stratified results. For the HIT-like signals and thrombosis-with-thrombocytopenia, present how many reports had recent heparin exposure or concurrent heparin/LMWH. Without this, attributing HIT to fondaparinux is prematureWhile the study identifies specific adverse events, the small number of reports for certain signals (e.g., abnormal concentrations of coagulation factor X) raises concerns regarding the statistical power and clinical significance of these findings. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Dr Shabana Ali ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/ . PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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Dear Dr. Bian, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 29 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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