Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 16, 2025 |
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Review Comments The manuscript " Choosing the Best Route: Comparative Optimization of Wheat Transformation Methods for Improving Yield by Targeting TaARE1-D with CRISPR/Cas9" by Tek et al. is a good protocol optimisation of genome editing in wheat. This research article provides importance of transformation tissues for genome editing efficiencies. This manuscript is of interest to the crop biology researchers, as well as different biology researchers and I expect that the article will be well-cited, but it lacks presentation. I have the following comments to consider. 1. Authors provide high resolution figures and graphs. Graphs should have data points 2. Authors should provide all the raw data in the supplementary files and add labels in the tables. 3. Figure and table legends should include all the details (biological, technical ,statistical, etc) parameters. 4. Authors standardize all the materials and methods or they have taken from any literature. If taken, cite all the articles in the text. 5. Authors should add scale bar in all the images. 6. Wheat is polyploidy species, So authors should provide the genotypic data of all the generations till the generation of phenotype measured in a tabulated manner for better understanding of homozygous and hemizygous mutants of the TaARE1-D, and how they have selected the knockout mutant plants without marker. Reviewer #2: Authors presented a comparative optimization of three wheat transformation methods: immature embryo, callus-derived, and in planta transformation to improve efficiency and reduce regeneration time for CRISPR/Cas9-based genome editing. The study is well-structured, and the authors have attempted to address a key limitation in wheat breeding and gene editing, namely, low transformation efficiency. The experimental design is comprehensive, and the results are promising, demonstrating substantial improvement in transformation efficiency and successful validation using TaARE1-D knockout. However, there are several points that need clarification, additional validation, and more critical discussion before the manuscript can be considered for publication. 1. The study evaluates transformation efficiency using only a single wheat genotype (cv. Kayra). Given that wheat transformation is highly genotype-dependent, the applicability of the optimized protocols across diverse cultivars remains uncertain. The authors should acknowledge this limitation more clearly in the Discussion and, if possible, provide preliminary data indicating whether similar improvements can be expected in other genotypes. 2. There is no molecular confirmation for example, sequencing of edited loci or off-target analysis for the CRISPR-induced mutations. PCR absence alone is not a reliable indicator of editing. 3. Are the authors sure about the heritability and stability of the edited traits across T1 or T2 generations? This information is essential to confirm stable transmission of edits. 4. It would be nice to have a summary table comparing different aspects like time, cost, efficiency, genotype dependence. 5. The in planta transformation method involves directly injecting Agrobacterium carrying the CRISPR/Cas9 construct into young seedlings (usually the apical meristem). This approach is appealing because it avoids tissue culture, but it is also less predictable. The in planta transformation method, while faster, shows notably lower efficiency and lacks clarity on whether transformation occurred in somatic or germline cells. This distinction is critical, as somatic edits may not be heritable. The authors should provide evidence of edit transmission to progeny (sequencing data). 6. Clearly state limitations and future applications, such as use in elite cultivars or integration into breeding programs. 7. It is very important to include the details on plant growth conditions during regeneration e.g., light intensity, humidity. 8. L127-128: Excess bacterial suspension was removed by blotting 128 on sterile filter paper (Supplementary Figure 3). This part refers to Sup. Fig. 3 to show filter paper blotting of excess bacteria, whereas Sup. Fig. 3 is about another thing, it is a mixture of photos both for immature and mature embryos transformation (no pictures of filter paper are seen here). It is better to remove this reference to sup. fig? It looks so confusing at this part of the paper. 9. This section of the paper "Transformation of Callus derived from Mature Embryos and Regeneration" is represented in figure 2 of the paper (not supplementary), but it is not mentioned in the text that is figure 2. Also, figure 2 starts with transformed callus going to regeneration and later stages. It is better to move mature seeds callus induction from supplementary to here to show the complete process. Also, this way that Sup. fig. 3 will not be a mixture of two immature and mature. 10. L148-150: “Embryos were 149 incubated for 10, 15, or 20 minutes, with tubes inverted three to four times every five minutes to 150 ensure uniform exposure (Supplementary Figure 3)”. Sup. fig. 3 only a&b are about this process. It is better to include it in figure 1, this immature embryo transformation part is shown in figure 1 of the paper but it doesn't state so. Direction to the figure is better to put as a whole to a process or step by step (1a, 1b, etc), but not dividing it into two, one in main figure, one in supplementary figure, and the sentence it is attached to "inverted tubes 3-4 times" is not actually shown on photos. 11. L198-199: “Transformation efficiency was assessed based on the survival of 199 explants following callus formation and selection with 15 mg/L hygromycin (Figure 1c).” This part is about comparison of different parameters (OD, AS concentration) but mentions Figure 1c, which is just a picture of one plate. I think this part of the results is better represented in supplementary table 2, it is worth referring to it, not figure 1c. 12. L208: Legend of Figure 1 is incomplete 13. Supplementary figure 3 is a mixture of immature embryo process (a&b) and mature embryo callus induction (c-e). It is better to either separate it into two different figures, one for the immature, another for the mature. Or include them into the main figures of the paper. 14. The discussion needs a more critical comparison with previous wheat transformation studies (e.g., Hayta et al., 2019; Ye et al., 2023). 15. In discussion, the authors should address genotype dependence, the experiments were conducted using only cv. Kayra, which is the limitation. The manuscript presents a potentially impactful methodological advance in wheat transformation. However, it requires additional experimental evidence (especially molecular validation of edits especially for in planta transformation method and broader discussion) to substantiate its claims. Addressing the above issues would considerably enhance the scientific robustness and clarity of the study. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Urooj Fatima ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Dear Dr. FIDAN, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Thank you for revising the manuscript, however reviewer 1 has a concern regarding the selection. Please address that and submit the revised version. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 20 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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