Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 26, 2025 |
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: 1. Technical quality and data support for conclusions The manuscript is well-structured and follows standard scientific reporting. The analysis is based on nationally representative KDHS 2022 data with 819 children, and the main findings (11.03% prevalence of underweight; significant predictors being younger maternal age 15–17 years and older child age) are consistent with the evidence. The conclusions are clearly supported by the data. 2. Statistical analysis The statistical procedures were appropriately applied using Stata 17 with survey weights and complex design adjustments. Bivariate and multivariable logistic regression models were presented with ORs, AORs, and 95% CIs. Multicollinearity was checked (mean VIF 1.50), ensuring model validity. The analysis is rigorous overall, with only minor inconsistencies in table formatting. 3. Data availability The data are publicly accessible through the DHS Program, and key results are transparently presented in detailed tables. Although no supplementary files with raw outputs are provided, the study meets journal standards for data transparency and reproducibility. 4. Language and presentation The manuscript is written in clear academic English and adheres to STROBE guidelines. It is easy to follow, though minor typographical errors are present and could be corrected with light proofreading. Overall, the presentation is sound and meets international publication standards. Reviewer #2: This study examined the prevalence and factors associated with underweight among Kenyan children under five years of age born to adolescent mothers, using nationally representative data from the 2022 Kenya Demographic and Health Survey (KDHS). But unfortunately, the study did not follow the proper analysis guidelines. The methods section is confusing and incomplete. This manuscript needs more improvement and clear justification. My specific observations in below: Comment 1: In the abstract, the author mentioned, “This study examined the prevalence and factors associated with underweight”. I think, author should add “prevalence” in the title. Comment 2: The method section will be more understandable if the author creates a short flow chart for study design and data processing, including the inclusion and exclusion criteria, the number of weighted and unweighted observations, and missing values. It is already noticeable that the methods section didn’t specify the number of samples taken before and after weighting. Additionally, the number of households or cities or villages that were covered in the study isn’t mentioned. Comment 3: The author needs to use a reference to the prior study mentioned for using VIF, in lines 32-33 on page 6. Also mentioned “The mean VIF was calculated at 1.50.”, needs more explanation or no need to keep this line in this section. Comment 4: In page 6, line 36, “Variables with a p-value less than 0.2 were included in the multivariable analysis.” But why? This line needs justification. Comment 5: The use of percentages in the manuscript is inconsistent. The authors use single decimal digits in some places and two decimal places elsewhere. It should be made consistent. Comment 6: In Table 2, the value of N doesn’t sum up to 819 for all variables, such as mothers' education level and mothers' age, as N=820. Check all the frequencies and percentages of each table and fix the error in the manuscript carefully. Comment 7: In tables 3 and 4, the author didn’t mention the reference category for the response variable. Comment 8: Did the author consider sampling weight for modelling and other analyses? If not, please explain the reasons. I think it should be used in DHS-related nationwide survey research. Comment 9: Table 4 has the same COR values as Table 3; the author could present them in the same table. I cannot see any significance in Table 3 output, especially where this information also exists in Table 4. But, I wonder how the author could say the logistic regression is a bivariate analysis? I think authors should discuss the analysis plan with a professional statistician. Comment 10: Of all the independent variables there shows only two variables are significant! But why? Additionally, as you already revealed, 80% of the variables where not have any association between the outcome variable and the independent variable according to the chi-square test. So how could the author think about the significant influencing factor for the outcome variable? Need proper justification. Reviewer #3: Dear authors I have the following comments , I hope to be answered for improving this article The present title is “Factors associated with underweight among children under five born to adolescent mothers in Kenya: Evidence from the 2022 Kenya Demographic and Health Surve” Introduction 1. Shift reference no. (5) to the end of the sentence 2. Both types of references’ citation were used (Harvard and Vancouver styles) for the reference number (9,11). 3. What about the management guidelines for the treatment of cases of underweight , stunting , and wasting in Ghana. Methods 1. Add more details on sampling procedure “stratified, two-stage cluster sampling design” 2. What about the nutritional practices , feeding type, any supplementary foods that the children received 3. The criteria used for determining wealth index 4. I think the unmarried mother and cohabiting is the same status of the marital status , if not , please clarify. 5. Results 1. The results in the text , it is better to be highlighted in percentages only. 2. In line 56 , Put dash(-) between the two CI limits instead of comma [CI: 8.65% -13.97%] Discussion 1. This sentence “ sub-Saharan Africa continues to report over 100 births per 1,000 adolescent girls, with approximately 6.1 million births annually among those aged 15 to 19 years (10)”It was mentioned in introduction section. ********** what does this mean? ). 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Dear Dr. Dade, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 15 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Prevalence and factors associated with underweight among children under five born to adolescent mothers: Evidence from the 2022 Kenya Demographic and Health Survey PONE-D-25-46014R2 Dear Dr. Dade, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Md. Moyazzem Hossain, PhD Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: All comments have been correctly specified. According to my perspective, this paper is methodologically sound and publishable. Thanks ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #2: Yes: Moinur Rahman ********** |
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