Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 19, 2025 |
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If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Additional Editor Comments: Please revise according to the reviewers comments [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. Reviewer #1: Recommedation Accept From a statistical perspective this is very well written protocol. The protocol indicates (Page 8, lines 135-139) the use of (3 + 3) dose escalating design with two dose levels (Dose 1 and Dose 2. Thus provided the first three patients experience acceptable levels of dose limiting toxicity (DLT) on Dose 1, the next 3 patients will receive Dose 2. This is carefully set out in Figure 3. The protocol describes carefully (Page 13, lines 244-247) the sensible use of a Confidence Interval at the interpretation stage. I am not sure the P-value will be of much use, but this is a very trivial remark. Reviewer #2: The submitted protocol adheres to international standards for first-in-human studies and provides insight into testing a promising modern cell therapy. I have only a few minor recommendations. The introduction should explain how iPSC-iNKTs are an improvement over standard peripheral blood iNKTs and how donor variability is reduced. iPSCs come from a healthy donor, so the text should reference published data showing that standardized preparation consistently produces iPSC-iNKTs with a similar phenotype and function. It is unnecessary to list the names of commercial cell lines. Mentioning the broad effect and referencing the publication is sufficient. Within the protocol, I would appreciate a mention that cytokine release syndrome and tumor lysis syndrome are monitored. Although these reactions are not expected, they should be mentioned, along with the markers and how treatment is set up in the case of CRS. Feel free to mention that it is set up according to CAR-T therapy guidelines. The protocol contains references to tables that do not exist (e.g., Table 20). I believe these are typos in the protocol revisions, but I recommend checking them in future revisions. Overall, the protocol and the study are of high quality. Reviewer #3: Kurokawa et al. present a study investigating off-the-shelf iPSC-derived invariant NKT (iPSC- iNKT) cells in combination with α-galactosylceramide-pulsed autologous dendritic cells (DC/Gal). The study’s design is both innovative and timely, given the growing interest in off-the- shelf cellular therapies and the clinical application of iPSC-derived products. Its findings are expected to make a significant contribution to the field of cancer immunotherapy, with broad implications for the development of allogeneic or off-the-shelf cellular therapies, while also advancing the translation of iNKT cell–based therapies. At the same time, several aspects of the manuscript could be improved to enhance clarity and readability. Attached, I provide detailed suggestions to strengthen the presentation and ensure that the study’s rationale, methodology, and outcomes are communicated clearly and effectively. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Dear Dr. Shinichiro Motohashi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised by reviewer 3. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 22 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols . Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols . We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Maria de Fátima Matos Almeida Henriques de Macedo, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS One Journal Requirements: 1. If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. 2. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Please address comments done by reviewer 3. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. Reviewer #1: The authors have addressed my very trivial remark about the utility of the P-value in this context. I wish the authors well with this study. Reviewer #2: As part of the revision process, any shortcomings in the already high-quality work were addressed. I have no further comments regarding the work, and I am looking forward to see the results from clinical trial. Reviewer #3: COMMENTS TO THE AUTHORS (PONE-D-25-33703R1) Kurokawa et al. have addressed all the comments and revised their study protocol accordingly. We acknowledge and appreciate the authors’ efforts to incorporate the suggested revisions. The revised manuscript has improved notably in both clarity for readers and accuracy. We would suggest three additional final edits to ensure that all sections are sufficiently clear and detailed for readers to appreciate the quality and impact of this important study. 1) Lines 79-81. Please insert “that” after “responses”. The complete sentence will read as: "They can also promote broader antitumor immune responses that indirectly harm cancer cells by activating NK cells and cytotoxic T lymphocytes (CTLs) through release of interferon (IFN)-γ and other cytokines [12-14]" 2) Tables 1-2. We thank the authors for providing the rationale for the different methods and thresholds used to assess Mycoplasma and Endotoxin. This information may help readers appreciate the implications of generating and applying two distinct products produced under different conditions and in different facilities. We would suggest including this information in the manuscript as brief table footnotes. For example: [Table 2 footnote] "Mycoplasma testing methods are equivalent across products." [Table 1 and Table 2 footnote] "Endotoxin thresholds reflect the validated limit of detection at the manufacturing site." 3) Line 441-443. Please complete the sentence with a main clause. One suitable option is provided below: "Because the DC/Gal and iPSC-iNKT 442 cells are administered at one time, this trial will not assess the tolerability, safety, or efficacy of repeated dosing, restricting evaluation of long-term or repeated 443 combination therapy." With these final improvements, we recommend the manuscript for publication. ********** what does this mean? ). 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If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] To ensure your figures meet our technical requirements, please review our figure guidelines: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures You may also use PLOS’s free figure tool, NAAS, to help you prepare publication quality figures: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures#loc-tools-for-figure-preparation. NAAS will assess whether your figures meet our technical requirements by comparing each figure against our figure specifications.
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A Phase I clinical trial to evaluate the tolerability and safety of an allogeneic iPSC-derived iNKT cell and αGalCer-pulsed autologous DC combination therapy for patients with recurrent and advanced Head and Neck Cancer: A study protocol PONE-D-25-33703R2 Dear Dr. Shinichiro Motohashi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support . If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Maria de Fátima Matos Almeida Henriques de Macedo, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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