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| Original SubmissionSeptember 19, 2025 |
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Additional Editor Comments: Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. I also apologize for the tardiness in my response. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. As you can see from the reviewers comments, there are some concerns that hopefully you can address. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Overview This manuscript investigates the effects of a chemotherapeutic, docetaxel, in an electroconvulsive assay using the model organism C. elegans. Additionally, the authors identify two drugs that ameliorate the docetaxel effects – sildenafil citrate and resveramorph-3. Overall, the results appear convincing, although there are some concerns about experimental protocols and phrasing that need correcting. Comments Acute exposure. What is the final concentration of DMSO for the docetaxel and sildenafil citrate that the worm experiences? It is not clear from the methods whether an equivalent volume of DMSO is used in the controls. DMSO itself can have neuroprotective properties at low concentrations and needs to be included in your controls. Chronic exposure. With the chronic exposure experiments, however, you are dissolving solutions into your NGM plate. Therefore the chronic drug concentration experienced by worm will by reduced by a factor dependent on the volume of the plate. If your plate has 10 mls of NGM in it, the stated concentrations of docetaxel will be reduced by a factor of 10. And that assumes that the plate volume is standardised (is it?) and that the drug efficacy is not time-dependent (is it?). The authors need to clarify their experimental protocol and what the actual stated concentrations for the chronic experiments were. Additionally, the wording in Figure 2 implies that chronic treatment “increases severity of behaviours”. But the statistics appear to be done only against chronic treatment of M9. Comparing Figures 1 and 2 – the data look pretty similar, indicating a lack of chronic response. Although given the point above about the chronic concentrations, this experiment may simply be replicating the acute effects. Do the authors have any evidence for an increase in behavioural severity? Phrasing. The authors do not measure seizures or induction of seizures – they are specifically measuring time-to-recovery or lack of recovery – which is different. In a number of places the authors have misconstrued the experimental outcomes, which needs to be corrected. Specifically: • Line 140. A proconvulsant is an agent that initiates or lowers the threshold for seizures. The authors should either test for a proconvulsant effect (eg. Identify whether the voltage threshold for seizures is actually lowered) or reword for what is actually shown. • Line 176 states that “docetaxel models DIPN-seizure behaviour in the worm”. My understanding is that docetaxel is a proconvulsant and there isn’t evidence that it affects time-to-recovery from seizures. This statement needs to be supported or reworded. • Line 197 specifically states “docetaxel induces seizure-like behaviors in C. elegans”, which is not supported by the results and needs to be reworded. Minor comments • Methods line 94. The day after L4-stage worms would be Day 0 Adulthood (not Day 1). • The rationale for some experiments are not well explained. It isn’t clear to this reader why a neuroprotective effect of Viagra was expected. The authors should justify their choice of putative neuroprotective compounds. • Figure legends state that “different letters denote a statistically significant difference in the mean values between the Groups” – but then it isn’t explained what “a” and “b” (and later on “a/b”) actually represent. I assume “a” is not significant and “b” is? • Figure 2. It is unclear why a line for 0.01 mM docetaxel is included when that isn’t being tested chronically. • Figure 7. It isn’t completely clear here why 3.5 uM is being studied. Nor why it is listed as uM rather than mM (everywhere else in the manuscript). Reviewer #2: The authors use the C. elegans electroshock paradigm to model docetaxel-associated neurotoxicity and test two anticonvulsant candidates: sildenafil citrate (a PDE-5 inhibitor) and a novel bridged bicyclic compound, Resveramorph-3 (RVM-3). Acute and chronic docetaxel exposure prolong recovery from shock-induced convulsions and increase non-recovery (NR). Sildenafil and RVM-3 reduce seizure-like duration under several conditions. The manuscript is clearly written and addresses a clinically relevant problem (chemotherapy-related neurotoxicity) with a tractable invertebrate model. Major issues 1. The electroshock assay treats ~6 worms together per tube/shock. Report the number of independent tubes and independent experimental days per condition. 2. Acute test solutions contain 0.1% DMSO (drug dissolved in 1% DMSO then 1:10 in M9), but the stated acute control is M9 saline alone. Please include (and analyze against) an acute 0.1% DMSO vehicle control to match drug conditions; otherwise DMSO effects cannot be excluded. 3. Docetaxel is hydrophobic; “coating NGM plates with M9 containing docetaxel” raises concerns about uniformity and stability. Please specify: volumes applied per plate, drying time, storage/light protection, time from coating to use, and evidence the compound distributes/retains bioactivity on agar. Similarly, RVM-3 is said to be dissolved directly in M9—provide rationale/solubility data, stock concentration, purity, and quality control. These details are critical for reproducibility. 4. The recovery criterion (three sinusoidal waves) is clear, but please state whether scorers were blinded to condition and how worms/tubes were randomized across treatments and days. 5. You repeatedly link seizures to Docetaxel-Induced Peripheral Neuropathies (DIPNs). Seizures are central phenomena; while docetaxel-associated encephalopathy and seizures are reported, seizures are not typically considered a feature of peripheral neuropathy per se. Please reframe as docetaxel-associated neurotoxicity (which can include seizures) rather than “DIPN-related seizures,” unless you provide primary evidence/mechanism tying the peripheral pathology to seizure generation. 6. The Results text states that RVM-3 significantly reduced %NR with both 0.01 mM and 1 mM acute docetaxel, but the figure legend/statistics indicate significance only at 1 mM (0.01 mM + RVM-3 p≈0.21, n.s.). 7. You describe concentration dependence qualitatively. Please include dose–response curves with fitted models where possible (even exploratory), report EC50/IC50 or at least slope parameters, and show per-tube datapoints. Minor issues • Mechanistic claims: Tone down language implying mechanism (e.g., “RVM-3 potentially acts as an irreversible agonist by covalently binding…”) unless direct evidence is presented here. Likewise, sildenafil’s effects on K⁺ channels are likely indirect via cGMP/PKG; keep causal language cautious and clearly attributed to prior work. • Terminology consistency: Use “seizure-like behavior” throughout for C. elegans; avoid unqualified “seizures”. Ensure DTX not “DTC” (typo appears once in a legend) and standardize µM/mM spacing. • Citations: Consider citing C. elegans cGMP/PKG genetics (e.g., egl-4; endogenous pde genes), to support the proposed pathway testing in future work. Reviewer #3: The use of C. elegans to screen docetaxel effects is interesting and aids in addressing the effects of this chemotherapeutic agent and means of reducing the effects of seizures and altering the recovery time from a seizure by Resveramorph-3 and sildenafil citrate. One view by researchers, in general, is to show the effects of compounds on as many animal models as possible to examine various potential therapeutic medications as one can learn more about the mechanisms of actions including the potential side effects. This study is done well with very detailed explanations in the methodology. The supplemental data is detailed along with the statistical analysis performed. There are just a few suggestions for the authors which I fell will help a reader better understand overview of the study and why particular compounds are used. Minor suggestions: 1. Without having to read papers cited( 18-21 ) can the authors give a little bit of background in this manuscript why electroshock is a good model to induce seizures. 2. I am not sure of the logic to try Sildenafil citrate as compared to more specific seizure reducing medications like levetiracetam or the various other medications. The authors state Sildenafil citrate works in the C. elegans model to reduce the seizure induced by docetaxel. But does Sildenafil citrate reduce the induction of the electroshock itself ? So then the seizure is already dampened to reduce the effect of the electroshock but not necessarily the effect of docetaxel ? 3. In the Discussion it is stated that Docetaxel-Induced Peripheral Neuropathies (DIPNs) while will also cause seizures- related to humans. So, it is not known if Docetaxel induces seizures in C. elegans or did I miss something ? Or are the seizures only induced by electroshock in this model with ones exposed to Docetaxel? 4. It could strengthen the article by including some discussion about the potential side effects or toxicity of sildenafil citrate and Resveramorph-3 in C. elegans, since understanding any harmful or side effects is important when considering these compounds as treatments. ********** what does this mean? ). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Dear Dr. Gonzalez-Lerma, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. As you can see, one of the reviewers still have significant concerns with this manuscript. I hope it is something you can address in a timely manner. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 02 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org . When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Kind regards, Michael Massiah Academic Editor PLOS One Journal Requirements: If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors have addressed most of my comments; however, I still have a couple of major concerns that should be resolved before publication: Major Comments 1. That’s fine. 2. Essentially that is fine – and I am certainly not going to require you to redo your controls in light of the provided data. But I would suggest in future always doing your controls in the equivalent volume of solvent. I note in the figure provided that the mean is increasing in 0.1% DMSO (from ~35 to 45 sec) with fairly large error bars. And it may well be that the solvent is a contributing factor to the statistical effect seen in this manuscript. 3-4. I am still unclear on the final concentrations for the chronic exposure experiments and think this needs to be clarified explicitly in the text. From the revised wording, the drugs are dissolved in 1% DMSO and then diluted 1/10 in M9 (equivalent to the acute experiments). For the chronic experiments, this is further dissolved in 10 mls NGM (+ 2 mls solution = 12 mls total). The wording certainly implies that the final DMSO concentrations in the chronic experiments will not be 0.1% - they will be ~0.01%. And it should also be clarified that the final drug concentrations are taking the additional volumes into account as well. 5. This is worded a little better. However, the authors are still implying that “chronic treatment” is different from “acute treatment” by using the phrase “starting at lower concentrations – without overtly saying lower to what? Clearly that is meant to imply lower concentrations to the acute experiments in Figure 1. But there are no statistical comparisons between acute and chronic treatments – indeed the comparisons could not be direct. Your ANOVA in Figure 1 is using more conditions than the ANOVA in Figure 2 and may be affecting the significance. Additionally (see points 3-4 above), I am still unclear that the DMSO concentrations are equivalent for both acute and chronic treatments. I remain suspicious that there is no statistical (let alone biological) effect of chronic treatment in comparison to acute treatment. 6 - 9. That’s fine. 10. The line for acute 0.01 mM docetaxel in Figure 2 should be removed as it is meaningless in the context of the chronic experiment. And indeed the acute 0.01 mM docetaxel from Figure 1A is clearly under 60sec whereas the line in Figure 2A is over 60 sec – so I don’t know where this number is actually generated from? 11. That’s fine. Reviewer #2: The authors have substantially improved the methods transparency e.g. the number of tubes/condition and the blinding procedures, while also correcting results/legend inconsistency. ********** what does this mean? ). 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